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Posted: 11 years ago
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Juliet such a beautiful part...

Cake scene is so cute...

Aww zoya brk his bike..

Da way u wrt their grown up phases. ..n change in their behaviour. .is very beautiful

Asad srt feeling hr..bt still ranting ..I dnt like hr...I dnt like hr. .😆

Haaww he punched the boy..aha possessive ahmad khan..bt nah..he dnt like her..😆

Hy plz update asap...plz plz plz...
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVED IT

love reading AsYa stories, seeing them growing up with each other

Asad although sounded like a jerk, vut can't blame him though, if it were me in his place during the cake scene... lets just say that the poor girl will never go near another cake again

anyways please update is soon,

and please give zoya a boyfriend just to make Asad mad, now he deserves that

UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is sooo cute..
Brought back lots of childhood memories..
Can't wait for Asad to accept that he doesn't like Zoya, but Loves her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Juliet.. A big hug to you for this.. 🤗🤗
I had a huge smile on my face reading it from the first scene .. and towards the end.. Zoya's pain which she might have felt by the sad smile .. got tears in my eyes.. .. You really know how to touch a person's heart.. That was just awsome...

The first scene when they met as children .. was so very cute.. ... The innocene and stubbornness of a child was beautifully brought out... 😛 ... Mr. Blankey.. 😃... Is blue your favourite colour ?? ..

Asad got punished first time and many to follow only due to Zoya.. hmm.. Asad's anger during those days.. understandable.. 😊 The bike scene was also beautiful... Poor little Asad.. How much he disliked her..

The valentine's day card.. was also cute.. As they grew up and that was when he started developing feelings for her is what I felt..The poor chap who got insulted by Zoya in public and also got threatened by Asad..I pity that guy..

The last scene . as I told you .. was too emotional for me.. Asad's restlessness beautifully written..

Thanks a lot for this Juliet.. I loved it.. 😊 Take care..




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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was really good:). I loved it:)
Please update the next part fast :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome.. 👏

update soon n pls pm me the nxt parts.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another love story, lovely! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Juliet I just loved it... please continue... cant wait for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
it's very cute :)
plzz update soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am too late

unres 😳

The concept is superb!!!

Stories from Asad's POV are quite rare here... i am glad that you are writing one 😳
mahu might be dancing in joy right now 😆

with growing age their maturity level had changed, but two things were absolutely constant!!!

one, Zoya's blush after seeing Asad ☺️
two, Asad's rant of 'I Don't Like Her' 😆

but the last part was 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

felt to bad for Zoya

he said he would write mails to her everyday...let's see if he does that and even if he does, will zoya reply to them?? 😉😉😉😉

excited to read more 😛

update soon!! this one as well as The Butterflies 😳😳😳

lots of love,

Ankita 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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