New story concept- FS: Ishq Kills-When Betrayal Leads To Darkness

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Story Concept: The story starts with Asad leaving to New York not getn affected by Zoya's tears. She tries to call him for 2 days but it comes switched off. Zoya is broken n she cud not handle another betrayal. She has lost all her trust in Asad n love. She leaves d house leaving a letter mentioning dat Asad left her n he never really loved her as he only loved n cared abt only himself along wid some other things. Dilshad who comes to visit Khan Villa her letter n is shocked. She tries to call Asad but d number comes available. Ayaan who has realized his mistake returns home n reunites wid Humeira promising never to leave her. He accepts Dilshad n starts loving her. All d members except Gaffur, Razia n Shirin tries to search Zoya but she is not found. Dilshad informs Anwar n Zeenat n they comes to Bhopal. Dilshad tells them everything 4m d time Zoya left KV after 1st nikaah failed attempt. Anwar n Zeenat r angry wid Asad n Ayaan n Shirin for trading Zoya. They threaten dat if sumthn happens to Zoya then they vl file police complaint. All get scared n keeps searching for Zoya.
In New York, Asad is not able to forget Zoya n others. Zoya does not goes 4m his mind. He decides to return to Bhopal n apologize to Zoya. He is sure dat Zoya vl apologize to him like always. Wen he returns, he is shocked to find Zoya missing 4m d time he left. Anwar n Zeenat slaps n beats him for spoiling Zoya's life n always taking her for granted. Asad aplogizes to them but they hates him along wid Dilshad.
Asad goes for a trip to Delhi n he finds Zoya in a car wid a random guy. He tries to follow d guy's car widout any success. He tells dis to others. After some investigation, they find dat Zoya works as a call girl who sleeps wid rich people for money. She is also an alcoholic and a drug addict. Dilshad recalls in d letter dat Zoya also wrote dat she has lost her faith in love n vl never be d same Zoya again as she has never got anything by being good n loving everyone. AnZee gets more angry at Asad. Asad once finds Zoya on a road n tells her to come back home n he loves her. Zoya refuses to come teln him she has lost her faith in love n only believes in lust. Asad tells her to stop selling her body. She tells him dat its who started it by trading her to Ayaan. Asad is shocked n ashamed. Zoya tells him to leave otherwise she vl kill herself. Once Dilshad n AnZee goes to d flat dat Zoya has rented. They r shocked to find Zoya lying unconscious on her couch in d hall wid some drugs by her side. She is taken to d hospital where she survives. AnZee then takes her to rehabilitation for her treatment. Asad tries to meet her but AnZee does not lets him n any other family members to come near Zoya. D doctors finds some knife marks on her body as if she cut herself. Asad once manages to meet Zoya in d rehab apologizing her but she tells him dat she vl never again come in his talks n he sud forget her as she has really turned into a shameless n characterless girl which he always accused her of. Asad tries to convince her but Zoya starts yelling. D nurses tells Asad to leave. Later, Zoya attempts suicide by hanging herself. She is saved by d nurses who informed AnZee dat Asad came to meet her. AnZee gets angry n warns Asad never to meet Zoya again. Zoya tells AnZee wat all Asad did to her 4m day 1 which makes them very angry. AnZee takes Zoya to their Bhopal home as they don't want her to be either in KV or SM. Dilshad supports AnZee n starts hating Asad. Other members too starts hating Asad. Asad lives alone in KV. Asad hates himself for being selfish and a jerk. He requests AnZee to give him a chance n let him help Zoya to get better. He promises them dat he vl never meet her again after she recovers. Will Anwar n Zeenat agree to Asad or not?


PS: This story is very different. I am always fed up of Zoya being shown as an extra nice and always forgiving Asad. This vl be a very shocking story of how betrayal can lead to darkness. This story is 5% inspired 4m dis 4th episode http://desi-room.com/media/video.php?id=1056798 of Ishq Kills dat used to air on Star Plus. Ishq Kills was a show by Vikram Bhatt which showed many different stories of dark side of love. If Asad can always be shown as jerk in many stories including raping, making her slave n torturing her then I hope u can accept dis story too. Even Ahil is accepted n loved after he slept wid many girls giving excuse dat he had a bad past. Then why can't Zoya turn bad? Zoya was betrayed again n again by Asad. There is a limit to everything n Asad crossed dat limit d day he traded her but Zoya forgave him. After so much, he still did not think abt her n left her cuz he wanted to feel better. In d show if Dilshad had not called him then he wud hv surely left her. Its not necessary dat women can never be affected so much. Dis episode of Ishq Kills was very touching where d wife always forgave her husband but wen it became too much she did sumthn she never imagined she wud do. Do watch it for urself. Ayaan's exit was forced due to his quitting so he comes back in dis story. So, should I continue dis story? I vl start it only in September.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept
Start writing soon
Can't wait for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Concept is a bit shocking.
Zoya turning dark & angry with asad is acceptable
But herself being a call girl for a jerk I just can't accept that. Can't see zoya like that.
Others I can understand. Her frustration to addict under drug & sucidal tendencies is also understandable. But call girl thing I can't see my princess like that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is interesting and shocking at the same time
but I can't accept that women will destroy herself for any guy, women should be strong or at leat she can get married to another guy or women 😆 , I'm open mind
No seriously, It will be I'm sure a good story and many will like it, but I can't accept any defeat even in love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its very interesting concept
but as long as it has a happy ending in the end please

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Concept is a bit shocking.

Zoya turning dark & angry with asad is acceptable
But herself being a call girl for a jerk I just can't accept that. Can't see zoya like that.
Others I can understand. Her frustration to addict under drug & sucidal tendencies is also understandable. But call girl thing I can't see my princess like that


I know dis is shocking but it happens in real life. U sud see d link of dat episode. Worse happens where people lose their innocence. D story is a test for Asad on how vl he react wid a sweet girl turning like dis dat also due to him. Dis time, Asad vl truly repent but Zoya n others vl just take it as his one of d false promises. Asad vl really see worse than wat he always declared Zoya to be. If Ahil can be accepted as a hero as if he is a mahaan insaan after even burning her dhaba n not regretting it a bit then Zoya is genuinely been affected a lot. There is a limit to everything. She lost all her hope. So, dis is a change. I hv randomly read some stories wid original story base where Asad is regressive but he sleeps wid women to overcome his sad emotions due to his past n he always chooses traditional women especially who covers her head but he always insults Zoya for her clothes. In many stories, Asad is shown as a jerk n wat not then dis is just for a change. Zoya is really broken beyond limit. She needs those 2 people d most who truly loves her dat is Anwar n Zeenat. Asad can't be forgiven easily dis time n has to impress AnZee dis time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Awesome concept

Start writing soon
Can't wait for it


Thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: radadolcevida

It is interesting and shocking at the same time

but I can't accept that women will destroy herself for any guy, women should be strong or at leat she can get married to another guy or women 😆 , I'm open mind
No seriously, It will be I'm sure a good story and many will like it, but I can't accept any defeat even in love


Zoya has been strong for more than a year. She is at her breaking point. If v see QH properly, v vl understand it. V know how Asad wud hv slapped her again if Haider did not came in d middle n threatened to divorce her just cuz she went against him. He never used his brain in d show. There r many stories shown like dis in Gumrah, Webbed, Ishq Kills n some other shows. Girls more nice n innocent than Zoya does horrible things. But here Zoya is not killing anyone. Zoya has lost trust in love so she can't trust any other guy after wat all Asad did to her 4m day 1. In short, Zoya is GUMRAHed.
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Originally posted by: princess101

its very interesting concept

but as long as it has a happy ending in the end please


There may be a happy ending but only if Asad truly regrets n vows never to repeat his mistake😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


I know dis is shocking but it happens in real life. U sud see d link of dat episode. Worse happens where people lose their innocence. D story is a test for Asad on how vl he react wid a sweet girl turning like dis dat also due to him. Dis time, Asad vl truly repent but Zoya n others vl just take it as his one of d false promises. Asad vl really see worse than wat he always declared Zoya to be. If Ahil can be accepted as a hero as if he is a mahaan insaan after even burning her dhaba n not regretting it a bit then Zoya is genuinely been affected a lot. There is a limit to everything. She lost all her hope. So, dis is a change. I hv randomly read some stories wid original story base where Asad is regressive but he sleeps wid women to overcome his sad emotions due to his past n he always chooses traditional women especially who covers her head but he always insults Zoya for her clothes. In many stories, Asad is shown as a jerk n wat not then dis is just for a change. Zoya is really broken beyond limit. She needs those 2 people d most who truly loves her dat is Anwar n Zeenat. Asad can't be forgiven easily dis time n has to impress AnZee dis time.

I agree with u, why the bad guy always finish with a simple and virgin girl ? many will say because he was good in heart. I know that many women can destroy themselves for love, unfortunately 😡 and your stories will be just a reflection of this but can you make him climb the Himalaya to understand the hurt ? 😆 Good luck for your stories, hope it will be a good ending

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