Juliet.. A big hug to you for this.. 🤗🤗
I had a huge smile on my face reading it from the first scene .. and towards the end.. Zoya's pain which she might have felt by the sad smile .. got tears in my eyes.. .. You really know how to touch a person's heart.. That was just awsome...
The first scene when they met as children .. was so very cute.. ... The innocene and stubbornness of a child was beautifully brought out... 😛 ... Mr. Blankey.. 😃... Is blue your favourite colour ?? ..
Asad got punished first time and many to follow only due to Zoya.. hmm.. Asad's anger during those days.. understandable.. 😊 The bike scene was also beautiful... Poor little Asad.. How much he disliked her..
The valentine's day card.. was also cute.. As they grew up and that was when he started developing feelings for her is what I felt..The poor chap who got insulted by Zoya in public and also got threatened by Asad..I pity that guy..
The last scene . as I told you .. was too emotional for me.. Asad's restlessness beautifully written..
Thanks a lot for this Juliet.. I loved it.. 😊 Take care..