SaHil SS: Face to Face (updated May 31)Discontinued

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Picture This: After today's fall and SaHil staring back n' forth sequence, Aahil and Sanam come face to face well Sanam still has her face covered but until Aahil's cousin's engagement party, Aahil sees her actual face and they argue but agree to become friends 😉 because Aahil's step-mother Tanu is coming back so he does not want to stress her out. Nazia and Sanam becomes good friends while Shazia feels a pull toward Sanam like they are sisters(In this FF, Shazia is Seher.) As they are preparing for Tanveer, Sanam and Aahil go through some ordeals and falls in love but when Tanveer returns, what will happen to Sanam? What's going to happen to Sahil?
-Few new characters will come soon---
Updates: every Fridays(sometimes)

PS: Shazia/Seher and Sanam are twins (fraternal but born identical like the Olsens and my friend and her sister- when they were younger they looked exactly the same but now they look super different because of the genes.)

Index:
Prologue(Ch1):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4013627&PID=106003514&#p106003514
Chapter Two:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4013627&TPN=2
Chapter Three:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4013627&PID=107532699&#p107532699
Chapter Four:
Chapter Five:
Chapter Six:
Chapter Seven:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Epilogue:
Character Sketch: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4013627&PID=107963856&#p107963856
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!
YAY! I'm first.

Okay so I'll admit I haven't read your other work, but I will soon 😳

AND I am loving your concept for this 😃

Waiting anxiously 😛
Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago
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Interesting... cant wait to read more ;)
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interesting. Looking forward to it
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Interesting
Continue soon
Do pm me when u update
Thanks
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Prologue

Aahil watched as the mystery girl walked away but she stopped to look back at him. Her eyes held many different emotions that it mesmerized him so much that he knew that she wasn't like all the other girls.

His eyes held lust while her's held child-like curiosity, it made her look like an angel. Aahil continued to scrutinize her as she turned away and walked off.

He was curious to know who she was and where she came from but all he knew at this moment was that he wanted her.

He wanted her mind, body and soul...

After all what Aahil Raza Ibrahim wants, Aahil Raza Ibrahim gets.

Chapter One: Sisters Reunion part 1.

Sanam rolled around in her sleep on her cot in the servant's quarter of house as the servant hall's phone rings. She sat up and wiped sleep from her eyes before she started to mutter under her breath.

She picked up the phone and it was Lateef, screaming at her to wake up and cook breakfast because Nazia had a friend over. Sanam rolled her eyes as she listened to Lateef ranting on about bacon, what?

"Um, Bacon" Sanam asked.

"Jessie Ma'am loves bacon with her eggs." Lateef giggled as Sanam thought about a girl named Jessie who loves bacon. The only person she knew who was like that was her Masi's daughter Jessie Natalia but she hasn't heard from Jess in awhile despite skyping her masi and masa at the cyber cafe.

"Ms. Duffer!" Lateef yelled again which caused Sanam to keep the phone miles away from her ear.

"Yes, Ji, coming." Sanam replied. Her Masi, Samantha Ryan Knight was the daughter of two Christian missionaries who passed away a long time ago. She had little memory of her Masi who at the time was a retired Marine with a kid, her bhai Reagan. She spoke to Reagan once in a while but mainly to Jessie.

But not speaking to Jessie, made her feel a little down because Jessie always was a burst of energy. Reagan was an akdu like his father, Ryan but as of now, she knew that Reagan was an officer in the Marines while Jessie is a nineteen year old student.

While being lost in her thoughts, she had managed to brush her teeth and get dressed in a salwar suit. Sanam looked at herself in the mirror as she combed her hair and braided her hair quickly as possible.

Sanam rushed out, quickly walking into the kitchen and she started pulling out materials needed for cooking.

She started to count the supplies, six eggs, three bacon strips, twelve oranges, one bag of brown rice, one tablespoon of cinnamon, and a very large jug of milk.

"Ms. Duffer!" Lateef yelled as Sanam was cutting the oranges in half and she sliced a mark on her finger.

"OW!" Sanam yelled clutching her hand.



Meanwhile,

Aahil was walking by the kitchen when he heard a loud yell and as he was passing by the kitchen. He stopped and ran in.

He was curious...

In the Kitchen,

Sanam heard someone's footsteps so she quickly placed her dupatta on her head and wore as she did yesterday in front of Mr. Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

"Are you okay?" He asked as Sanam's heart stopped.

"Um, I.." She stuttered as he grabbed her hand, clutching her finger and blowing on it.

"Why are you working if you can't do it properly?" he asked as he went to the draw and pulled out the first aid kit.

Aahil started to dress her wound as she stared at him with a shocked look on her covered face and her eyes full of fright and desire.

He looked up at her as she continued to stare at him. Her heart started to race as she tried to control her breathing while he walked up closer to her.

Sanam still continued to stare at her as he gently set her hand down and reached out to touch her covered face


while "Aahil Bhai," they heard a voice call out. Sanam's eyes widen, that voice was familiar, it was Jessie.

Aahil sighed and dropped his hand back before he left, bumping into a young nineteen year old girl with curly hair.

"Hey Jessie," Aahil smiled before leaving.

Jessie smiled back before approaching Sanam.

"Hey, do you need help?" she asked Sanam as she took the first aid kit and placed it away.

Sanam shook her head, rapidly cause her head cover to fall.

Jessie's eyes widen as she squealed, "Sanu." before hugging her.

"How? Why? When?" she asked Sanam in one breath.

Sanam shushed her as Jessie did hand motion of Why.

"Because my dhaba was burned down and my fiancee left with Badi Ammi's jewels so I came here for work." Sanam explained as Jessie glared at her.

"You do know that my mom and dad are willing to help you I mean we did help with the creation of your house and dhaba in Punjab. So why didn't you ask?"


"Because I like working for my dreams and I know Masi is always there to help but I want to earn it by myself." Sanam explained.

"Okay suit yourself, but let me help you with the cooking." Jessie's British drawl came out at the end.

Sanam nodded, happily.

"So how do you know them, Khala, Khalu, and Lateef?" Sanam asked.

Jessie was frying the eggs as she replied, " I was here on a mission trip with my church when I applied here for college in the fine arts of computer designing when I ran into Nazia and we became friends, good friends in fact like sisters. In college, our friendship was pretty different because I am Christian and is British while she is a Muslim and Indian. So now this place is my hang out zone."


"So do you have a place to stay?" Sanam asked.


"Yeah, it's a cool place called Khan Villa, mom told me that Zoya Masi and Uncle Asad had met and lived there for sometime before they moved somewhere." Jessie smiled as Sanam paused what she was doing.

"When they died, Dad bought it for you, me, and Haya Didi so yeah." Jessie laughed.

"For me?" Sanam asked as tears pooled up in her eyes.

Jessie stopped what she was doing and looked at her cousin before engulfing Sanam in a hug.

Sanam cried out her tears of the past and Jessie kept quiet.

Precap:

Aahil gets infuriated at Sanam for adding chutney to everything.

Edited by StephyM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES for prologue 😳

Edited:

AHH!! I love Aahil in this version 😳

Aww I love that Sanam has someone she knows in Bhopal. I wish they'd do that in the show.

I wonder if Jessie will help her learn more of her past, and what happened to her parents. 😃

Loved it!

Please continue soon! 😃
Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so cool! Why I don't read it in the first place?😕
Glad I read it. It's so good! Amazing concept!
Awesome start man! Too good! Loved how you wrote. And the par where he dresses her wounds. 😳 That eyelock.
Super stuff!!
Waiting for chutney charcha😆
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Lovely start...I loved Aahil and Sanam part the most...and I loved how Aahil is going all restless to see Sanam's face...don't let that happen soon. 😉 😆 and guess what? I was reading this part with my earplugs on...what else would be playing...Junoon Tere Ishq Ka 😳 that kitchen scene became all the more romantic 😆 do continue soon.
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Chapter 2: Chutney on Omelet

"So what did you make for Aahil Bhai?" Jessie smirked at Sanam. Jessie Natalia Knight had seen what happened earlier with Sanam and Aahil before she made her presence known.

She was shocked that Bhopal's James Dean had been mesmerized by a girl wearing traditional dress and it was strange to figure out that the point of his attention was her older cousin sister, Sanam.

Aahil was a Casanova and everyone knew it...

The neighbors knew it...

The street kids knew it...

The dogs knew it...

But this was the first time she saw that He, Aahil Raza Ibrahim was actually mesmerized by a girl because Aahil Bhai never got mesmerized by any girl, he was attracted, sexually of course to mini skirt wearing modern Indian girls which made no sense to her.

Jessie was raised by an American mom who lived in the 21st century while her dad was a traditionalist Christian who lived in the 17th century.

So she was modern as in her strong beliefs about life and religion along with business yet she had conservative Christian and Indian upbringing. Still she was modern but that doesn't mean she had to dress up like a stripper.

When she watched Indian movies with her mom, they both would get appalled by the choice of clothing for Americans. Tube Tops, Mini Skirts, and Stilettos heels.

Like Shazia for example, Jessie's never the judgmental type but Shazia can be a cold, cruel, and controlling woman.

To her, Shazia's a plain ole b-word it's like she's the female Aahil.

Shazia toys with her boyfriends' emotions and always comes home late with bite marks on her neck and drunk. Not to mention, when she is sober, she is the meanest judgmental person ever.

She has tons of admirers but she has to pick the hottest guy with abs just to rub them into her friends' faces.

She absolutely treats Nazia like a trash just because Nazia is everyone's favorite. And Jessie can see why because Nazia is soft spoken and has modest despite being modern but something about Nazia makes her worry.

It's like Nazia has a secret or something.

When she first met Nazia...

It was art class, she sat down in the back next to the window and it was next to Nazia. They said their greetings until they became fast friends.

That was a year ago...

Yet Jessie felt really close to Nazia and it was strange. Strange because Nazia and her Didi, Haya looked so much alike that it was uncanny.

Jessie recalled the night when she told her mom Sam about Nazia and her similarity to Haya. Her laughed and said, "The Bible tells us that, we are made in the image of God so maybe that's why Haya and Nazia are similar because God created them in His image."

Her Mom's laugh was so strange because she did an awkward laugh before quoting Scripture. Samantha Knight was the most hilarious person she had ever known. Yeah, her mom was strict and serious when she had to be but despite that she was calm and cool.

Jessie knew all about the military history or careers in security that her relatives had.

Her maternal uncle Jesse Nathaniel, the one she was named after was in the Marines and died in combat at age 21.

She learned that his death had hurt her mom a lot so in remembrance and sense to protect her nation. Her mom joined the Marines and served for four years.

Her Zoya Masi, was a homicide detective and computer engineer for the NYPD before she went to India and got married there then had kids, and was killed by fire. At least that's what her mother tells her.

It's not like that she doubts her mom but it seems to fishy for the past year she was trying to figure out the reason why she feels so connected to Nazia and why does Nazia share some similarities to Haya as if they are sisters.

Maybe Haya and Nazia are sisters? But that's strange.

Like Aahil Bhai's fake American accent that she heard him when he was flirting.

From Shazia's b*tch fits, Nazia's background, Lateef's not so discreet crush on Aahil, Khala-Khalu's cluelessness to Aahil Bhai's playboy diva tantrums.

She, Jessie Natalia Knight learned to deal with them while her sweet and cute cousin sister will need some help with the craziness of this family.

Oh Sweet Jesus, help my darling sister like ASAP with this...

Jessie prayed with her eyes opened, staring into open air while Sanam looked at her.

"Jessie?" Sanam waved her hand in front of her face.

Jessie snapped out and "YO!" as she jumped back.

Sanam laughed.

"What?" Jessie asked putting a smiley on someone's toast.

"That's cute." Sanam pointed to that.

Jessie smiled "thank you s" Before

"Miss Duffer!!!" Lateef yelled as s/he ran in with the menu for Aahil.

Jessie and Sanam looked at each other with eyebrows raised.

Lateef froze staring at Sanam and Jessie.

"Ya Allah," s/he gasped.

"You two look so much alike! Are you two sisters?" Lateef giggled.

"Um we're second cousins; our dadi's were half-sisters so yeah." Jessie nodded.

"Okay so here is Laad Saab's menu" Lateef handed to Sanam.

Jessie smirked at her again as Sanam stuck her tongue out at her.

Again, they made another meal for someone and this time it's for Mr. Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

Jessie poured out the juice as Sanam was adding her favorite chutney on his omelet and toast before Lateef came to get it.

After Lateef was leaving, Jessie got a glimpse of the tray and her eyes widen.

She walked up to Sanam, "What's that green stuff on the omelet?"

"My super famous chutney that everyone loves!" Sanam smiled brightly as Jessie gulped loudly.

"Well not everyone because Aahil Bhai hates chutney." Jessie awkwardly smiled.

"Oh well" Sanam was cut off when she heard "WHO THE HELL PUTS CHUTNEY ON AN OMELET!!!!"

"I would run if I were you..." Jessie suggested.

Precap: Sanam and Jessie visits Khan Villa and Sanam meets Nuzhat. Sanam and Rehaan meets while Jessie discovers old pictures in Khan Villa of her aunt and uncle, some including Tanveer. She asks herslf,

"Who the hell is Tanveer?'

Edited by StephyM - 11 years ago

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