KSG4ever FF: Asya - Written in the Skies#05 (Part 44/Page 56)(12/5) - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Amazing update. Loved the super long chapter.

It was amazing to see how Zoya was able to break the ice between them and how finally Asad too reciprocated in a warm way.
Loved how they discussed business in a friendly manner and how Asad gives her advice which she was happy to take.
Asad was definitely jealous of Ayaan having Zoya now and so he didn't leave one opportunity to talk negatively about him, whether it was as a banker or as a fiance.
Zoya's thoughts and guilt about enjoying herself in Ayaan's absence may indicate that she thinks she is marrying him for love but deep down she knows she is doing so only coz she has to one day or maybe coz that will make her look more responsible for the post at the store she so desperately wants.
Their walk down memory lane remembering their intimate relationship was so well written. They both feel that tension and know what it is. Hope they realize that they still love each other and what they had shared was not just sex, it was love.
Please update soon.


Thank u !!!!
All it took was a little patience for them to understand
Zoya had her's in front of front
Asad's is abt to come

Bechara husband ... his sexy wife is wearing a stupid ring of another guy
jealousy to banti hai

Zoya also needs to realise that the love she felt for Asad has not evaporated in 11 years ... its still there somewhere.

"Love is almost in the air"
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01



You don't have to make it the ending.. I mean cmon, there can be some fun in between as well..


This story has reached Part 43 Thread 5
i think that's enough

any further and it will start to feel dragged
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

The talk a lot...

at least some flash back imaginations...


in my opinion talking helps

and also ... makes the audience of this story very anxious 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Thank u !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Amna dear

its outstanding update dear
So the hatread is gone
The wall broke & friendship come forward
Both ASYA enjoying each others company
Asad is expecting Zoya to come back to him in his heart.
Pls update soon dear
You narrated everything clearly
I love it yaar
I am waiting for the main confession
Pls pls update soon
I didnt get ur pm
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Do pm next time


Thank u dear !!!
(i don't know your name )

Asya needs the friendship moment ... as last time the parenting moment came up really quickly
a little wait wont hurt ... but will definitely Heal 11 years of pain

i didn't send the PM ... i was really sleepy ... don't worry ... u are on my permanent PM list 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mitamad

Totally fab update, love it but I think u are still cheating, not giving us the chapter we are all waiting to read, actually we are all going mad waiting for.

Hurry up n finish your work so u can update the story.
Can't wait for when u next have time to update.


Thank u !!!

Hahahahhaa ... u get me so well 😉
u know i love to see u guys get all curious and anxious 😉



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

OMG that was an awesome update

loved it loved it 😉


Thank you !!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...


Thank u !!!!
All it took was a little patience for them to understand
Zoya had her's in front of front
Asad's is abt to come

Bechara husband ... his sexy wife is wearing a stupid ring of another guy
jealousy to banti hai

Zoya also needs to realise that the love she felt for Asad has not evaporated in 11 years ... its still there somewhere.

"Love is almost in the air"



Oh man I really can't wait to read. The way you describe there emotions and how you handle Asad n ZoyaIn this story is just amazing. Buddy you have to update soon.

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