RES!
Unres!
Me first! Me first! Lol!
I loved the update! It was a bit of an emotional roller coaster but I loved it to the core. Zoya's attitude towards Asad and his naughtiness. Loved how Zoya got jealous of Tanveer. Typical Zoya, not wanting any female getting close to Asad.
And the kiss! Oh my gosh the kiss! It was just...I don't know what it was but it was amazing! Specially Asad's remark about her saying she doesn't like him just so that he could kiss her. Lol, that was a sly move but it was totally worth it.
Typical Asad, lashing out at her and then realising that he had gone too far. He tries to explain himself and this is where my confusion arose. Zoya says "it does matter" and I'm guessing that this is a typo and what she really meant to say "I doesn't matter". Am I right? And the next one was when it's written "I was left admonished", that threw me off again and so I'm just a wee bit confused as to what you meant.
And then Zoya's words of hating him. Hell, he's screwed up quite bad and of course hate is definitely a strong emotion.
Go Zoe for not showing up at the airport, he deserves it. Jerk. But nonetheless at least he's feeling guilty about what he's done to her. Although he is still sticking to the mantra "I don't like her", the hell you don't.
Aww, poor Zoe! At least he was there for her this time, no matter what the excuse. He did show some sort of concern to her and that's good enough for me. This part is really well-penned.
Lol, loved the comment from his father "You are a true idiot". Way to go!
Ahahaha, Asad's dirty mind as she's cursing in front of him. Loved the scene again. Specially "she is golden red and simmering". Haha, he's left gobsmacked when she snaps at him with the comment.
See this is why I love you're writing. You're amazing with manipulating plots and characters so truly a job well done, my dear! *applause*
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Love you loads and loads,
Raz
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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