ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15 - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
I had a feeling it was gonna be a puppy
At first I thought Zoya was pregnant but no
Im so happy you added an epilogue
Now giving you the chance to write more stories on AsYa

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for me n Sis.

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Hey Choco,


Finally I get a reason to visit here, warna you know na how it is now. I am super glad you decided to post an epilogue for this story. Though it had already ended on a happy note after heartbreaking silence & complications between AsYa, this fluffy, mushy part was like the icing on the cake. Something I can't resist at all & if its concerning My adorable AsYa, no chance then.



I loved the part. It was fabulous. You should stop worrying every time you have to post something cause no matter how long break you take or whatever topic you write, its always wonderful. Honestly.


Oh you know this soft, caring, loving side of Asad does weird things to my poor heart. Seriously, how can one man be hot, sexy, charming, loving and so damn adorable? Its just unfair!


You know it was so nice to see AsYa together n so in love with each other. It made me happy to see them getting their much deserved share of happiness n love & bit emotional too because it gave me a glimpse of how I always wanted to see AsYa after wedding but couldn't as things were ruined in QH. So I have you to thank you for this... Muahhh.



Its always lovely to see a romantic moment between AsYa but what made me really happy over here was the way Asad was expressing his emotions n his open affections for Zoe. I had always dreamt n wanted to see him like this, a Lion to the world but a softy to his love.

Well Zoe was being herself. Nautanki. Mr. Khan should have known better than to ignore her wish. She gets what she sets her mind to and this time was no different.

Wasnt it adorable to see Mr. Khan getting jealous over his Musibat magnet smiling at a puppy's pic when he was standing next to her probably with a pout. Aww i just wanted to pull his cheeks. Glad they resolved the small issue and went back to being themselves.

Dilshad's parts are always wonderful to read. She adds warmth and live to Khan villa no matter how short her role is. I love her.

Here are some of my favourite lines:

"I don't want to share you Zoya. You are mine, only mine".

"Aap bahut besharam hote jaa rahey hain. Ab aapki tameez and tehzeeb kahan gai. Mujhe toh bare bare lectures diye jaate they". "Bhala apni biwi se bhi koi tameez and tehzeeb se baat karta hai".

"Bas, yehi vajah hai, till now all your love was for me but as soon as I give in to your wish it will be divided between me and him. How can you do that Zoya? Ek toh it took us ages to get together and be where we are today and now in less than a year of the nikaah you want me to share your love with someone else. Nope, Nada, NOT happening".

I love your way of expressing your love for Pluto. I know it was hard for you to lose him as he was a part of family n he'l continue being one in your memories.

Ok i guess i should end my comment here warna its going to get longer than your update. Lol.

Thank you for the part n am looking forward to next fully faltu from you. Make it soon.

Love lots.. hamesha



Hey Nims. As usual one of the loveliest comments that I get and I always enjoy reading them too. Yes its all changed her and the reason to visit the forum is even less now. Miss those old daysnqhen not an hour used to pass without me checking here for the latest news and updates. But its OK. I think all good things come to an end and so did our beloved ASYA.


I love the way you specify your favorite parts ❤️. Yes Pluto will remain in my memories always, I still miss him so much 😭

A new fully faltu is on the way. Still trying to sort it out as have time constraint and don't want to start posting unless I have a good amount of chapters ready.


Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: Amin21

Adorable update yaar👏

enjoyed reading it
thanks for update and do write more about asya
hope to read your new works on asya
waiting


Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it 😊. Will try writing more as and when time permits.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Ending Dear👏😊

Glad dat u did not made Zoya cry in dis part😊
I thought Zoya is asking for a baby but it turned out to be a puppy😆
Their arguments were awesome😃



Thanks Juhi. Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Choco... 😊
It is soo good to see your name in my P.M inbox after soo long and iam happy you atleast decided writing something down..😛
This was a wonderful , adorable and a very well written part...👏 ⭐️
I hope your Dog is happy wherever he is...
And this was a very unique dedication by you and in a way by ASYA to your Dog...👏
ASYA and their bickering always a treat to remeber and read...😆
You know all this while i had something else in my mind...for what Zoya's wish...but then i was amused what it actually was..perfect😳
I really loved this part... 😃
I really want you to think about another story on ASYA whatever it may be SS OR FF...anything is good...😃
Untill next time...Continue soon..
Take care... 😊



Hey Mayur. Am so happy you liked this part too. Yes its been a long time but life has become sooo busy.

Aah naughty naughty mind 😉😆. Lol koi baat nahi that was the whole plan to make you guys think what it could be 😛


Will try writing more as and when time permits 😊
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Originally posted by: rajsmi

Very cute ending...wish they had this in the serial too esp since they mentioned puppies!

Love your style and would def read more Asya stories. I don't read any other pairs as they have not connected with me as Asya did! Thanks for the stories



Hey Smitha, am glad you liked this. Yes this could have been incorporated in the show especially after the mention of puppies. Thank you so much for all your appreciation it really means a lot. I too write only on ASYA as have connected only with them. Will write more as and when time permits 😊
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Originally posted by: cutie15

Awww yr that was so adorable nd so cute..
It was awesome..
thanks for giving the epilogue..:*
Nd ya pls do write on asya... plz plz..!! ;)



Thanks dear, glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Beautiful update!!! Zoya an her Drama! Asad Miyan and his rules!!! I love it!! But u promised Love happens epilogue to me and Chandni! It ok if u don't remember!!!😔



Hey sweetie, glad you liked this one. I haven't forgotten about that epilogue, I wrote this first as this was a very very high on emotions story and I felt that it needed some fluff. I will be writing an epilogue for that one too 👍🏼. But time lagega. Life is so so busy abhi

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