AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Really interesitng TS Ankitha.. I also love rains.. and I enjoyed reading it.. 😊

Aww... She knows he is waiting for her and he is unaware of it... I had also written an OS on similar lines ... but you have written wonderfully...

I feel you have definately grown as an author.. The choice of words are great.. 😊

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

oops.. forgot to wish the birthday girls ... Wishing all of them a very very happy birthday.. 😊

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aniha20

more than letters red emo is more..cool 😆

really hani who rs there in a post was all rofl written 😡 🤣 🤣
huh this time I will res for sure u will see that 😎

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

DAVID GANDY

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: treasure11

Am soo happy 😳 I can't beleive ...am first😲
Khushi ke assuuu ayyee haii 😭

awww😳🤣

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hmmm ankie ne dedicate kiya TS. Gift toh banta hain boss 😆
par I'm thinking aage intro mein pura khachra kar diya mera isne 😡 😆
but apne rule ke against jaa kar first page par res nahi karke gift mein de dunga tujhe ankie 😡
waise bhi ankie ye T nahi hoke F ka Four bhi ho sakta hain. fS 😎 😆
wiase thanks waala thank you for the dedication.
Will comment this time chahe toofan bhi aa jaye iss baar😃

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aniha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

really hani who rs there in a post was all rofl written 😡 🤣 🤣
huh this time I will res for sure u will see that 😎

hmm..had a great laugh 😆
sounds look gud..want to unres all messy then i wnt rofl

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Yeh lo Aashna yaha pe bhi david gandy ko leke aa gayi 🤣

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: aniha20

hmm..had a great laugh 😆
sounds look gud..want to unres all messy then i wnt rofl

hani 😡 what good laugh. Aayega aayega mera bhi din aayega 😡
haan wo mein kar dunga unressy my messy soon 😎

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
I like the Chuppa chupi the 2 seem to be playing..😛
I enjoyed the read...very well put together...and even if it was a random thoguht u did a great job turning it into a story...Looking forward to see where you take it...
I bet you have something fun planned...how they meet...and how Asad's assumptions that she might have a kid are broken...and where the whole smitten but not yet bitten part goes...

130 likes...I gave you mine...129 ppl make it happen!!!!😆

Thank you so much Aashna... 😳

ha ha.. it's a chupa chupi for the time being...

but they will come face to face in the next chapter 😉

ha ha..it's raining so much here!! and i am hating it when i have to go out 😡

so this thought came in suddenly 😆

hey will be cursing the rains 😉😆

to be frank, i didn't quite think about the kid part much..though it will be there a little for sure... 😉

but it will deal with the rains till the end 😛

ha ha..😆

my readers are a little slow..they will take time...till now, my FF's last chapter did not get 130 likes yet 😆

so i am allowed to rest for a bit now 😉😆

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago