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Posted: 11 years ago

cheer up Mahu bear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kal raat...nhii..aashna.
Itna late

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divram

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I'm first yippeee!!!🥳
Wow!! I totally loved the way you portrayed Zoya's nightmare to Asad.. It was like she unconsciously laid her soul bare for him to see...👏⭐️
It is so heartbreaking to see her cry so badly for her mother saying she feels alone... 😭
When she started talking about Asad... I guess he realized that she is also haunted by his thoughts... Asad was speechless...he dropped his bag and sat on the sofa...he covered his mouth and took in a few breaths...It was too much to take in...Zoya had been thinking about him, he was sure of it..Her subconscious still dwelled on the moments they had encountered...
Mom how did I feel all these things for a stranger...I was supposed to feel them for my husband..but I felt it for him...Now that cant be right now can it...She hugged her pillow tighter as she shivered in acknowledgment...
I hope they both accept it sooner before something bad happens.. I don't trust Rihaan..😡
Even in her subconscious mind, though she reminisces her moments with Asad.. She still wants her marriage to work.. She is just amazing...👏⭐️
Asad followed his heart a little now.. he kneeled down by the bed and pulled up her sheets...He was too hesitant to touch her...But she found him. Her hands found his..as he grabbed the duvet...She pulled on to his hand in hers and hugged it tight...Her heaving eased a little along with her sobs...She nuzzled into his hands and took in a deep breath...That calmed her down instantly... Asad didn't react...he let her do what she wanted to do...His heart was aching, listening, seeing and feeling what Zoya was going through..He felt a lump in his throat as he saw her calm down...He realized she was in pain.She had been in pain for a long time..
Him analysing her situation and inner turmoil was beautifully written.. Now his need to protect her is 10 times stronger... 😃👏
His inner turmoil.. Wow you portrayed them all so beautifully👏🤗. Grabbing his night clothes he went into the washroom and let the hot water from the shower wash away his worries...He wanted everything within him to burn away, leaving nothing but ash...a barren ground where he could start over, get the closure he needed for him and his sister. He stood under the pouring shower...naked, vulnerable and full of angst...Life had been tough on him and he was starting to feel the weight now.There were a lot of unanswered questions around him and soon they would take over his sanity.He needed answers, bad...
This Abdul guy is a serious psycho... His smile was pure sinister as he looked at their pictures...There were so many pictures of so many girls..All the girls he had used...to get what he wanted...money...🤢
Well Atleast he didn't proudly boast about killing Najma... 😡How disgustingly and cowardly he poisoned her... And to top it.. He is cheap.. I'm so sure its Rihaan.. I remember in previous update he said the next afternoon he has something big planned for Zoya... And this abdul guy is also bent on finishing her... I'm correct na?? 😡
And the song opens the dam of memories... hehehee😆... Wow!! The way she remembered all those details was beautifully written👏... Loved it.. now for the showdown..
ooo nice Ayaan is keeping a watch on Abdul(aka Rihaan)... Loved Asad and Ayaan's bond... 😃
Asad put the phone down and went to pick up his work phone...He was surprised to see Ms Farooqi's name flash on the screen... He took in a breath and answered the call... Heheheee Time to face the music... 🤣
Update the next part soon... 😊

res..will come back to it soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks gal😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
M waiting. ..
Lingerie romance or pool romance...😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

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That was awesomely awesome prt

Aaahh so finaallyy she remembered wht hppnd in that n8 nd was with asad..
Loved it to the core..

Nd 1st scene was gud nd beautiful
That y he wanted to save her from Abdul r rehaan..
Hmm r anything els the reason 😉


I m sure he cares for her but love ?????
Humz's entry.. Wow liking frwrd for it..

Feeling so bad for najma..
That bast*d killed her..
He doesn't know anthng about asad bcz he never met r tried to know about najma's family members hmmm

Now wants to kill my baby..
Ab tho jayega kaamse..

There is waiting for him non other than Mr.aak

Lolll now wht gonna he say to her..
Poor zoya 😆 😆

Continue soon

res brb😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

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another beautiful update ...
so this happened before asad left the hotel...
zoya poured her heart out in her sleep... talking to her mom aloud...
asad is sort of haunted because of what all she confessed...
loved the way u delivered out her inner self...
now this abdul. ... such a disgusting person... playing around with girls and then killing them up... arghh... plz asad se ache joote khilana isse...
ayaan ki humaira is also coming in a week...
zoya ... a blurred images began to clear up... and the face she saw made her freeze...
she remembered a lot n now will ask asad the details... ask???... may b she will just blow out... but asad os ready out there... ah the bawaal coming up...
thanx for updating soon aashna...
awesome update...
continue soon...

res 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: potternerd

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Wow aashna thanks for updating hun 😊
Lovely update👏⭐️
And omg zoya remembers everything now 😆😆
Let's see what happens when zoya talks to asad 😆😊
And finally ayaan-asad have a solid lead on Abdul the devil 😡
Inshallah Najma will soon get justice 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

M waiting. ..

Lingerie romance or pool romance...😈


besharam😲☺️

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