#2 ASYA/KABHI ~This is how it Began~ Ch. 28 Pg 116 'PM later' - Page 77

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


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Heyyy...,
Well thanx for the P.M...,
So yes it was a short update...but it was fun and entertaining also...,
I liked this part...,Like Zoya we also wanted to have a light moment in this story...and what else than siblings banters...
Very well written...
But i don't know about the Seperation Track...if you are so thinking about Armaan you can make him like someone else also a new character...because from My P.O.V i didn't see Zoya was at some mistake regarding...and if i remember he ( Armaan ) didn't even confessed i guess to her...so she was always friendly with him...
But again if you have decided for a track on seperation and even everybody is also giving it a thums up...
Then iam all game...
Continue soon...
# And this is my View...so don't be offended by it..

Awww thanx so much I am really glad u liked the update😃
Dont worry the next part will be loads of cute and fluff type scenes maybe one serious scene followed by more cute stuff 😃
I am not offended at all 😃
No more seperation track many people dont want it and I dont want to write it that much either I am happy writing fun and cute scene for now😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

finally getting updt😃

Asad got discharged & Zoya was more happy as nurses were flirting wid her bf😆😆
Naj came 2 meet her bro & Zoe got angry 2 know they never told her
D scene when nurse ran away in fear of Zoya was hilarious🤣
Asnaj scenes were very cute😛
Najma also had bf who happens 2 b SM😲😲😲
Zoya got jhot mot ka angry so that Asnaj will mnao her😆
& bas that's it😲😲

What... seperation...nahi... r u like serious i will kill u sachi main😲😲
sab log kuain main kudenge toh tu bhi kodegi kya😡
Be different baby...maain katti ho jaungi sachi main
Main Pinky se katti kar di hai Forgotten hubby ke baad😆
so beware...😈

Phir bhi if u want than sepration aisa ho ke door hoke bhi dono paas hi hon like dono kisi matter pe agree nahi karte ladte hain but still r 2gather very much in love😉...Sepration ki wajah Armaan ya koi aur na ho...kbaab main aur haddi nahi chahiye yaar...pretty plz😳😳😳

Awww thanx so much yaar I am really happy u liked the update
LOL I was scared of your reaction hahhahahahaa
No Katti no separation track right now at all pinky promise and I wont break my pinky promise either 😃
LOL no kabab main Haddi 😆
bechara Armaan lets see what happens to this bechara 😲
Dont worry I wont take this long to update again u will have your update really soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

nice

loved it
no separation track plz
if everyone is give sad n tragic stories doesnt means u too should
plzz dont do it
as for armaan
if u want u can bring twin for zoya or her resemblence
as ur wish
but plz dont do it
plz update soon

Awww thanx so much I am glad u liked it
No seperation track at all promise 😃
Thats a good idea lets see what happens to our bechara Devdas Armaan 😆
Dont worry there will be no tragedy at all
U will have the update really really soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

short but really very cute update...
lovely sibling banter
nw that u hv decided fr a separation track... plz chotu si separation ...

Awww thanx yaar I am glad u liked it
I changed my mind and made a deal with my friend no more separation track only happy and cute stuff 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

yay! finally

loved brother and sister bonding!
feel bad for Armaan 😒
but AsYa are cutee 😃
continue soon!
do PM me plz

Awww thanx glad u liked it
bechra Armaan
Many more cute and sweet Asya scene coming up
updating it really soon and will defiantly PM u as well 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

Cute update..

Asya n tomato r cutipies...
Small seperation is ok bt pls dnt make it so sad

Awww thanx glad u liked it
Dont worry no tragic or sad separation at all coming only happy sweet scenes 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Nice

Me likey

Thank you for the pm

Awww thanx so much glad u liked it
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww I'm sorry will try to make the next update longer 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Aww I so loved the banter between Asad-Zoya and Tamatar.
I'm aleady envisioning them in the same house.

Hahaha Asad doesn't like being called Bhaijaan. LOL

It was a funny, cute moment wala update.

About the Note :
I'm okay with Separation tracks as long as it's gonna have Happy Ending.
ToBeHonest : I LOVE separation track. 😉

And yes it's my turn to update. Pehle tu woh 2 din baad wala update dedey na 😉 Please.

Awww thanx so much yaar I am really happy u liked it
This story regardless will have a happy ending I hate sad endings so much they are sad and depressing and literally make me cry u should have seen my during Pinkys tragedy which I never even thought of I literally didnt eat for a good 2 days and cried a lot I am really emotional 😭 Sad endings are stupid and sad and and and make me cry and break my little tiny heart
Yes ur turn to update and I want a Asya filled update also and I will be updating soon u need to update this week 😃

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