Th#3 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 6 to 9

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

fabulous...

luv it...

amazing...

beautifully written...

zoya spent time with asad...

asad is falling for zoya n getting jealous ...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

amazing part Bablu

Asad got up from his sleep when he got d news of Zoya's arrival

he asked d guard never 2 stop her again...cuz he is hone wali malkin soon🤣

Asad knew was hiding something but didn't forced 2 tell

both were playing scrabble...Asad lost 2 Zoya twice😆

they were fighting like kids🤣

than Asad saw Zoya in red dress & his dailogue

You look so hot in that red dress, if you wore that again then I am damn sure I will fcuk.🤣

Asad was teaching Zoya German

& than d fb...it was good

Zoya didn't studied after that incident...i hate talku😡

u stopped at cliffy

updt soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Awesome update 6
Asad dropped zoya at her home. He wanted to talk to her but no reasons left. He told her to attend party with him tomorrow. She wanted to make excuses but asad dismissed all. She was on shooting & met humeira. Both sisters were emotional. She can't speak to humeira as nobody knows it. Asad thought abt her & she thought abt him. She was upset & missing asad calls. She checked asad msg & go to meet him as he knew her very well.
Thanks for pm

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Nice update

Asad got wide awake when he her zoya at his door

She told the servant to get coffee and snack

He is so concern he keeps asking then she finally say

But she don't want to go further in to detail she just want him there.

A game of scrabble nice the word pro nice zoya 😆

Oh she is not TV in her sexy red dress

Wonder did asad repeat the exact same words he said b4 if she go and get them translate

Oh news abt a bf asad stay quiet but he is pissed he has no right the question

But she is waiting for u to question so she can assure u

Oh my baby fell asleep and she is so attracted to him

Y don't she think she deserve him

Another fb maybe will get my answer

Can't believe they pulled her out of school

So she don't have much education

Continue soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Nice update
Asad guard called him & told him abt zoya
He ordered that never stop zoya to come in
Asad wanted to know the reason of her arrival as he was concerned
Zoya repeated his words & he understood
FIFA final news was wonderful
News abt zoya made asad angry
He wanted to stop her to meet to Sunil
Zoya wanted to clear the news but didn't say
Hope both will realise their real feelings soon
Sorry for late comments as I was away
Hope u enjoyed ur vacations
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: BeYourself
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unres...

First of all... sorry for being so late to unres!!!

but today, i am very much determined that i will unres all my comments here in your story... 😳

so yeah... here it goes...my comment for Ch 5 😉😳

i always like the flashback scenes Bubba...
they increase my curiosity to know what exactly was wrong with Zoya's past...

Razia... i can't hate her more i guess... but, i my hatred for her is increasing in every chapter...😡😆

and Gafoor... such a spineless person he is!!!!
shame on him...

and Asad
he is just so lovable...
he doesn't let her be alone, yet respects her privacy...
such a gentleman he is!!!!

Awesome update Bubba 👏👏

going to read the next one now 😳

love you loads... ❤️🤗

Aww no need to sorry Ankie I understand u were busy 🤗

haha really u like the FB ??

and I am always nervous when I have to write it 😆

Thanks Ankie !!

I am glad that you r enjoying it 😳

haha u always love Asad even if he is not lovable 🤔😆

okie !!

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

It was an amazing chapter.

I really enjoyed reading it :)

Wow Zoe at door steps of asad :O

Asad sure has a naughty mind ;)

Haha he connected Zoe's compliment to his previous comment lol

Now what did she heard in the last.

Thanks 4 pm

Cont soon. Its 142 likes :)

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: BeYourself
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unres...

Another Awesome update Bubba...👏👏

i loved the car scene...
the way Asad leaned towards her and wiped away the ice cream from her lips... ☺️

and then...Humaira's sudden entry...

that scene was so so touching!!
i wonder what she has written in her notebook...

and She came to Asad's house at 11pm!!!!!!! 😲😲😆

now, that's what i call to be courageous!!! 😉

she isn't desperate... yet she is not shy either...

that's simply wonderful...

going to read Ch 7 now...😉

love you lots!!! ❤️🤗

I knew u all will love the car scene 🤔😆

Thanks !!

Glad that you liked it 😳

the notebook thing will come out sooon ,,

yeah she is just confident about whatever she does 😊

okie see u there 😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: BeYourself
check out page 53 before you reply to this comment...😳

Wonderful...Awesome...and definitely intriguing!!!!!

you are a promising writer when it comes to dark stories!!!! 👏👏

their game of scrabble was absolutely fantastic to read...

and the tv news!!! 😡
these reporters i tell you!!!! 😡

and this guy Sunil!! he smells fishy too...

let's see what you have in store for us!! 😉

and Zoya is definitely attracted towards him... no doubt about that...
and i am loving the growth in their relationship...

whatever it is, friendship or attraction...i am LOVING it!!!

waiting to read more...

you are just too successful in tickling my curiosity Bubba!!!
this story will be just another great piece of yours, like the Italy one..mark my words!! 😳

Love you darling!! ❤️🤗

Aww Ankie ur words really mean alot to me 😳🤗

haha these r the same reporters whose news we enjoy when it comes to our favorite stars 😆

LoL no Sunil is a poor fellow but yeah he will come to the picture for once I guess ,,

Aww thanks !!

I am glad that you r loving it 😃

haha I hope soo too but I am hell nervous for a few coming up scenes 🤓😆

Love you tooo ❤️

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: aniha20
Unres

It was beautiful update and loved it !!!

He is so confused why she is here yes he can..but she came to congratulate him 😆

loves the game in midnight..pantene pro v..poor asad had tough time.

Zoya red dress he cnt take eyes off..what if she wears that to party 😲

and the flashback scene is intresting

update soon..

Thanks Aniha 😳

I am glad that you r liking the story so far !!

haha yeah Zoya was pissing him off with her words 😆

LoL no she won't wear it to the party as stars don't like repeating dresses ,,

but yeah some other day maybe 😉

Will deffo update sooon !!