SaHil OS: You Belong With Me (prequel to OS:Her Voice)-link on pg.2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am editing the original so this will be a little different as it follows the Nida track before the SaHil wedding and Sahil are best friends. (Ps. Rehaan and Sanam are not friends/he's more of an older brother to her)


You Belong With Me OS

Sanam was washing the dishes as it was 10:00 pm and after dinner. She was humming her lullaby that her Badi Ammi would always sing to her when she and Haya were babies.

But she stopped when she heard footsteps... "who's up at this time?" She turned around and caught the sight of Aahil walking in.

"Nida, I'm sorry!" Aahil apologized as Sanam raised an eyebrow while she continued to wash the dishes after she turned back.

You're on the phone with your girlfriend"she's upset,
She's going off about something that you said
'Cause she doesn't get your humor like I do.

"Well, I thought you look nice in that blue shirt." Aahil explained. Sanam got a confused look on her face since Nida was upset over a blue shirt?

Sanam cringed as she heard Nida swear at him. Wow! Sanam mentally exclaimed as she started to dry the dishes.

"Do you want me to beg, goddamnit Nida!" Aahil cut the girl off.

Sanam cringed even more as she heard Nida scream louder.

"Are we still talking about that blue shirt?" Aahil

I'm in the room, it's a typical Tuesday night.
I'm listening to the kind of music she doesn't like.
And she'll never know your story like I do.

But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts
She's cheer captain
And I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.

If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you.
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see"
You belong with me,
You belong with me?

Walk in the streets with you in your worn out jeans
I can't help thinking this is how it ought to be.
Laughing on a park bench thinking to myself,
"Hey, isn't this easy?"

And you've got a smile
That can light up this whole town.
I haven't seen it in awhile
Since she brought you down.

You say you're fine"I know you better than that.
Hey, what you doing with a girl like that?

She wears high heels,
I wear sneakers.
She's cheer captain,
And I'm on the bleachers.
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.

If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you,
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see"
You belong with me?

Standing by and waiting at your backdoor.
All this time how could you not know, baby?
You belong with me,
You belong with me.



Oh, I remember you driving to my house
In the middle of the night.
I'm the one who makes you laugh
When you know you're 'bout to cry.
I know your favorite songs,
And you tell me about your dreams.
Think I know where you belong,
Think I know it's with me.

Can't you see
That I'm the one
Who understands you?
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see"
You belong with me?

Standing by and waiting at your backdoor.
All this time how could you not know, baby?
You belong with me,
You belong with me.

You belong with me.

Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?

You belong with me.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love Swift and this is awesome.



They're best friends! I mean wow!




I'm reminiscing plenty great memories with this one! Beautifully depicted! That too on Sanam and Aahil!


Amazing job you've done with the song!!




Mwahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I also wrote an OS on the exact same song couple months back

I always write OS or love stories inspired by songs

Anyways it was a nice OS😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww..thats so cute! 😳 I used to love this song so much 😆
And now its on my SaHil..hayyee
They were friends in this! 😲😆 That too.. best friends!! 😲😲 😆 Super stuff yaar! Really loved it! Yes they do belong with each other!!

Its so far though, till they realise it..😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was reallyy reealllyyy nice! <333333333333333333 it! plzzz do write more on SaHil!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was not crap!!!. So don't belittle or underestimate your skills. Wish I could write something readable.
Please continue writing and entertain us.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazing. So well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww 😳 This was sooo cute! <3 How adorable of SaHil.
Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Link for SaHil OS: Her Voice: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4053117
Thank you for your likes and comments, they motivate me to write more and more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!
wonderful!!

loved it!!!

yay!!!! They confessed!!!

wish something like this happens in the show!!!

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