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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Reading now!


And now for some comments!



Oh wow sis!



I am so very very taken by the way you've made them talked things out with each other. I was actually imagining all ways that he could avoid it and first he did so brilliantly in the car. And then I was this king oh come on, she needs to know! And I was thinking how can he broach such delicate subject and then poof. She just came upfront and directly asked him. That whole bit-simply brilliant!


And Kamran has me all freaked out! I thought he found them in the valley! And it was him that said Mr Asad Ahmed Khan I'll take it from here. I was so worried.



I mean how. I'm attached to the story.


I love Asaddd! I am Asad.



Haha. Lovingly looking at her. And lovingly thought of her. Hayyyeee.




And Haider when reassuring Humeira...it felt like he was reassuring me. Me!


I love you Haider.



I heart you.




And nice touch with Shireen having a lil moment thinking about As ad's name. Hmmm. I wonder...*fine fine I know*




And and and.


I love Asad calling her Princess!!!!!!!!!


And thank you for that reassurance that he shall ask her hand in marriage when she's all settled in. Of course Zoya went one step ahead and made him promise to marry her the moment H and H comes.


All those talk on Qubool Hai! Hayyyeee


Haha. Who would have thought timid Zoya to go all bold on Asad.



And she kissed him first. I know I l ow it was on the cheek. But heyyy a kiss is a kiss okay!



And their little moment of closeness.



oh yess yess..



Ayaannn. So funneyh...sister in law first!


Hee.


A wonderfully brilliant update sis!



Cannot wait for the next part.



Please make it longgg.



Love you.


Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Res

Unres


Sis looovveeed the update.

I liked the way Zoya was si authoritative with him, suits her
as a princess 😆

The way Asad put across his view point was also well written.

When will this Kamraan die??? I hate him.

Waiting for everyone to come soon so we can get the wedding 😉

Asad definitely has good self control 😆 but love him for respecting their boundaries
👏


Loved the update sis.
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Lol

ChocoBerry she was referring to herself as the sour loser😆

Einstein Mwah

And ChocoBerry big Mwah





I know Sis, that's what I'm telling Farz it won't make a difference who gets the first spot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa




I know Sis, that's what I'm telling Farz it won't make a difference who gets the first spot.


Mwah 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome update
Kamran made a trap for humeira & haider
Nice convo between asya
Everything clear now. Both want to get married soon
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
Congrats for new thread as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Kamran made a trap for humeira & haider
Nice convo between asya
Everything clear now. Both want to get married soon
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
Congrats for new thread as well


Thank u so much Asif, inshallah aim to update by the end of the week and if I can't then will definitely by next Tuesday 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Reading now!


And now for some comments!



Oh wow sis!



I am so very very taken by the way you've made them talked things out with each other. I was actually imagining all ways that he could avoid it and first he did so brilliantly in the car. And then I was this king oh come on, she needs to know! And I was thinking how can he broach such delicate subject and then poof. She just came upfront and directly asked him. That whole bit-simply brilliant!


And Kamran has me all freaked out! I thought he found them in the valley! And it was him that said Mr Asad Ahmed Khan I'll take it from here. I was so worried.



I mean how. I'm attached to the story.


I love Asaddd! I am Asad.



Haha. Lovingly looking at her. And lovingly thought of her. Hayyyeee.




And Haider when reassuring Humeira...it felt like he was reassuring me. Me!


I love you Haider.



I heart you.




And nice touch with Shireen having a lil moment thinking about As ad's name. Hmmm. I wonder...*fine fine I know*




And and and.


I love Asad calling her Princess!!!!!!!!!


And thank you for that reassurance that he shall ask her hand in marriage when she's all settled in. Of course Zoya went one step ahead and made him promise to marry her the moment H and H comes.


All those talk on Qubool Hai! Hayyyeee


Haha. Who would have thought timid Zoya to go all bold on Asad.



And she kissed him first. I know I l ow it was on the cheek. But heyyy a kiss is a kiss okay!



And their little moment of closeness.



oh yess yess..



Ayaannn. So funneyh...sister in law first!


Hee.


A wonderfully brilliant update sis!



Cannot wait for the next part.



Please make it longgg.



Love you.



Hey Einstein

Thank u so much for loving it so much.

I was going to prolong it a little further but then thought no...let's let Zoya open up and broach the subject, let her convince him at her than the other way round...royalty is in her blood, even though she had a horrible upbringing she is still next in line to the throne

I will bring you some more Haider scenes

Love u more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Res

Unres


Sis looovveeed the update.

I liked the way Zoya was si authoritative with him, suits her
as a princess 😆

The way Asad put across his view point was also well written.

When will this Kamraan die??? I hate him.

Waiting for everyone to come soon so we can get the wedding 😉

Asad definitely has good self control 😆 but love him for respecting their boundaries
👏


Loved the update sis.


Thank u so much ChocoBerry

Lol Kamran along with Razia will perish soon...they booked themselves a one way ticket to hell lol

I am glad u like her authoritative side, I wanted her to take the lead and not be passive anymore. I think the change in her personality will help her stand up to Razia and Kamran

Mwah

Love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Hey Sis,
Congratulations on starting the new thread 🥳.
Its a bit sad too cause this will bee the last thread as the story's about to end.
Okay I'll start from the near end part. Gosh, you gave my heart a squeezed. I felt panicked all of a sudden thinking Kamran was there who was calling Asad as Asad Ahmed Khan, when it was only Zoe. phew.. what a relief.
Now coming to the main parts. You know I really thought Asad was going to play dumb till the last moment & then leave without explaining. But I was glad the second time Zoe forced him to speak. Gosh, pagal just overheard things & took such a big decision. I know he's absolutely right in his place but still before depositing such a big load on his heart, he should have talked to her. Good thing the Princess told him what to do in case of any confusion. I really loved how Zoya expressed her desire to stay with him lifelong. So sweet!
What do I say about Asad. This guy takes my heart away every time with his sweet gestures. It was really heart warming to see Asad step back & kiss her cheek rather than her lips. He had the permission but still he respected her & the values.
Coming to Humi & Haider part. Well this Kamran jerk has my heart speeding, in a negative way, I really feel anxious & scared not knowing what he'll do next. He's a scary monster, absolutely related to Razia.
Well I must praise Haider's efficiency for coming up with a plan & calming down both the ladies. I just pray he's able to fool him the way he thinks he can. I agree with Asad, Haider & Humi need to watch where they're goin cause they'll be under scrutiny.
So Shireen does know somebody with the name Ahmed Khan? Lets see when she recognizes him.
Continue soon..
Love lots.. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Sis,

Congratulations on starting the new thread 🥳.
Its a bit sad too cause this will bee the last thread as the story's about to end.
Okay I'll start from the near end part. Gosh, you gave my heart a squeezed. I felt panicked all of a sudden thinking Kamran was there who was calling Asad as Asad Ahmed Khan, when it was only Zoe. phew.. what a relief.
Now coming to the main parts. You know I really thought Asad was going to play dumb till the last moment & then leave without explaining. But I was glad the second time Zoe forced him to speak. Gosh, pagal just overheard things & took such a big decision. I know he's absolutely right in his place but still before depositing such a big load on his heart, he should have talked to her. Good thing the Princess told him what to do in case of any confusion. I really loved how Zoya expressed her desire to stay with him lifelong. So sweet!
What do I say about Asad. This guy takes my heart away every time with his sweet gestures. It was really heart warming to see Asad step back & kiss her cheek rather than her lips. He had the permission but still he respected her & the values.
Coming to Humi & Haider part. Well this Kamran jerk has my heart speeding, in a negative way, I really feel anxious & scared not knowing what he'll do next. He's a scary monster, absolutely related to Razia.
Well I must praise Haider's efficiency for coming up with a plan & calming down both the ladies. I just pray he's able to fool him the way he thinks he can. I agree with Asad, Haider & Humi need to watch where they're goin cause they'll be under scrutiny.
So Shireen does know somebody with the name Ahmed Khan? Lets see when she recognizes him.
Continue soon..
Love lots.. ❤️


Lol looks like I had your heart jumping all over the place. Thank you so much sweetheart, am really glad you liked it, and thank you for the detailed feedback.

Yes Shireen did recognise the name let's see what she remembers in the morning.

Love u lots

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