AsYa SS: 'You are driving me crazy' [Part 2 : Pg 12] - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Emaani.95


I read your comment MONA DARLING! 😃 --- YAYY !! ☺️
Will reply to it soon. :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice
excited to read more
thanx for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Loved it Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...update soon...thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
So asad such a big lie WORK just to go see the abaya girl
So he waited and waited listen to the song relating to her
Then getting desperate he prayed he beg god to see her
And then she just passed with head down
He follows and waits but she don't come out from orphanage
He investigates her bcuz he needs to know everything he can't wait to know pieces of her
And the mystery is solve he knows everything sadden by the death of her parents
Zoya so decibe her
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345

😳Another one


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Yo babyjaan ! Yo Mona Darling! 🤗

I did notice something strange in his gaze. He seemed curious and delighted at the same time. It seemed like his eyes were smiling at me. 😃😃

Asad lied to his friends, just to catch a glimpse of Zoya ! ASAD !!! 😳
Chalta hai yaar. Itna jhoot toh sab hi bol lete hain.. 😆
I'll go completely crazy if I saw whole of her face. 😳 Much crazier , now that he didn't get to see her eyes even. 😆
Lol yeah! Didn't get what he desired. He is a goner now. 😉
Loved him pleading to God ! How CUTE was that ! Actually I am the one who pleads to Allah like this. I know am cute. Hahah 😆

He followed her to the orphanage 😲 Her eyes have really attracted him, pulled him magnetically ! Itna zyaada that he hired a investigator to know more about her. WAAH ! 😳 He is an impatient soul.

The mystery named 'Zoya' was finally solved.
"Zoya." Her name escaped my lips as a sigh. Her name was as pure as she herself was. ⭐️

Okay , so one good update ! Loved reading it !
Thanks a ton Mona Darling! ❤️
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I hope this comment meets your demands ! 😆
It does! 😃

Love you Doll ! {a li'l flattering, need the Darling to my name back 😉😛} -- JK
❤️

HAHAHAH! 😆 No need to flatter me. You already got it. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both parts together! Very very impressive! You've managed to capture my attention and now you leave me wanting more and more!! Excellent job!

Am already looking forward for more frustration from Asad! Heee!

And then of course, their eventual meeting!


Very different concept, yet not quite. Am so intrigued to see how the story shall move from this point!


Waiting! :)


Mwahhh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update.
Superb one
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

very nice

excited to read more
thanx for the pm
update soon




Originally posted by: ak020203

Beautiful update. Thanks


Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update...thank you the PM..continue soon... 😊


Thanks guys! (:

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