SS: Something Anything - Note on pg 137 (14/9)

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Az07

@Az07

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

I always used to be a silent reader but now I feel I should give a comment.

I always like your stories, especially through the monsoon & yes boss.

Now loving this also.

I really wanted to see asad going after zoya to New York in QH but it never happened. Thanks to you for bringing this wonderful story.

I loved each part of the update. Especially photo session. My god zoya farroqui who can do anything in the world is affected by asad's touch & she can't take a photo also because of his touch. Loved the way asad took there pictures.

I guess Prasad helped him to get a ticket & visa to New York.

Tanveer here also. I loved the way zoya got angry when asad asked to wait so that he could talk to his tanu, great going girl. In show they always showed as a shameless mahan, just show some attitude. I really loved when she ask him to go away. Continue soon.

One personal question you have excellent timing & comic sense are you in writing profession or in teaching profession?

I am sorry but I didn't understand your note at first

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 56

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: goingreen

Yeah, mera Asad ko sarcasm aata hai :p Aw you actually said kill this man... and the CVs listened to you haha. Bechara Asad sach mein mar gaya. Anyway, sorry for the delay, was caught up with life yknow haha. Anyway, I'm updating, now-ish!

Ikr.. 😆 CV's meri baat to maante hi hain! 😆 Qubool Hai is so ruined and is complete crap now! 😛 Anyways.. glad to have you back and I'm off to read chapter 4 now! 😳

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Yay! You're back with Part 5!

"Aapko... aapko mere saath photo lena hai? Theek hai, I mean, sure. Abhi le lete hai, laayiye," Zoya replied after a momentary pause, too taken aback to even come up with a snarky response. Asad finally relaxed, allowing his arm to lower and pass the iPad to Zoya. Zoya flipped open the cover and fiddled with the lock screen, before looking for the camera tool.

HAHAHAHAHA... Poor Zoya is flabbergasted with ASad's request! 🤣

"How did you manage to unlock it with doing that ridiculous dance?" Asad asked incredulously, as Zoya started changing the settings to flip it to the front camera. A small smile grew on Zoya's face, the slightest hint of her dimple beginning to form.

"Obviously I've kept another secret but more normal way of unlocking the iPad, for the purposes of unlocking it in public. I'm not crazy enough to be okay with looking like a fool in public," Zoya grinned, making Asad groan as he thought about how stupid he must've looked in the cab.

"Now don't ask me how I keep the option of setting double passwords. You've got to be as intelligent as me to understand that. For now, woh sab chodiye, aur idhar aayiye. Let's take a selfie!" Zoya taunted backhandedly, before telling him to come close as she held her iPad up in front of her with both her hands.

Oh my god! I so loved this conversation! Mr. Technologically Challenged Ahmed Khan! 🤣 🤣 I'm loving this story so much Greeny! 😳

Itne saare selfies ka kya karna chahte hain aap Mr. Khan? 😉

Wondering what he spoke to Prasad about... 😕 And then Tanu too? 😡 That too infront of Zoya! 😡 OH GOD! Zoya would be super annoyed!

"Toh main kya keh raha tha?" Asad asked awkwardly, and Zoya hissed at him in irritation. She pulled her arm entirely out his grip, shuffling her passport and ticket in her hands as she bit her lower lip, controlling the tears from falling out of her eyes.

"Kuch bhi nahi. You weren't saying ANYTHING, at least not to me. Jo bhi baat karni thi, mujhe lagta hai aap Tanu darling se kar chuke. Goodbye Mr Khan," Zoya said with finality this time, passing her passport and ticket to the officer before Asad could stop her again. Thanking the officer, she took her passport and ticket back, marching into the airport confidently, using all of her willpower not to look back.

Ya Allah! Allah miya what's wrong with this man? Finally Zoya has walked into the airport! 😃 NOW WHAT?????????? 😲 Finally she will be off to New York and Asad will follow her! 😳

Continue soon...

Love and hugs, ❤️ 🤗

Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Awesome update
Look like asad investigated all taxi matter & warned tanveer
Wow what a picture shot.
Finally zoya entered in airport leaving asad behind
Hope asad will stop her & confessed
Continue soon
Thanks