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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...
asad told everything to zoya..
really hope asad will make zoya fall in love with him...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank you so much 😳
Glad you loved it!!
Asad will do that only!! woh Asad Ahmed Khan hain!! 😉
Will try to update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cont asap..
T.c..


Thank you so much 🤗
Glad you loved it!!
Will try to update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Finally i read it!!

Only one part yet...next i'll read very soon...

I was sad when i heard that zoya loves omar...but asad has a charm which no one can resist!!

Dilshad...this woman deserves a standing ovation...so adorable she's

Najma is married :)

Zerin... 🤣 true friend indeed!!

I am glad asad has decided to let zoya know the truth...

P.s-happy ending please


Hi Shrash!! 🤗
Finally 😆 😆
chalo koyi baat nehi!!
Everyone is sad!! but Asad is Asad!!
you got it right!!
I am trying on it!!
thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry..I m late
Just read now.
Awsum update
Loved it...
Asad told abt zoya to farhaan😲
zerin nd mark callled..
Mark gave her advise for making decision..
Aww..zoya want to knw abt her past frm asad..
Zoya came to talk wid him..but he was talking to zinia
Loved these lines..." Remember me zoy please,if not den choose me after hearing the whole,I still do not have the strength which I think I have.please choose your Mr Imperfect husband"
He told her the truth..
She is shattered...nd hate him now😭
Zoya said I love u to omar😲
No divorce plzz😭
BeautifulY written.⭐️
Loved dis story...
Continus soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fifi1297

Sorry..I m late

Just read now.
Awsum update
Loved it...
Asad told abt zoya to farhaan😲
zerin nd mark callled..
Mark gave her advise for making decision..
Aww..zoya want to knw abt her past frm asad..
Zoya came to talk wid him..but he was talking to zinia
Loved these lines..." Remember me zoy please,if not den choose me after hearing the whole,I still do not have the strength which I think I have.please choose your Mr Imperfect husband"
He told her the truth..
She is shattered...nd hate him now😭
Zoya said I love u to omar😲
No divorce plzz😭
BeautifulY written.⭐️
Loved dis story...
Continus soon..
Thnx for pm


Ah it's okay dear 😳
Thank you so much 🤗
Glad you loved it!
Divorce will not happen!!
I am glad you love this story and my writing as well!!
Will try to update soon!!
I love your long comments!!
thank you so much for that!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Ah it's okay dear 😳
Thank you so much 🤗
Glad you loved it!
Divorce will not happen!!
I am glad you love this story and my writing as well!!
Will try to update soon!!
I love your long comments!!
thank you so much for that!!


🤗
Den its gud..
Really...😳
Aww...no need for thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fifi1297


🤗
Den its gud..
Really...😳
Aww...no need for thanks


you are really a sweet heart!! 😳 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


you are really a sweet heart!! 😳 🤗


😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

This chapter is dedicated to ps_05 (Prashni) and fifi1297(Laibaa), hoping that I wrote your name correctly 🤗


Chapter 8


"Jaayenge kaha sujhta nahi
Chal pade magar raasta nahi
Kya talaash hai kuchh pata nahi
Bun rahe hain dil khaab dam-ba-dam
Waqt ne kiya...haseen sitam
Tum rahe na tum hum rahe na hum..."



The same night when Asad disclosed the truth to Zoya


I always craved to know my past before the accident and now I hate it. Allah Miyaan ! Why are you doing this to me? I can't decide. I was happy with my present then why you bring my past like this! I braced myself that everything is normal but I am alone. I am alone and it scares me to the core. I do have some wonderful friends and I owe to them but now my past scarred me again. I can't believe it. He is my husband. Asad Ahmed Khan is my husband. He showed the nikaah nama where I saw my signature and also Jiju's. He said he loved me then but why did not he trust me that time. His friend tried to kill me but he never trusted me. Appi-Jjiju why you left me? Why I can't verify that what was my stunt that time? He mentioned that he loves me but he never mentioned that I loved him then. When I went near to him I felt a strange attraction towards him. I said I hate him but ... but somehow that is not possible. His eyes held enormous pain, he showed that he is strong but his eyes tell how vulnerable he is? What do I do Allah Miyaan. Show me right path! Again now he has wife and child. I saw them in a mall just last afternoon. They were happy. Though I did not see his wife's face but I saw that three year old carefree child. He did not mention about them to me. Why? What he needs from me, Allah Miyaan! Please Help me.

Zoya's prayer was broken as her cell started to ring. She quickly finished her prayer and took the call.

"Hello ZF, how are you now?" A chirpy voice greeted her and involuntarily her face lit up.

"Hi Omar ! I am fine, how are you?"

"How can I be when my fianc is away from me for this long time" He was sad.

"Omar!" Zoya admonished him.

"What yaar! From 3 months I am pretending that I am in so much love with you, I want to be with you. Even I proposed you for the sake of Mark and Zerin" Omar mocked to Zoya again.

"I know and I am really sorry for that Omar. You knew my position then. If you did not help me out then Zerin would sure find any random man and made me married to him" Zoya exhaled.

"I know yaar. But it is enough now. Please tell them the truth. Here my mom started looking girls for me, she still does not know anything, what if Zerin breaks the news to Ammi? I am scared of this game now" Omar whined.

"Oh so that's why you are scared? You want to marry. Ahan!" Zoya joked.

"Nope, but I really think you should tell them now. I know they worry for your loneliness but one day we have to let them know. Why not now? Please think about it seriously or else it will be more complicated." Omar said to this seriously.

"I will tell them this time. Please you don't need to panic" Zoya assured him.

"What happened to you Zee? Why you are sounding so low?" Omar was so concerned in a minute.

"Umm nothing." Zoya was unsure.

"Tell me what is bothering you, Now." Omar demanded.

Omar was not so close to Zoya like Mark and Zerin. Omar is a close business friend of Mark and they came along when they established their software company. From then Zoya came to know him. He is a good person with a good heart and Zoya was quite okay with him for his jovial, innocent nature. Zerin and Mark got engaged three months ago. But before that Zerin had demanded that Zoya should also need to find someone and she put a deal that whenever Zoya would find a suitable man for herself only then she would get married to Mark otherwise she would not leave Zoya alone. Here Mark was desperate for this engagement. Zoya planned with Omar that they should act like they liked each other and they would be life partner in the future just to convince Zerin and Mark. Omar being a helpful guy agreed to Zoya and with this act they became good friends too.

"Zoya..."

Zoya suddenly felt she needed to share her fear with someone. She needed to share otherwise she would die with suffocation. The heaviness over her heart was killing her. Before she could decipher she whispered in a lower tone.

"Omar I...I am married."

"Hain, we are married already? How? When did we marry?" Omar chuckled.

"No Omar I am married from four years. I was before my accident" Zoya's tears were already making path over her cheek.

"Hey! Why you are crying? What happened? Tell me please" Omar was exasperated. Zoya told him everything. When she had finished she broke down.

"Zoya sussh please. Let me think" Omar chided. He was feeling restless because of her uncontrollable sobs.

"Zoya, I am warning you. If you are going to cry like this then I am on the next flight of India which is going to departure from Australia next" he warned.

"No" Zoya screeched. They talked almost all night about the solution of this situation. At last when he was disconnecting then he said

"Zoya one thing is clear. He is an honest man. He did not tell lie to you which he could do easily. As he knew you would not going to remember this. But he did tell the truth and discussed with each of his faults. Does not it a reason to forgive him? Does not it mean he still loves you and wants you in his life?" Omar pulled the string carefully not to offend Zoya. Zoya was continuously saying that she could not forgive him. After listening from Omar she remained silent.

"Zoya think about it very carefully. Think about his point of view too. What if he had to marry again just against his conscience? Just think every possible damn think which could happen. If you have no solutions then ask him. Ask anyone related to your past there. People do not get true love once in a life time Zoya! Once it is gone you will not able to hold it again. So be careful Zoya." Omar finished.

"But I do not love him Omar" Zoya whispered.

"I know. I am not saying that you do. Just saying you have enough time there to think that you will give it a chance or not. Just use that time. I think Allah will show you right path by then.' Omar concluded.

"Thank you so much Omar. Your support really helps a lot. You are a gem among friends." Zoya genuinely praised him.

"Say what I don't know honey. One more thing that now you are married, I can explain it to Zerin that we are not in love. You don't need to take stress okay. I will tell her when I will go to Mark's place today. Allah Hafiz, sleep tight and think please! Don't take any decision in haste" Omar concluded.

"Allah Hafiz, I am really grateful to you Omar" Zoya finished and cut the call.

Though she assured to Omar but she passed another sleepless night!


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Next Day (When Asad heard Zoya's confession)


Zoya came to office early as she wanted to start her work first. She thought a lot in the night but could not bring a conclusion. All the time she thought about his three year old girl only. No she could not snatch her father from her. She decided she would show hatred to Asad and would leave as soon as possible. Although Omar had suggested her to think but here nothing much left to think. ( Zoya being Zoya, always take haste decision).

She was taking coffee from the canteen to her work station when she got Omar's call. He did explain everything to Zerin and Zerin also said she knew about it as she herself chatted with Asad. Zoya was surprised but did not show that. Zerin said she knew and she was happy that Zoya was giving it a thought. But Zerin did not disclose about Zinia as she promised him. So when she was talking with Zoya from the back Omar was saying he was heartbroken etc and Zoya chided him. At that moment Asad was near her and he listened to it. Just the next moment Zerin said that she loves Zoya and proud of her. Zoya just greeted back to her which Asad thought she was confessing to Omar. Here because of their busy schedule Zerin forgot to clear to Asad that Omar chapter was closed for Zoya. As she thought Zoya herself would clear it to Asad. Little did she know her impulsive friend's plan she would shoot herself then and there.


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Asad stared into nothing when the presentation was going, he literally heard nothing. Only he was back from nothingness when he heard the claps of the project members. He got the deal but he lost his life's most important deal. Today was another worst day of his life. He realized that actually he could not love anyone. He was right from the first; he could not gibe happiness to anyone. It was truth! He called his personal lawyer and asked him to prepare some legal documentation. Now nothing is in his hand. He had to go with the flow.

Dilshad called him after some times. She informed him that they would reach India two days after Eid. She asked him to go there, but he refused and told her that he wanted to spend first and last Eid with Zoya. Dilshad gasped hearing that,

"last? Does that mean she denied?" she whispered.

"No Ammi, it is just that she has another man in her life. Omar and I want her happiness" Asad said in a nonchalant voice.

"Oh Asad!" Dilshad cried but Asad cut her in middle.

"Please Ammi, don't be my strength! I convinced me with very difficulties" He pleaded.

"Can I talk to her once" Dilshad was shocked.

"Yes Ammi, but not now! Please. We both need time to adjust with this new situation. Already I gave her a lot of stress. Thanks to the maid who works for Zoya here. She is staying with her from now on in the night also and take care if her. I don't want her to be sick again because of me." Asad said.

"Oh! Okay beta as you wish. I just wanted to talk with her as her Phupphi not as her Mother in law.

"Okay Ammi I will tell you when it will be the time"

"Okay Allah Hafiz and take care of yourself"

"Allah Hafiz Ammi. Humaira's flight is tonight only" He finished the call.


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Zoya entered her apartment with shivering hands; she was drenched by the sudden rain. She ran to the washroom after placing her accessories on the center table of her small living room. After taking a shower she came out. Today she came earlier than any other day. Her maid will not be here tonight. She was grateful to her maid as she was with her continuously after that night. It was almost a month from then.

Zoya sat infront of the window watching the blurry view of lake through it. Her life became scratched and blurry like this. Like the glass her life incident was vague before that accident. Although Asad had told most of it about her past but she was not convinced, something was missing that she could not point upon. What was that? Then suddenly she got the reason. Asad himself! If he was so in love with her then why he had married again? When she looked into Asad's eyes those spoke volume to her that he needed her but why his action contradicted when it came to marriage. True they were husband- wife legally but how could she deny the new family of Asad and he literally did not disclose to her about his new life. Sometimes she wanted to ask about it but then she dreaded. She did not have a proper family in her whole life then how could she snatch it from that child. The rain poured continuously making Zoya restless every seconds. Her coffee was being cold but she was thinking about one person only Asad Ahmed Khan!


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One month Later


Life passed in jiffy. All were busy with their respective works. Zoya was going great where as Asad was on his new track "Mission Forget Zoya." It was impossible. When he did not know about her whereabouts that time he could not forget her for a second then how come he was going to this. But he had to, for Zoya he needed to. She had another life now, she loved another one now. He wanted to share things about Zinia but when he heard her to say "I love you to Omar" he dropped that idea. He did not want to bind her now in anyway. She refused to accept this marriage and moved on her life then he would give her the preferred space. A month was not a long time. But in this time Asad learnt to avoid Zoya and Zoya learnt to love Asad. Yes she tried hard not to fall for him but it did not work. She utterly fell in love with him. First she thought it was mere attraction as she was thinking all the time about the chance he had asked for them, but it was all wrong she used to observe his every move from then. How was he, how he reacted with every ways. He was rude with everyone but when it came to her he was all silent all in peace. Zoya did not talk to him first but when she had no option as it was causing problem in her work. So she decided to talk to him but only work related problem.


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Another Month Later


Asad had accepted every term that Zoya put on their new relationship. She did not want to mingle with him without work and he accepted it silently. He gave her all the respect and made sure that the whole office also did the same to her. Zoya's jovial mood and shayari was back after some day. Afterall how Zoya Farooqui could live without her shayaries. Asad silently enjoyed her shayaries. It's not that her shayaries were improved and still he pressed his temple hearing those. But he wanted to treasure her last memories with him. All the colors, happiness that she filled in his daily life when he was with her at this office, he saved them all in his memories.


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Here was Zoya she observed Asad more than necessary. She thought this mere attraction would be vanished after some days but he was like drug to her. Yes her drug! His presence soothed her, healed her restlessness. Little did she know that Asad was taking care of her with her every need through the maid. Slowly but surely Zoya had fallen for Asad. She knew sometimes he stood outside the canteen when she broke her shayaries. She saw one day that he was pressing his temples by hearing this and she screamed to his reflection "Allah Miyaan what is wrong with you Mr. Khan. Praise me. Say wah wah!" When he was startled that he was caught red handed but he did praise her saying "Wah wah Zoya."

Did not her heart skip a beat hearing her name from his mouth? Did not she fell for him more by that time when he brought coffee for her when she was extremely busy? Did not her stomach flutter a little whenever a slight graze his fingers to her fingers? Did not she stare at him unabashedly when he said something to the weekly meeting? Did not his comment matter a lot for her? Did not his suggestion was considered with highest priority though it was lame one? Did not she initiate a fight just to hear his voice and observe his enormous expressions on his face? Whom are we kidding? It freaking did and our Zoya was not mature enough to accept it as love. Dare you termed this as "Love" to her. She thought as she values Nikaah the most that's why she was thinking all these.

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One day Asad was typing furiously as he needed to complete this presentation. Because of giving in the demand of Zinia he had talked her with all night and he was straining himself. Taking off his specs he massaged his neck a little looked ahead at Zoya's cabin. The glass road could not separate their view as it was not frosted. He caught red handed that she was staring at him. He gave a half smile but stopped it right there. Somehow they were going smooth now -a- days. They had gone back to square again. They were bickering, they were again consoling each other, sometimes she looked distanced, sometimes she was friendly, sometimes she wanted to ask something about him and then she retreated into her shell, then again she would back. Her action was confusing him but he knew she was going back! Just a month more then she would be nowhere near him. Why he was thinking about her anyway? He shook his head and resumed his work.


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Zoya looked ahead of her for the umpteenth times of the day.

He looked handsome with this new pair of specs. He is growing old. He took that spec just a month ago and only used when he was working on laptop. Why he was frowning? His neck is aching maybe? He looked tired also. What happened to him?

Zoya was looking to him when he looked at her directly. She hastily removed her eyes but she was sure he had caught her staring. He cheek burns crimson red registering his penetrating gaze though he was apart enough from her. Her heartbeat rose erratically this time.

Allah Miyaan what is happening to me?


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A/N- Now I am spoiling you, right? 😎

So, Anopoma you got it right? 😉

This story is going to have mostly flashbacks. Flashback will come necessarily with the flow of the story, mostly reminisced by Asad. You will feel bored sometimes as I will take help from the real story from the show. 😳

Now tell me how you all find it? Share your views with me also. Please do like and comment.😊

Want PM for the update? Then buddy me. Thank you all.


Lots of love ❤️

Swapno

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Sorry for late unressing
Thank you sooo much for dedication🤗
Fabulous update...👏
Loved it
Beautifully written⭐️
Surprise update...I didnt knw u ll update so soon...
Thank god nothing z between zoya nd omar😊
Zoya z sooo stubborn...😡
Ziddi hai!!!😡
Awww..zoya start falling for asad
He z unaware nd going to prepare divorce pprs
Asad z so concerned...she admired him 😳
Zinia kon hai??
U r really good wid emotional updates..👏
Awsum update...
U r not spoiling us😉
Give quick updates...
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm😊


Edited by fifi1297 - 11 years ago

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