AsYa SS- A Dark Obsessive Love CHPT.6 on p.49 19/5/14

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

This is Fantastic

Loved it

Eagerly waiting for next one 😃

Quote

Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

lovely update..
glad all is well for now

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

that was amazing as ever
finally she here to give their marriage chance!
so sweet
loved their conversations
amazing
superb
beautifully potrayed
i hope everything gets clear
lovely update
loved it totally
superb
wonderful
awesome
loved it
update soon!

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Quote

SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Unress

AWWW,😳

My heart has swelled for even more love for the adorable couple,

Who wouldn't want their kinda of love,

I'm really glad that Asad decided to lay everything out in the open with Zoya, and what made me feel even more happy was that Zoya knew he loved her more👏

Before it was just Asad trying to adjust to their relationship and get over his insecurities but now I really hope/think that Zoya will also help him out, like hold his hand whenever their out, cam him dow if he's about to have a fit,

Really looking forward to how the story develops further

Update whenever you have the time🤗

Quote

Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

The intricate detail of their interaction in this chapter was well composed, realistic and dexterously portrayed. ⭐️

Liked the emotions and tranquil sense that came across the chapter. 😎

"He felt a weight lifted and he knew that they would be okay. They would be okay."

I'm certain they would be okay! 😳

Quote

Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Hey!

Don't know your name so Will settle for Cclove for now until you decide to let me know what I can call you. I am Juliet BTW.

So stumbled upon your FF one day. I normally don't read dark stories.

I stay away, I am the fluff woman. All things cheesy and fluffy.

Anyways long story short, read the first two chapters didn't think I could digest it so I left.

Then bored last night I thought let me check if anything progressed and OH MY MY!

IT sure did take my breath away, I could really connect, brilliantly written, very cleverly conceptualized.

I wasn't disgusted or didn't feel like killing Asad in even one update. ( Yeah I am an extremist I either love or hate Asad - always!)

Loved the anguish of a struggling Asad. Adored a strong Zoya who owns a mind and a heart and stands up for what is right.

What else can I say. You are a talented writer. I wish you all the best and I hope you update soon.

Much Love,

Juliet.

Quote

aaditi

@Sonserina_Reina

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

superb update...

feeling bad for asya...

hope they together cope it up...

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the pm...

Quote

sandjanarai

@sandjanarai

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Really good
I loved it it was Nice
Update soon
Pm me if is possible
And you are a born writer
Thank you
I hope that zoya makes everything all right

Quote

Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

This was such an emotional update

loved it ❤️

please continue soon

Quote

1 ... 31 32 33 34 35 ... 37

Theme - Theme 1 : The Bag (Graphicer - WildestDreams) The Weight of Love The rain drummed softly against the glass windows of the airport, a...

Expand ▼

AsYa OS - Whispers in the Dark

This entry is a thriller/dark romance for the QH Valentines Contest. Enjoy! Your feedback and criticism will be much appreciated. Theme: Secret...

Expand ▼

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

AsYa SS- A Dark Obsessive Love CHPT.6 on p.49 19/5/14 - Page 33

Related Topics

Explore Topics