ASYA FF : Love Happens #3 Updated Chapter 20 pg 96 (Banner Added) - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago


😆 Bas that's all you can say Sherry????? Now that I gave you the update, I want my comment too 😃
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Choco...
Muwh muwh muwh...

Ooohhhooo the best prt

Tht was fabulous dear
So amzng nd so romantic updt
definitely worth to wait


Nd the kiss *blush**blusuh*
So beautifully writhen

Keep it up dear


Wht nxt...nikhaah ?????


Continue soon



Thanks Gowtu. Am glad you liked it. Nikah!!!!I don't know haven't planned 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update. So beautifully written.
So romantic
Love asya kiss. So sweet and romantic. Just love the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aniha20

res
unres 😉
di you well know about me i awaited last night but i dont know when i dozed off
coming to update..
update was awesome 👏
again mrs khan but this time infront of asad he had hard time to control laughter 😆
loved the way how zoya confessed softly 😉
"I am where I should be...close to you he whispered." 😃
their session was..i could not say because i am ☺️☺️😆
next waiting for their marriage 😳
p.s yeah ofcourse this update is worth to ☺️
update soon di..


No worries baba I know I took long in updating sorry 😳.

Am so happy you liked it buddy 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Mine

Yay...first spot but so late in feeding back...ooops 😳

Sorry ChocoBerry I fell asleep.

The chapter was amazing, I totally loved it

Awakening and stirring his primitive desires oh la la

Seriously this has to be one of the best make out sessions I have read

Their little moment after their great encounter was so cute.

Mwah

Love u Sis



First things first, you will never apologize to me. I know what you do and why. I don't want you to apologize ever again.

And now that you have finally updated your comment 😃 am so happy you liked it. You know I have never written anything like this before and was not sure of it either. But the feedback I got tells me it wasn't as bad as i thought it was 😆


I like that little moment too (better than the make out session).


Love you too 🤗
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

OMG Berry! That was mind-blowing..👏👏

I am smiling like an idiot now..😆☺️

One of the best chapters of this story..👏
Not because of the ahem ahem..😆 But because it was WONDERFUL..👍🏼

And Zoya is so caring..😊 She wanted to meet him but hung back because of Najma..😊

Asad is super sweet..
What if something had happened? What if I had lost consciousness before the police arrived? What if I had lost you?

Everyone addresses them as a couple.. Awww..

Asad remembers her confession.. Even though he was unconscious..😳😳
"I remember almost every word you said..." He told her in a whisper.

And the best part was...⭐️⭐️
"I will never be able to shut you out Zoya. No matter what, my sixth sense will always keep me connected to you. I love you so much."
These lines killed me Choco..☺️
Telling her they are always connected..😳😳

Saying that he pulled her closer, encircling his arms around her and very gently he held onto her. She smiled at his confession and wrapped her arms around him "I love you too." She whispered back.

❤️❤️❤️

The update was truly worth the wait Berry..😊

Ab agla wala jaldi jaldi..😆😆



Thank you Shravs am glad you liked it and feel it was worth the wait 😃 and thank you so so much for the super long comment, I loved reading it.


I loved writing the last few lines too and I was also smiling like a fool typing them. I enjoyed writing every bit of this chapter too.


Now my brain is not functioning need some time to think about what to write in the next chapter 😕


Itni jaldi update nahi mil sakta wait until next week 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

aweweee...very romantic update 😳

finally they confessed
I m so happy
😉 update soon



I'm happy too as you liked the update Cale. Thanks for reading 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb part loved it

finally wow confession
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon



Thank you glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

super update..loved it!



Thank you 😊
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