ASYA(KABHI) SS- Remember Me-Thread II Completed - Page 60

Originally posted by: swapno

I also don't know Amu...everyday I think I will get a good news but it is becoming worst...and I am loosing hope...but Allah has his plan I know...so I am praying ...

I know past is past...but really AsYa still hurt me in some ways...but Sigh...!

Asad loves Zoya and Zoya loves Asad too...but Zoya's love was always hidden...She did it first time too...

I don't know why I love Asad...he is something which made me think about intensity...rude but yet yearning...heartless but yet heart warming...he is something...

really I wrote that scenes about 10 times just to give the AsYa touch...not so cliche but so intense...not cheap but lovely moment...

ha haha...why all want happy ending??? 😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Amulya9

ya i know...im also praying ...dnt worry jaldi sab teek hojayega by GOD's grace ..

AAK ..hes irresistable😎..heartless mat bol mera ashu ko 😭😭

omg ..10 times ..u r really gr8 buddy 👏👏,,its so lovely ..im a huge fan of such scenes

happy ending chahiye bass😃..aisa mat karo mera babies k satth ..they love each other a lot n tune kitna rulaya asad ko 😭

v all want happy ending coz v never got neither d scenes v craved for nor d happy ending 😭...

Originally posted by: sasir

will be waiting for next chapter

hope u r mom will be fine soon

A lovely story though slightly traumatic.

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

A lovely story though slightly traumatic.

Love Asad and Zoya through all these fan fictions though I did not watch the serial.You write very well portraying all the emotions in the correct proportions.

Only field where there should be some improvement is English grammar,that too tenses. If you get the script corrected then it will be the best. This is just a suggestion as an elderly person. Pl. excuse me if I hurt your feelings.

sorry to note that your mother is unwell.May God help her to recover and restore her health.concentrate on her recovery. We will wait.

Thanks for this update.I read the whole story again to get the continuity.

God bless you.

Jayasree

Assalamu Aleikum

I am Swapno Appi's cousin. Aunty has passed away on 13.10.14 that's why all her works will be discontinued until she recovered from this grieve...
May Allah place Aunty in Jannah...and please pray for Aunty all the readers and for appi too.

Thank you
Noshin (luvkydream)

Originally posted by: luckydream

Assalamu Aleikum

I am Swapno Appi's cousin. Aunty has passed away on 13.10.14 that's why all her works will be discontinued until she recovered from this grieve...
May Allah place Aunty in Jannah...and please pray for Aunty all the readers and for appi too.

Thank you
Noshin (luvkydream)

will pray for her soul rest in peace

Innanillahi wainna ilahi rajioon

I m so sory fr nt cmenting n reading, bt plz cntinue pms,