AsYa FF ~ Zehnaseeb [Thread #3]

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Ohhooo yeh asad aur zoya kitne slow hai :| ek hug toh dete :| but awww I love how their relation is growing slowly slowly.! cant wait to read further!

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Wonderful update again Mrin 🤗 Its such a feel good, amazing part that I've read it twice. Asad and Zoya's thoughts, friendliness, and honesty is their charm. Loved them talking their heart out to each other, and not awkward and absolutely normal of the advancement in their life. They were strangers a few days ago, got to know each other a bit on the phone and now planned to get married, but just how they deal with it is so mature.. Loved how Anwar and Rashid were so scared of their respective wives 😆 I am glad they'll have more time from their engagement to the wedding 😊 that whole phase from being engaged to getting married is CUTE 😳 I CAN'T WAITTT.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
Well... you deserved the new thread... and I am not surprised at the pace

I am not here today to celebrate the new thread but to say just one thing to you (see pic)

p.s. scroll down for more

LOL.. The pic ain't opening! 🤣 But yeah.. I still love you! ❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
This chapter was so nice

Asad and Zoya and Anwar scene was so nice... I loved they way they talked

Asad and Zoya and the car (baby) scene was so cute... It was something which I didn't expect and I totally enjoyed it

Asad and Zoya and Rashid scene was superb... The ease with which they were with each other was awesome

Asad and Zoya are getting along really well... I am eagerly waiting for the engagement now

Really excited

This story is turning out way better than I had imagined

Hats off to you

You are brilliant

Love you Mahi! ❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
Consolidating ALL my comments related to the chapters here! ❤️

Happy Reading!!!

I have read them all for the ... ummm.. third time! 😳

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

So Now Mahima..

You rather not consolidate all comments. 😳 You'll go mad by the time we reach chapter 30 and my readers would throw rotten tomatoes, chappals and andas saying, "You updated on page one and we get to reserve on page 10!" 🤣

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
Ahhaan THREAD 3 already???

But it wasn't a big surprise !

Your story deserved this and much more threads !

Zehnaseeb : It's a beautiful fiction since it's on our favorite AsYa and moreover because it's written by a wonderful writer like you !

The way two complete strangers comes to know that their family want them to get married to each other. Those phone conversations ( BEST PART OF THIS FICTION ) that helped them know each other and take the biggest decision of their life : The decision of marrying each other.

Which reminds me one more reason to love this fiction : THE STORYLINE SEEMS SO REAL !

Thanks for presenting us such a beautiful story dee...

I love you so so so much !

P.S Thanks for the shout out ! 😳 😳

So many complements? Geez! 😲 THANK YOU SO MUCH! 🤗

I love you too.. so so so so much! love struck

❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
Directly to the update

This one's for :

- Updating soon. 😃
- For not updating at around midnight! 😆
- For the longest update of this story. 😉

Anwar's too cool ! He's so understanding ! So is Rashid. Only they could calm their wives ! 😆

Engagement! 😳 😳 God ! I can't wait ! I JUST CAN'T ! Engagement ! Make it soon-ish! I want them to belong to each other - OFFICIALLY! 😉

Zoya's talk with her baby, and Asad teasing her was the BEST part of this chapter. 😃

Zoya's opening up! And Asad is so gentleman! So perfect! WHY is he so perfect ???

The entire update was beautiful...

Each word
Each sentence
Each paragraph
The entire update !

BEAUTIFUL !

Update soon ! 😉

Love ❤️
Yours' Kameene ! 😆 😆

Anee

The 3 pointers.. Rightly said! 👍🏼 😆

They will be together.. Soon-ish! 😉

Love you Kameenee! ❤️ 🤗

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: mona12345
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OMGGG !!!

That's like the longest chapter you've ever posted !! 😲👏 Keep up the lenght ! 😳

Also you posted a day before, despite being swamped in work 🤗

And for the shoutout

Aww, Asad drove back to meet Zoya ! Hayye 😳 ASAD ! ASAD ! ☺️

Glad Asad and Zoya are opening up . Also how they agreed for the engagement.

The Ladies- Typical Indian mothers, bas karlo shaadi, fir bache bhi paida karna, uske baad ek aur bacha 😆

Like how Anwar and Rashid are so understanding ! They'll handle their ladies ! 🤣

Abdul chacha's dhaba/restaurant Me likeyy ! Good things happen in there ! 😃

Haahhaaha, Zoe, talking to her baby! And Asad chuckling at that ! such cute real moments ! 👏

Then again, how she asked him to take the baby back to the hotel 👍🏼

Only one problem, EK HUG TOH BANTA THA NA YAAR !!!! 😡SIDE HUG WOULD DO TOO, YOU KNOW !

Anyway , all in all , another lovely chapter.😃

Waiting for more.😳

Love you Mrins,

Chandni ❤️