Asya TS: Hui hamari dua qubool!

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{ this story starts after asad making zoya to apologise to tanveer for the bank statement issue.}

Everyone except zoya was in dining area having tea. Dilshad was extremely upset. She knows zoya won't say about someone without knowing it properly. Tanveer! Something about her is really fishy. She has hidden about her marriage, her abusive husband & her eloping to Bhopal from him. Zoya says that she saw her bank statements. Tanveer says her partners runs it. Dilshad was so confused. What will be truth? On top of that asad made zoya to apologise to tanveer. Was that really needed? Zoya obeyed him only because she respects him & doesn't want him to low his head in front of anyone. She knows asad doesn't want any rifts between zoya & tanveer. Even then he should not have asked zoya to apologise tanveer.

Najma was not aware of the issue. Except her the other three was having that tension in air. Dilshad was giving angry glare to asad. Asad knew his ammi is angry & her anger is genuine. He asked zoya to apologise to tanveer only because he doesn't want anyone to fight each other. More over he wants peace.
Najma: ammi dekho zoya.
Dilshad, asad & tanveer was shocked to see zoya with her luggage.
Dilshad: where are you going beta?
Zoya: I am leaving this house forever.
No doubt asad & dilshad was shocked to the core. Tanveer was happy. Zoya did noticed tanveer's happy face.
Dilshad: beta dekho
Zoya: no phupi. I am really sorry. I can't carry on this Nakli nikkah drama here after.
Najma: what are you saying zoya? Nakli nikkah?
Zoya: ha najma. Nakli nikkah. Mr.khan & me carried on this drama as phupi was not well. Now I know phupi is fine. That's why I am revealing it.
Dilshad: zoya. FYI I was never sick. I just acted like that because I wanted you both to get married. After asad announcing your nikkah in front of your API I did reveal about it to him.
Zoya was shocked.
Dilshad: even after knowing that why do you think asad carried on with the nikkah. Beta he is a bit introvert. He may not be able to confess his feelings soon. But why you are leaving now?
Zoya: phupi. I am sorry. But I can't take it any more. Marriage is not a joke for me. It's a life time commitment. I can't marry a man who doesn't even have 1% trust on me. May be mr.khan really likes me & wanted to takes this marriage seriously. But truth is that he believes tanveer more than me. I know she the one & only friend for him & he is maintaining his friendship. Even then I am his fianc. When ever something goes wrong he so confidently put that blame on me & he wants proof to believe me. If staring it self is like this then what will happen in future? I can't be a wife of a man who doesn't respects his wife & prefers his bestie's feelings over his wife. Please forgive me phupi. I know you are hurt. At least this pain can be erased. But something likes this happens after our nikkah your pain will remain for ever. So it's better to end this meaningless relationship.
Zoya showed her ring to asad. He was astonished.
Zoya: take this mr.khan
Asad: ms.farooqui please listen
Zoya: now what should I listen mr.khan? Or you want me to apologise to your precious tanu once more?
Asad: no ms.farooqui
Zoya: see mr.khan I know you never wanted a girl like me in your life. You always wanted a women like tanveer. Even then we got stuck in a meaningless relationship. I myself is releasing you from it. So you should be happy. And moreover you should marry tanveer. Since you cares for her trusts her so much it will be easy for you.
Asad: what are you saying zoya?
Zoya: truth. You trust her blindly. She is your one & only best friend. She is matured & traditional. You can get her divorced from her cruel husband. Then after that you can marry her & protect her forever.
She throwed her ring on his face.
Zoya: put this on your tanu's finger. Now itself she is so happy. If you do that she will be extremely happy.
Tanveer: zoya
Zoya: if you utter my name once more from your dirty mouth I swear that I will kill you. I know you have hidden a devils face behind you innocent & sweet behaviour. Unfortunately mr.khan blindly trusts you. Even if I shout truth he prefers your polite lies. I very well know what are your intentions. You know what I am not standing in front of your way anymore. I am not interested. Why should I fight to show your real face when mr.khan himself never cares for my feelings?
Asad: zoya it's not like that.
Zoya: oh really mr.khan. It's you who declared me as your fianc. It's you who engaged me in the airport. You have declared this engagement as Nakli. It's you again who proceeded with it. I thought to give you a chance. But you proved that you don't care about me. If you cared my feelings then you would not have asked me to apologised to tanveer. You would have Atleast given an effort to find out whether I was saying truth or not? Instead you were so worried about your tanu's fake tears. A real man will not allow to put down his women Infront of anyone. Your ways prove that tanu is your women not me.
Tanveer: zoya just try to understand
Thupak! Zoya bet on tanveer's face hardly.
Zoya: I told you not to utter my name from your dirty mouth. You had a broken relationship in your life & now you are trying to spoil others life also. Now you can be with your jammy forever. I don't want him. Anyways you never leave a chance to touch him & stick to him like a fevicol even forgetting that you are a married women.
Every one was extremely shocked to see zoya's outburst.
Zoya: I am really sorry phupi. Please forgive me.
Dilshad had tears.
Dilshad: zoya you & najma is same for me. I never differentiated you from her. You have done what a women with self respect will do. I thought one day my son will change one day after his marriage with you. But he proved me wrong. He had done the same thing like his abbu.
Asad was astonished.
Dilshad: ha asad you heard it correct. Even rashid insulted my self respect for another women. Even if najma was in similar situation I would have asked her to do the same thing. I don't want zoya to suffer anymore.
Zoya: thank you phupi.
She hugged her. Dilshad blessed zoya.
Zoya went near najma & hugged her.
Zoya: take care
Najma: you too
Zoya took her bag & turned towards asad.
Zoya: alvida mr.khan

Note: I really don't get why zoya behaved like an illiterate slum girl when asad insulted her self respect & asked her to apologise to tanveer. Zoya being a modern nri women stick to asad & bared all the non sense what tanveer did to her when asad didn't even bothered to care her feelings. I felt that zoya should have stood up for her self respect.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres

Billi u deserved this slap😡

Plz dont separate AsYa😭
Cont soon
Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh I am second 😕

Well done di 👏

It was awesome

I just loved it

Zoya had her rights to do that ...

I dont know why cv's didnt show that

Well u have awesome ideas di ..

keep it up

Do many more works on asya ...


Continue soon

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Pm me for next update

Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.
I liked it .
Plz continue soon.
Will be waiting for it.
Edited by kabhi-forever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part dear
loved it
what will asad do now??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story 👏 👏 ...
Love how zoya stood for herself. ...
I dont know whhy zoya behaved all dumb in front of asad 😡 ...
Zoya has every right to stand for her self respect...
Asad will know the feeling of being rejected and should suffer for taking zoya for granted 😡 ...
Bt dont give us sad ending...
Update soon...
Thanks for pm
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept...
let's see how asad will make up.for it...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Outstanding update Uma
I loved it
That slap was superb
Pls dont seperate ASYA
Pls make Tanveer suffer like hell
Pls update soon
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