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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Great job, awesome update and story.. and yes you take care, get better soon..A big hug to you..🤗

Edited by fanraya - 11 years ago

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Res...already read it...will comment soon!!!

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

excellent update👏

i still dint like the story😆😆

zafar reminds me classmate of mine.I really hate him for his annoying behaviour😒

i dont think i will love this man too😆

any one in way of my asad will not be loved by me😆😆

i love their cute little fights

but jealous is bad option

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Hey Shree!

I am better now! still coughing and I pulled my back muscle so on bed rest right now.

Thanks for checking on me Darling and thanks for your ever sweet comment.🤗

Aww plz tk care of urself ...

Tk ur medicines on tym..

My pleasure juliet..

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naz1123

@naz1123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

I so loved this update. The first half of the story, I could feel Asad's longing, and constant missing of Zoya, and his perpetual DENIAL of his feelings!

And then Tanveergate happened. Uggh!!! Poor Zoya!

And don't get me started on Asad! Just want to hit him over the head with a frying pan.

But I think your plan is better, hit him with Zafar!!

Can't wait for the update...Thks.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

absolutely loving this
asad needs a new chant
it has been 6yrs he still dont like her
but he cant get her out of his system
u dont like her but u never returned to ur
internship
lets see a jealous asad
continue

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Juliet

This story is absolutely amazing👏👏👏

loved it so so so much

Asad is just so cute with his chant "I Don't Like Her"

please please please ... make this an SS⭐️

i dont want it to end😭

I love it 😊

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Hey Juliet,

Honestly after reading this, there's one thing I can chant " Asad is a Jerk". Like honestly, what is he waiting for to realizes that his stupid tactic is basically childish. I f he just monitors his actions from the point of his heart & not head, he'll know all his actions are so directing towards one thing. And besides why can't he understand all this even after her constant visits in his dreams, rather erotic ones.

So will the presence of another guy make Asad realize his feelings for her. So Silly!!

But I really love him for staying back for Zoe when she needed him the most. At least he didn't run away at this crucial point & understood her unspoken emotions.

I hope you're feeling better. Have a speedy recovery Dear.

Love..

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sara..

@BelleAme

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

hi juliet...

sorry for late reply..i love this concept

Asad is well he is just crazy..y cant he just accept he liked her..um loves her..

the baby cake scene was real cute...

the bicycle scene was even cuter...the airport scene nostalgic..

love the whole jealousy thing..oh my zoya literally would have killed tanveer

and going to tibet...seriouslt it was roflin😆

Just cute...y is he so confused..sigh!waiting for next part..

Update soonish...😊

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Hun...I am just awestruck by the way you're shaping up this story...even though its a simple story line...the way you emelish it with your wit and ur spunk..just makes this story so vibrant and packed with emotions.I loved Asad's pull towards Zoya, his distress at her avoiding him.I also loved the part of him being incapicitaded at kissing any girl...that was pure geniues...it just fell into place perfectly and was very well justified...and laslty...I really enjoyed Zoya's character graph...how she is evolving to be this fiery gal..unbashedly standing up to Asad and conciously or unconciously making him drool for her...Keep that going...and it would just add on to my awestruck state😉Kudos to u gal!!! looking forward to the next!!!

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