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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Hey Srashti..

That was AMAZING Update..

Asad-Humeira's war was Funny..

Zoya's condition on leaving Asad was Heart breaking..

She didn't realize that she started feeling for Asad..

She took very hard decision..

Humeira's P.O.V is also right..

As a sister/friend she wants Zoya to be happy..

Asad was no less heart broken seeing his Angel going away..

Hope that soon AsYa will be together again..

COntinue very soon..

Thnx for PM..

LOved the update..Beautifully written..

-Mariam-

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

Omg that was so sad 😭

I had tears in my eyes

I think what humi did was wrong

It is zoya's life..she should be taking her decisions not someone else

Humeira maybe right in her own place

But in the end zoya should have the last word

Can only imagine what asad must be going through 😭

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Thanks for Update.

It was very very sad part😭,I can't held it.

Asad(KSG) cried for Zoya and he wanted to stop her,But it does not work.

The feelings of Asad(KSG) makes me really cry😭.

Zoya and Dilshad was feeling sad for Asad(KSG) ,it was so sad for them.

Even,Humeria was also feeling sad but she thinks about her friend's future.

This part makes me cry.😭😭

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

too emotional

literally cried.

heart wrenching

really felt bad for asya.

i know it is important for zoya to understand n realize her feelings towards asad.

but asad will be broken now.

it is very hard to again make him smile.

beautifully written

plz update soon

cant wait for next update.

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Ramlath

@Ramlath

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

wow...an Awesome update dear...
Loved it...rlly felt bad fr Asya... 😭
Thanx fr pm... Plz update soon... 😊

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mooumi

@mooumi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

😭😭😭...spr emo updt starry..but u depicted separation scn superbly...this is simply fabulous..penned amazingly 👏 their emo described superbly ..dis made me emo also😭n i hate dat humi...ya i know shes doing dis for zoyee but still i hate her..😡 she is so rude..aw you portrayed zoya agony n asad desperateness so vividly dat made me cry...now starry aftr such an awesome update you cant let us wait long for next chappy..so update asap n pls i cant bear dis separation..so iss momo pe thori rehem karna...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

So I am back!!

it is the turning chapter I am guessing!!

Another great update 👏

The emotion was written so beautifully I felt like I was there

Asad's desperation was something that made me feel he will be the one who would sure about his feelings!

So I am not blaming Humaira but she was a bit rude. I know she cared about Zoya but somewhere she failed to realize Zoya's feelings for Asad.

Again I can not blame her too because Zoya herself could not feel how badly she had fallen for him...

I love Dilshad's decision. She took an wonderful decision which will fix them in their life!

Well I guess I am babbling more than required!

Loved it Shrashti!!

Thank you so much 😳

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: aksasya
Awesome part...😳

I loved it...😛

I loved the snow fight part sooo much...👏

and Asad is so sweet he tried to be normal for Zoya...

He will do anything for her...My innocent Baby...

"I can't lose you Zoya. You are my angel...after my mother, I found that peace with you. Those memories which came all the way haunting me for years are now almost gone. It's all you...your company. Let's just stay inside...if I lose you...I'll go back to those endless pits...I'll lose myself again."...

He really mean it...🥺

Thank u dolly...😊

Yes he meant it...he's innocent n truthful like a baby...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: aksasya

Let me tell U dear U made me cry...😭

It was beyond my expectation baby...👍🏼

U nailed it...👏

My Poor Asad...😒

Poor Asad ...😭..He is trying to be close to Humera thinking that will make Zoya happy...😊

"Zoya...I will not bother you...i will bring you flowers...I will sleep at time...I won't shout and scream...I will behave good with your sister...but please don't leave Zoya...please!! Please..."

OH my poor Baby...😭...He is broken...😒