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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling bad for Zoya she has gone thru so much :(
and I guess Asad is having some feelings for her !!
Update sooon !!
and it was a nice one beautifully penned :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R


Hahaha.. ok.. If not you have the option of making it as 10 updates.. 😃😆



Lol

I'll make a deal I'll write the first five and u can write the last 5

Theek hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing and heartwarming...Zoya's suffered so much😭...this one is very different from your other works...I love such unique yet intriguing concepts😳...reminds me of another ss you wrote called "Lost souls"...I loved that one so much and I'm loving this one as much...update soon😃



Aah thank u so much am so grateful

Lots of love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Lol

I'll make a deal I'll write the first five and u can write the last 5

Theek hai 😆


Hahaha.. Good try.. 😛😆
Not working.. 😎

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Feeling bad for Zoya she has gone thru so much :(

and I guess Asad is having some feelings for her !!
Update sooon !!
and it was a nice one beautifully penned :D


Thank u Bubble 😊

Have started third part will update as soon as I finish it
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Posted: 11 years ago

When laid bare, Zoya's mental trauma is overwhelming, it seems Asad is her best method of treatment to recovery, I hope he takes her away from that facility, his care seems to prove more efficient and comforting.

The art session and the painting was agonizing. Well done on the descriptive writing, I felt the horror through Asad's eyes.


A truly heart-rendering chapter, look forward to the next one.


Despite Zoya's reaction, due credit to Aman and Sasha for ensuring she was fine in Asad's absents. It ultimately is his clinic and they maintained his standard of professionalism.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R


Hahaha.. Good try.. 😛😆
Not working.. 😎


😳

Koshish rahe gi little Baji
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


😳

Koshish rahe gi little Baji


Bring it on big baji..
Warning... I'm very stubborn too.. 😉😃
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

r unres

read all the 3 part of chapter 2 togather...
wow... she is still suffering... must be so bad that after so many days she is still in it...
but she has opened up to Asad... he is there for her...
update next part soon...
Eid Mubarak...hope you had a wonderful day...


Thank u so much sweetheart am glad u liked the second part although it was so long lol

We celebrated yesterday it's was nice, went to see mum and cousins...lots of nice food 😃
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R


Bring it on big baji..
Warning... I'm very stubborn too.. 😉😃


Kya baat hai

Open challenge

😆

Watch this space 😉

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