'Fighting the Turmoils' {{Short SaHil FF}}

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys, it has been a long time I came to this forum and even a long time that I have written anything.
now I am able to get back to the show because of SaHil, whom I like a lot
So after a long time or i should say after years I am writing something.
I am so nervous to post this, please give a honest review whether I should continue or not

Please give honest reviews only and please point out any mistake so I can improve because writing after years is making me so nervous, I think I have lost the touch.

thank you 😊

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Fighting the turmoils

Short FF on SaHil (may be of 5 parts only)
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She still cant believe that she has been proposed by none other than the jallad jinn. Looking into those raging eyes ... no this time it is not having that fire of hatred but their something different ... but what, she cant decipher. Now she finally blinked to get a reality check and to her horror or rather than it should be said as shock the jallad jinn is still standing in front of her.

Ok now she decided to speak up, so finally the chatter box opened her mouth, "ww..what is this?" taken aback by her response he thought, "what a dumb head she is, any normal girl would have asked what are you saying?' but this one is truly an idiot."

She again asked after getting no response from him, "what do you mean by this?"

He was expecting some shocked expression but not these stupid kind of, because Aahil Raza Ibrahim don't like nonsense and here in front of her the girl which he is getting attracted more and more, day by day is a complete package of this type.

With a little irritation he said, "do I have to translate you the meaning of will you marry me?', I thought you are that much educated Ms. Sanam Ahmad Khan.

Normally she would have spat back at him at his taunts but at the moment "THE" question has made her mind do circles. She cleared out her question stuttering a bit, "I mean to stay, so suddenly ...how..?" ...and Nida?"

Hearing this name made him angry but right now he controlled his anger, "she is a close chapter and everybody in this house know this, so why are you acting as if you don't know anything?"

She kept listening while reading his expressions, to know whether what he is saying is true or he is still hurt after being let down by her childhood friend.

He continued, "that girl can never be my wife, who does not obey my ammi, she does not have respect for my ammi so she does not have any place in this house"

She already knew this but the main question was why her? So she spoke her mind, "Why Me?"



aalima



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely...poor aahil..HV patience beta..she will agree...be a Lil calm...zzoya air asad ki beti hai...itni asani she thodi na milegi..dumbness virasat mein mili hai apney baap se
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why indeed!!


Oh I would love to hear his answer!!


You make me so hyper!! Am eagerly waiting for the next part!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!..please continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oops!


I had to delete the comment!! I accidentally posted it here!!


Heee!!

:)



Mwahhh!!!


Update already!!!


I'm waiting!!!


I wanna hear Aahil's answer to Sanam!!!!


Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you guys for the appreciation 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good story please pm me the updates! I hope you update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely 👏

Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ooh this is really FAB!! :))) Please continue soon :)) xoxoxo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wen r u gona update..cnt wait

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