asya ff I NEVER tought.....

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my attempt to a asya ff/ss.
my english and hindi are not that good because i am living in the Netherlands.
so please bare with me.

prologue
Mr.khan why don't you believe me , maine blood samples exchange nahi ki hai.
Meh kuch nahi sun na chati hai zoya. phir kisne kiya hai yeh sab. Can you explain that to me ?
mr.khan mujhe kuch nahi pata please mera yakeen kijie, meh aisa kyun..SHUT UP! our kitne jhoot bologi
tum. and he left the room.

...xx...
please tell me if i should continue.
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I CAN'T SEND PM'S because i am newbie or something. but i will try every time so buddy me for pm's and i'll try
all but if i don't, just read if you see i have updated

index
part 1- below
NEW CHARACHTERS+IMPORTANT NOTE- page2 (first read the note otherwise you won't understand the story!!)
part 2-page 2

NOTE PAGE 7 DISCONTINUING FF +NEW FF PLEASE READ.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start continue ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its nice😃
I loved the prologue😉

Continue soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1
Mr.khan why don't you believe me , maine blood samples exchange nahi ki hai.
Meh kuch nahi sun na chati hai zoya. phir kisne kiya hai yeh sab. Can you explain that to me ?
mr.khan mujhe kuch nahi pata please mera yakeen kijie, meh aisa kyun..SHUT UP! our kitne jhoot bologi
tum. and he left the room.
zoya just fell on the ground. He doesn't believe me, allah mia kyun hota aisa mere saath. Aaj jab mujhe pata chala ki me mr.khan se pyar karti hoon, unho ne mera yakeen nahi kiya. theek hai agar woh yahi chati hain ki yeh nikah our sare rasmein nakli ho to aisa hi honga.
with that tought zoya went to change and sleep.

same time other side of her room.
yah allah, yeh maine kya kardiya. mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. zoya se aise baat nahi karna chahiya tha. mujhe unse maafi maangni hongi. Abhi jao?? nahi nahi, it's very late now. Kal main unse maafi maangongi or mein use yeh bataongi ki yeh nikah our sari rasmein asli hain and... i'l tell her that i love her.


...xx...
short update i know next one will be longer i promise.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
cont soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

awesome start

cont soon
and do pm me


tnxx
i'l try to send pm's it is a bit difficult for me because i am updating
from my phone. i think it wil be easy if you send me a buddy request.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue..
good start😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE !!!!!!

I have decided to get some new charachters in the story.
see here:
sanjeeda farooqui(played by sanjeeda amir ali) : zoya's big sister and zeenat's little sister.
amir ali (amir ali):sanjeeda's honewale husband
zaina farooqui(sanaya irani): arnav's wife and zoya's best friend.
arnav farooqui(barun sobti):zaina's husband zeenat's little brother an zoya's big brother.
zain farooqui(Harshad arora):little brother of zoya and zeenat.
aliya gulaam haider (preetika rao): zain's living in girlfriend. and soon to be fiance.
other charachters will be itroduce later.
humaira farooqui: zoya's little sister
ghaffoor farooqui: Father of :zeenat , arnav,zain and sanjeeda. zoya and humaira see him as their father.
osman gulaam haider : cousin of ghaffoor and they live in the same house.
suraya gulaam haider: osman's wife
ayat gulaam haider: aliya's little sister.

google their pictures it wil be nicer to read


I HAVE MADE SOME OTHER CHANGES TO:
dilshad is a widow there is no shireen nikhat nuzhat and razia.
ayaan is dillu's real son. zoya her father is actually dead. zoya's mother zainab was the little sister of zeenat's mother so the farooqui's are her real family. all the childeren accept zoya and humaira are zeenat's siblings.

xoxo



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Continue soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 ( has some hot moments )

Next day at kv.

D: Zoyaaa...

Z; ji phupi .

D: zoya tum abhi bhi so rahi ho 9 baje hai utho.

Z: yah allah 9 baje hai, theek hai phuphi abhi taiyar hoke aati hoon.

D: jaldi karo han aaj raat humein kahin jana hai.

Z: kahan phuphi ??

D: tumhare aapi ki gharwalen mumbai mein. Aapki doosri bari behen ki nikah our walima ke liye do din hum waha rookenghi our uske baad bhopal mein tumhaara our asad ka sangeet hai.

Z: KYAAA??!! Sanjeeda aapi ki nikaah ho raha hain our woh mujhe kahi bi nahi.

D: Zeenat ne mujhe abhi abhi phone kiya tha, woh keh rahi thi ki woh our anwar nahi aapaongi toh isliye aap ko jaana hoga. unho ne Hum sab invite kar diya hai. isliye jaldi karo our bags pack karo. Tum our najma mere saath presents khareed ne ke liye aaogi.

Z: Ok phuphi abhi jaata hoon.

Breakfast table

Z: goodmorning.

N+D: goodmorning.

Asad just nodded and zoya rolled her eyes.

Z: phuphi tanveer breakfast nahi karengi kya?

A: woh tanveer ne...

He wanted to say tanveer already had her breakfast but got interrupted by zoya.

Z: i asked phuphi.

A: leken mein sirf...he got interrupted again.

Z: just let it be.

The rest of the breakfast was in silance.

...

It was early in the afternoon when Najma, zoya and dilshad returned from shopping.

They bought a lots of presents for every family member and clothes for zoya.

They just enterd the house when dilshad called zoya.

D:zoya please ask asad if he want's me to pack his clothes ya phir woh khud karongi.

Z:ji phuphi.

Zoya didn't wanted to go she was succesfull in ignoring him all day. But she had to go now.

Like normal she just barged in ,in his room without knocking. But asad was changing he was only in his jeans.

Z: mr.khan phuphi wanted me to...

He turned around the moment he heard her. He crossed his arms and smirked the moment he saw her

Swallow her words and drooled while looking at him wide eyed. He was shirtless and she didn't turned around. They both dind't care a damn. Asad became a little bit bolder.

A: like what you see?

Z:huh..

A: i said like what you see??

Z: yeah.. i i mean uhm no i mean..

She was hitching because he came closer.she was about to turn around and run but he grabed her pushed her against the wall looked in her eyes and sealed their lips. He kissed her like there was no tomorrow. She was shocked at first but then started to respond. The kiss became very passionate.

He grabbed her legs and pushed her up the wall. Her legs automatically went around his waist.his one hand on her butt and his other one went under her shirt.her one hand was on his bare chest and the other one on the back off his neck pulling his face closer if it wase even possible.

...

Like and comment try to update later today.xx

ps. no proof reading.ignore the spelling if something is wrong

Edited by 1asya1 - 11 years ago

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