SAHIL OS ... the connection part 4 update page 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
That was very interesting 👏

You should add another part to it ...
I hope that Sanam and Aahil end up together though. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Long time no update.. 😔
Update soon please 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
I know guys sorry for that ..actually cought up in some social stuff.. But I promise I ll be back soon.as plot is ready I just need to type it down..
Thank u for reminding me and appreciating my writing love ya all
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely LOVE THIS :)))) Please continue soon :))) Thank youuu :)) xoxoxo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Love that he confessed
Now hopefully show does that too
Great writing
Excited for next part !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
PLS make another part!!! its amazing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry guys ...i got late in update because of some social stuff..but now i am back and this time i will try to portray that how aahil and sanam come close and bonding between them. Please excuse me for spelling mistakes..

CHUNNI CHADAO function was at its pick. Everyone was so happy at times busy talking to each other. AAhil was standing near the JHula and was in a deep thought about his decision to marry nida while in the room sanam was crying and there was flood of tears in her eyes. Suddenly she heard sanam sanam FOM OUTSIDE. It was begum sahiba calling her, she promptly get up , wipe her tears , make her face proper and went outside.

Sanam: JI BEGUM SAHIBA ..AAPNE BULAYA..

Tanveer: haan Sanam kahan thi toom , humne sab ko tohfa diya hai tumhara baaki hai.. ye lo

She gifted Sanam a beautiful dupatta.. sanam was very happy and she says thank you to begum sahiba..

Suddenly Aasma came there and says :ARE BEGUM SAHIBA AAPNE SANAM KO DULHAN KI CHUNI ODHA DI HAI..

Everyone was shocked and tanveer smiled internally as she deliberately put the daupatta on sanam's head as she was thinking :NIDA MUJHSE ULJNE KA YEHI AANJAM HOTA HAI..AAJ MAIN TUMHARI CHUNI EK NAUKRANI KE SAR PE ODHAOONGI AND TUMHE TUMHARI AUKAAT DIKHAOONGI..

Nida was very angry as she does not like sanam from her first visit and she was feeling that aahil is giving her more importance than servant.

Begum sahiba: MUJHE MAAF KAR DO SANAM ..MUJHE PATA NAHI THA KI YEH DULHAN KA DUPATTA HAI ... KOI BAAT NAHI PAR TUM YEDUPATTA RAKH LO WAISE BHI NIDA KO DUPATTE KI KOI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI...

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED ON TANVEER'S STATEMENT.

Aahil: ammi aap ye kya bol rahi hai???

Tanveer: sach bol rahi hoon..aahil beta..kyunki ab tumhara nikah nida se nahi hoga...

Everyone was shocked to their death..nida was feeling dizzy as her plans go all wrong..

Tanveer: anwar yaahan aao...

Nida was shocked to hear that name and suddenly a man appeared from the front door with tanveer's bodyguards...

Tanveer: kyon nida tum to pahechanti hogi na ise...ki main pahchan karva doon...yeh hai anwar ansari aur ye jo aap ke samane khadi hai woh haI NIDA ANWAR ANSARI..yaane ki ye nida ka shohar hai...

Everyone was shocked to hear that but not sanam as she knows that nida is hiding something.

Aahil was also shocked to hear that. He went to Nida: kya yeh sach hai nida ?? bolo nida

Nida was shocked and could not speak and started baffling : woh aahil main woh main ..before anyone can understand tanveer came to nida and slap her tight on her face,, sanam aahil rehan everyone got shocked on tanveer;s such action: nida mere bte ko fasa ke sari jaydaad daulat lootne aayi thin a tum..yeh miya biwi ka ek hi kaam hai aise nawabo ko fasana aur for lootna.. waise bhi tumse to police hi niptegi...

Suddenly police enters and arrest nida and her husband...

Suddenly nida turned and says to aahil: mujhe pata hai kit um nikah kyon kar rahe the..woh will ki wajah se na... lekin aahil tumhe ek baat bata doon tum mujhse to bach gaye lekin yeh tumhari aami hi tumhe nahi chodegi...woh tumhare jaydad ke piche hai..

And hearing this aahil got so angry: TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI NIDA YE BOLNE KI...KHABARDAR JO TUMNE TUMHARI GANDI SUBAN SE MERI AAMI KA NAAM BHI LIYA TO..

POLICE : chalo abhi yahan se ...chalo

Police took them away...suddenly it was peace AFTER big tornado. Everyone standstill sometimes and silent ..after a while everyone went tom their room and all guests left... sanam and latif went to kitchen and aahil went to his room and tells everyone that he wants to be alone and not to disturb him...

Tanveer was sitting in her room and thinking now from where she will bring a girl that will marry aahil??? And what shell do for property?? As there are only 5 days left to aahil's birth day...

Here sanam and rehan were talking in the backyard...

Rehan: SANAM AAHILBHAI KE SAATH BAHUT BURA HUA..KISI KO NAHI PATA THA KE NIDA AISI NIKLEGI..AAHILBHAI POORE TOOT CHUKE HONGE...

Sanam was feeling good and she does not understand why?? Because she knows that aahil loves him but sometimes she does not consider herself to be his lifepartner as they were socially not equal...log kya kahenge? Duniya kya sochegi?? She used to think and she try not to think about aahil and not to love him..

REHAN was looking at sanam as she was lost in her thoughts .. but he did stare her as she was still wearing pink lahenga and the beautiful dupatta that tanveer gave her.. she was looking pretty and rehan was lost in her innocent beauty...he has started feeling love for sanam. He thought that he will confess his love as soon as possible.

Suddenly latif called for sanam ...and sanam comes in her senses as she was lost thinking about aahil and then she looks at rehaan as he was giving her that lovey dovy look so she felt weird and she shakes rehaan from his shoulders REHAAN KAHAN KHOYE HO...CHALO ANDAR DERR HO GAYI...

They went inside.

Next Day morning

Everyone was silent on the dining table for breakfast.. but everyone was surprised when aahil shouts good morning everybody and he was all set to go somewhere.. everyone was under thought that aahil must be very upset and he might not come out from his room for two days..but everone's surprise he was happy and absolutely normal (you know its our ARI ,a tough man who is soft from inside..)

Tanveer was also shocked to see aahil like that...

Tanveer: AAHIL TUM THIK TO HO NA BETA..

AAHIL: HAAN AAMI I AM ABSOLUTLY FINE...MUJHE KYA HUA HAI??? OK AAMI MUJHE AAJ APNI POORANI WALI KOTHI JAANA HAI ..MERE KUCH INVESTORS AA RAHE HAI GERMANY SE ..UNHE POORANI KOTHI DEKHNI HAI NAWABOWALI SO I HAVE ARRANGED A SMALL GET TO GATHER THERE...TO AAJ MAIN WAHI JAOONGA..AND YES SANAM TUM MERE SAATH CHAOGI WAHAN KA KHANA CATERING SAB TUMHE DEKHANA HAI ..WE WILL BE BACK BY late night...AAMI AATE HUE THODA LATE HO JAYEGA ...REHAAN PLEASE TAKE CARE OF OFFICE IN MY ABSENSE AS WOH NAYI PROPERTY KE SAARI DEALING TUMHE KARNI HAI

REHAAN: JI BHAI..

Rehaan was disappointed that sanam is going for whole day and he wanted to confess his feeling to her, but it was not a good time. So he went to his room to get ready..

Aahil and sanam left for the Haveli..

@rehaan's room

Rehan was standing infront of the mirror of his dressing table and was thinking about sanam and he thinks that he should practice once before directly propose to sanam..so he started rehearse in front of the mirror.

Rehan: haan sanam woh mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai..nai nai aise nai...ummm...sanam mujhe tumese ..too direct..haan..sanam aaj tak mujhe lagta tha ki hum sirf achche dost hai lekin pichale kuch dino se mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tum meri dost se kuch zyada hi ban gayi ho...i think i am falling in love with u sanam...

Rehan did not know that Begum sahiba aka tanveer was listening his inner feelings for sanam standing near the door..she was very angry ..she wanted to go to rehaan and want to give a tight slap for loving an ordinary servant whereas she wants to make her nawab by giving him all the property and wealth..

She went into deep thought...

And a cunning smile appeared on her lips . she thinks in her mind: sorry REHAAN BETA, MUJHE TUMHARA PYAAR BHARA DIL TODNA PADEGA..KYUNKI TUMHARE LIYE TO MAIN KOI RAANI LAOONGI NAHI KI KOI NAUKARAANI...

She went to her room to make a cunning plans how to saperate rehaan and sanam..

Meanwhile while on the way to Haveli...

Sanam was sitting in the front seat and aahil was driving the car...both were silent in between they were looking each other secretly. Aahil was thinking about sanam and admiring her simple beauty while sanam was thinking about aahil , that he is such a good person why allah has given him such problames from his troubled childhood to broken marriage..

Aahil: DEKHO SANAM YEH SAB MERE BAHUT HI IMPORTANT CLIENTS HAI..TUMHE UNKA KHAS KHAYAL RAKHANA HAI...AUR HAAN MUJHE TUMPE POORA BHAROSA HAI...KI TUM YEH SAB BAHUT ACHCHE SE KAR PAOGEE..

On listening to this, Sanam felt very good..she smiled little and nodded...she was very happy from inside to know that AAhil trusts her...

They reached Haveli in 1 hour . they entered into the big mension..Huge landscape garden. Sanam has never seen such beautiful haveli and she was lost looking at its beauty..she felt that she is in some paradise.. suddenly aahil's voice makes her to come into the present...CHALO SANAM JALDI KARO... BAHUT KAAM HAI..

Sanam went inside the haveli..there are Few servents who were running here and there, some people were decorating the living room for the party, some were arranging the tables and candles for the dinner... aahil shows her kitchen and everybody gets busy in their own work..sanam also get busy in cooking some good Punjabi dishes and yes her very well known pudine ki chutney...

In the late evening...

Bunch of foreigners were praising the beauty of old haveli... and they were praising aahil for maintaining it...sanam was there arranging everything ...aahil was secrately looking at her as he can not help himself staring her...

Sanam offered everybody Punjabi starters with pudine ki chutney.. and everyone was so pleased with her

Client:very nice food miss...I must say aahil you have master chef in ur home...

Sanam was not ready to take such compliments so she was blushing like anything...aahil was very happy as if client has praised him...there were some women in the forign clients also...they admire sanam's simplicity and beauty...t

One woman says: hello miss may i know your name please...

Sanam hestitaly.. sanam

Lady: WHAT A BEAUTIFUL NAME SANAM..YOU ARE VERY BEAUTIFUL.. AND I MUST SAY YOU ARE A GOOD COOK ALSO...

She asked witer for the cocktail and offered it to sanam...

Sanam was little bit uncomfortable as she was only an ordinary coock so she says no respectfully but the woman insisted her and sanam though it was mere cold drink...she took a shot...and she finished the glass in one breath as she was very nervous..the lady saw this and was surprised to see sanam's glass empty...she ordered waiter another drink...she gave her another glass..sanam was already feeling dizzy and she felt that she need some more so she finished another one in no time..now she was fully high...suddenly DJ started the music and the lady asked sanam if she can show her some Indian dance moves as she loves Indian dance and she wanted to learn it...

Sanam: OYR GORI MADAMJI ...NO WORRY..SANAM IS HERE TO NO FEAR...I WILL TEACH U THUMKA DANCE MERI FAV DANCE..CHALOJI...

Meanwhile aahil got so busy that he did not notice what sanam is doing... She dragged with her the lady also...suddenly the lights went off and only one spotlight was on the stage..aahil was surprised to see whats going on and his eyes was stick on the figure that was in the big ghoonghta...and the songs strats...BIDI JALAILE JIGAR SE PIYAAA...JIGAR MAAN BADI AAG HAI...and with jerk sanam opend her vail and starts dancing with thoomks and latkas...she took her dupatta and tied in her waist while dancing...on seeing sanam aahil spits all the whisky that was in his mouth and started coughing as the whisky went into his nose because of shock...his mouth was wide open to see sanam dancing like that...he was marking that sanam is dancing but in between she was loosing her balance because of drinking...aahil could not believe that sanam is dancing like that...he felt that something is fishy ...so he went near the dance floor..everybody was clapping and sanam makes everyone dance on foot tapping bollywood numbers...while dancing she took another glass of cocktail from waiter as she was feeling thirsty...she was about to finish but aahil suddenly snatches the glass from her hand...she rolled her eyes at aahil and went again on the dance floor for dancing...everyone was enjoying a lot...aahil went to sanam andwas telling her to stop but she was in no mood to hear anything..sanam was now tired and was loosing her balance ...she might hit the floor anytime so aahil grabed her hand and took her aside where they can talk as the music was very loud ...he took her in the passage :SANAM BAS KARO...ARE YOU OK?? TUMHE COCKTAIL KISNE DIYA??

SANAM: YA AALAH KITNA MAZA AA RAHA THA..AAP BHI NA JALLAD JIN HO...MUJHE DANCE KARNA HAI..WOH LIZA KO MAINE BOLA THA KI MAIN UNKO THUMKA DANCE SIKHAOONGI...DEKO AISE AISE...

And she starts dancing with thoomka's there...aahil was looking at her lovingly as she was looking so cute while making such faces and dancing...he smiled...

sanam looked at him that he is smiling...

sanam:HA JALLD JIN SMILE KAR RAHA HAI...KOI MUJHE CHUTI KATO ...AAPKO SMILE KARNA AATA HAI? AALAHMIYAA...KITN SONE QUIT LAGTE HO AAP HANSTE HUE..

AAHIL: SANAM QUIT NAHI CUTE...AUR TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI MUJHE CUTE BOLNE KI...

He was also enjoying teasing sanam so he made his face straight ...

On hearing that..sanam started crying loudly...JAB DEKHO TAB DANTE REHTE HO...ANDAR SE PYAR KARTE HO AUR FIR GUSSA KARTE HO..

And then she pouted and making baby face.Aahil was shocked to hear this from her mouth...she become more loud and start once again...

SANAM:: AAP BAHUT BURE HO...MAINE THIK HI NAAM RAKHA HAI AAPKA JALLAD JIN...aahil put his hand on her mouth to shut her up...aahil: shhh SHHH BILKUL CHUP ...PAHELE MUJHE YEH BATAO KI MAINE TUMHE KAB BOLA KI MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON??

Sanam was still under the alchohol effect..she did not know that she is speaking all truth..

Sanam: AAPNE HI TO KAHA THA NA USS DIN JAB AAP KO HAATH MAIN CHOT LAGI THI AUR MAINE PATTI KI THI...

AAHIL: LEKIN WOH TO LATIF NE...

SANAM: HAY ALLAH MAIN TO BHUL GAYI MAINE HI TO LATIF KO BOLA THA AAP SE JOOTH BOLNE KE LIYE...

AAHIL: LEKIN TUMNE KYUN BOLA THA JOOTH BOLNE KE LIYE??

SANAM: KYUNKI AAPKO PATA NA CHALE...

Aahil: Kya?? Pata na chale??

Sanam was almost loosing her consciousness and feeling dizzy..she was smiling and laughing in between...

Aahil: sanam bolo KI MUJHE KYA PATA NA CHale??

SANAM: YEHI KI MAIN BHI AAPSE PYAAR KARNE LAGI HOON...

Aahil smiled and he could not understand what to do?? He was so happy...suddenly

Sanam lost her balnce and aahil supportd her from holding her from her waist..she was not able to stand properly...and she was about to sleep..so aahil lifts her and took her to his room...

He made her sleep and give her a gentle touch on her cheek. So was looking divine while sleeping...aahil covered her with a blanket and make her comfortable...he set there for a while looking at her lovingly...and says: AAJ TO TUMNE MUJHE BOL DIYA KI TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTI HO LEKIN SANAM I PROMISE KI MAIN KAL TUMHARE PURE HOSH O HAVAS MAIN TUMSE I LOVE U BULVA KE RAHOONGA...YEH AAHIL RAZA ABRAHIM KA WADA HAI TUMSE...

Aahil kissed on her forehead ,sanam smiles in a sleep and he went to his room. ARI was on cloud nine today...

Little long but hope u guys like it..please do comment...love ya all..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
OMG! Im waiting for next part! It was really amazing! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Such a cute updates finaly sanam confessed cntinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Woww woww woow 👏
Continue soon plzzz

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