ASYA UNITED WE STAND #2 THREAD 3 LINK PG 1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome.

amazing.

u r a awesome writer

beautifully written

loved it.

asad got a sister with a bay n he is so protective of them too

asad is trying his level best to overcome his fears for his loved ones its amazing.

zoya is feeling sad bcoz she have to leave asad.

asad is unaware of it.

what will happen to him when he come to know about it.

felt bad for asya.

though i love humi for what she have done for zoya i am angry on her for separating asya.

hope it wont happen

plz update soon

chapter 4...
Omg
yhat was soo good n awesome
i just loved it...
Asad is just soo in pain :(
evil shireen n rashid...
Humaira is just soo intresting..
Sajjan singh ki band baja di.
Chalo now asad is atleast trusting zoya...
Wow
super work sri
love
niyati

really superb yaar... I love ur work

Originally posted by: neenabinu

nice

Originally posted by: neenabinu

interesting update

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice part.

The way Zoya remembering every moment with Asad(KSG) was very nicely explaining.

Najma game part with Asad(KSG) was very nice and Zoya convincing Asad(KSG) was so nice.

Humeira was back and what will happen Next with ASYA(KABHI),I am very curious.

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad refused to go out bc he doesn't want to lose zoya
He told his fear to zoya.
She was remembering every moment which they spent together
Both shared their past to each other
Nice bonding with najma, he forget his fear of crowd bc of najma & her baby
Zoya tried to ignore asad for his better ness & she has to leave & she felt guilty for that
Humeira arrived, let's see what happen now
Asad sketch zoya beautifully
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Aww, Awesome Update ,

Loved it to core,

pls dont separate Asya ,

Najma and Her baby very lovely,

And Asad kept his fear away for Zoya's happiness

Flawless Update

Beautifully Written,

Thanks for pm,

Continue soon

Originally posted by: swapno

Shrashti 🤗

Awesome update...

it is written beautifully!!

Zoya is heart broken and it was portrayed so lividly that I can feel it!

And Asad at first he was scared but he was opening up to her!!

Most of all taking care of her, protecting her and love her!!

He made Zoya feeling about love!!

And he made Zoya, Zoya!! who lost the color of her life!

So beautiful update

Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

very painful sri bt hats off part 3 is superbly written