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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey,

This was a very beautifully written piece. I loved reading it. The quotation that you've used about love is so true & heart touching. I loved how you portrayed Asad's character here, he was exceptionally cute & adorable & I loved Zoe's need of making him smile & feel good.
Just too good Dear 👍🏼.


Oh, thank you so much! 🤗
By the way, let me warn you that I'm not very modest. So, ahm.. I wrote the quotation myself! 😳
And I'm SO GLAD that you liked it.
Once again, thank you for reading and liking it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: --starstruck--


no it wasn't exactly the same just the concept of the guy being autistic! 😊

wow amazing writer and me? thanks for the compliment! 😃


Haha! Yes!

@italics - Ooh, being too modest, are we? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
This was so beautiful and touching.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This was so beautiful and touching.


Thank You! I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Zoya is not at all cynical. But that's the whole point. Sometimes the characters are a projection of the writer's attributes
however...some other time the characters are a total opposite of the writer...so I needed to know. I mean I kinda already did, I guess I wanted your reassurance.

By the way, I meant to say if Asad remembered her from the time he smiled at her when he too was enjoying the drizzle.

And Asad came with his mom? That is just great that she came out on her own as if they have a trust thing going on. I love Asad giving that lily to Zoya when she knows it already. He must have been so nervous right to be on his toes like that. Hayyee...

And they held hands! And and and...

Do they exist Zan. Love so pure...hmmm.

Cannot thank you enough... This is poetic. Mine are words put together. There's a difference.

And I love all this love coming you're way...am glad and as thrilled..woohoo ZANU and stalkers. He he.

Yes babe...mobile.



Why you no holiday with me. Now me school you at home. Awww my Mummy does the same to me too...


Veggie wrap is actually quite good...don't go by it's name...especially with a chocolate chip cookie as dessert. Hee... But I'd share fries with Asad anytime. If he offers. But Zoya normally offers them. To him. So yeah...


What you doing still replying to comments...go ahead write a thank you note for all your chahnewalon...for acknowledging true talent... and great writing. You crying? Want tissue?



I woof you..


Oh look who's back, back again...




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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Zoya is not at all cynical. But that's the whole point. Sometimes the characters are a projection of the writer's attributes
however...some other time the characters are a total opposite of the writer...so I needed to know. I mean I kinda already did, I guess I wanted your reassurance.

By the way, I meant to say if Asad remembered her from the time he smiled at her when he too was enjoying the drizzle.

And Asad came with his mom? That is just great that she came out on her own as if they have a trust thing going on. I love Asad giving that lily to Zoya when she knows it already. He must have been so nervous right to be on his toes like that. Hayyee...

And they held hands! And and and...

Do they exist Zan. Love so pure...hmmm.

Cannot thank you enough... This is poetic. Mine are words put together. There's a difference.

And I love all this love coming you're way...am glad and as thrilled..woohoo ZANU and stalkers. He he.

Yes babe...mobile.



Why you no holiday with me. Now me school you at home. Awww my Mummy does the same to me too...


Veggie wrap is actually quite good...don't go by it's name...especially with a chocolate chip cookie as dessert. Hee... But I'd share fries with Asad anytime. If he offers. But Zoya normally offers them. To him. So yeah...


What you doing still replying to comments...go ahead write a thank you note for all your chahnewalon...for acknowledging true talent... and great writing. You crying? Want tissue?



I woof you..


Oh look who's back, back again...





Well, we have a DilKaRishta, don't we?
So yep, you guessed it right. I'm not that good of a writer who could bring life to characters opposite to her.

Yes, he did! Autistic people have varying IQs, their level of dependence is judged by various parameters one of which is their intelligence quotient.
This guy here, is the above average kind.
So he's quite good in recognizing faces.
If he wouldn't have recognized her, would he have taken the Fries?

I loved writing the white-lily-crooked-at-edges thing. It was so adorable! Especially the part where Zoya already knows what he has got for her.

Haha! Yes, FaRz, they exist!
Who knows, if the 'odds are in your favor', you might end up experiencing it instead of witnessing.

Imma gonna holiday with you. 😎

I know everything about greens, and genuinely like them too!
Don't offer Asad Fries, that's Zoya's forte!

I will write it, a little later!

*sneezes*
Thanks for the tissue. I wanted a fragrant one, BTW.

I WOOF YOU TRIPLE MUCH.
Imma glad you back yo. 😃

PS - Did you see that link?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
It was awesome.👏 really beautiful😊 Will you be writing a second part for this by any chance?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: rosamale

It was awesome.👏 really beautiful😊 Will you be writing a second part for this by any chance?😳


Thank you so much!
I might, but the chances are very very rare. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Zanutix


Well, we have a DilKaRishta, don't we?
So yep, you guessed it right. I'm not that good of a writer who could bring life to characters opposite to her.

Yes, he did! Autistic people have varying IQs, their level of dependence is judged by various parameters one of which is their intelligence quotient.
This guy here, is the above average kind.
So he's quite good in recognizing faces.
If he wouldn't have recognized her, would he have taken the Fries?

I loved writing the white-lily-crooked-at-edges thing. It was so adorable! Especially the part where Zoya already knows what he has got for her.

Haha! Yes, FaRz, they exist!
Who knows, if the 'odds are in your favor', you might end up experiencing it instead of witnessing.

Imma gonna holiday with you. 😎

I know everything about greens, and genuinely like them too!
Don't offer Asad Fries, that's Zoya's forte!

I will write it, a little later!

*sneezes*
Thanks for the tissue. I wanted a fragrant one, BTW.

I WOOF YOU TRIPLE MUCH.
Imma glad you back yo. 😃

PS - Did you see that link?


Okay. WHAT LINK?



By the way. I know Asad remembers her. It wasn't as a question question. I meant it like a question that you should answer with an I KNOW RIGHT!

He took her fries..I got it then. I was just asking..Does he remember her from the first time????!!!!

Should have added the ??? and the !!!

You thought I didn't get it. How could you. And you talk about DilKaRishta...tsk tsk

Not responding to your writer bit comment AND the odds in my favour bit. JUST COZ.


And I wouldn't for the life of me offer him fries. I thought he might. I'll offer him my cookie...will he takee it?



And and and!!


That last bit he took ker fries WILLINGLY! That is just awww!!!!


Hayyeee


Mah Yo-M! Mah Dawg. You Rawk.

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