Asya OS changing the faces

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyz! I am here with a gutter post.😆 I know that I am really really bad writer but still bear with me. This idea came into my mind then I just penned it down. And here it is...And please do give a title to this one😊

Karan as Asad would be as (AK :)

RaQesh as Asad would be as (AR :)

AK: Miss Faarooqui! Miss Faarooqui! Asad yelled for Zoya as he walked out of his room.

On the other side of the hall:

AR: Miss Faarooqui! Miss Faarooqui! Asad yelled for Zoya as he walked out of his room too.

Zoya: Allah miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khans!!!!She screamed as they were getting on her nerves these days.

Zoya: Was one less that another Asad had entered the story? She cursed under her breath."Kya hai Mr. Khans? Why are you shouting?" Zoya asked them.

Zoya: Mr khan You!(pointing at AK)Why haven't you still cut your hair.I told you to. Now go and cut your hair!

AK nodded in a yes and went.

Zoya: And you Mr.Khan(pointing to AR) why haven't you shaved go and shave. Now!

AR also nodded in a yes and went.

After an hour both of them came after cutting their hair and shaving.

AK and AR: will you come to a date with me? They asked in unsion.

Both the Asads gave each other deathly glares and then turned to Zoya with smiles playing on their lips.

Zoya looked confused.

Zoya: Ok umm lets have a competition. I will give you a task to complete and neither of you will know what the other Asad did. So the task is you guyz have to propose me in your own style.

"OK!" Both the Asads said in unison.

Zoya: So we will toss.

AR: I will take heads.

Zoya; So lets see.

Zoya tossed the coin.

Zoya: Tails.

She announced.

So Asad (AK) you will be the first to propose me.

AK: Done. I will sms you the time and place.

He gave his signature smile to Zoya and went.

AR: I will also do the same.

Zoya went to her room as she got the SMS s from both of them.

She looked at them.

AR: Tomorrow night, 8 P.M, Blue diamond hotel.

Then she looked at AR's SMS.

AK: Tonight night, 8: PM, Blue Diamond Hotel.

Zoya smiled.

She quickly got ready in a black saree and went down stairs. She took her car and drove to the hotel.

Asad had the garden booked just for them.

It was decorated beautifully with candles and roses.

Zoya was mesmerized by the beauty.

Not bad. She muttured.

Asad came and pulled the chair for her. She smiled and sat down on the chair.

A few minutes after Asad(AK) played her favorite song Khuda jaane.

AK:May I?

Zoya smiled and took his hand. They had a romantic dance(their first dance).

After the song Asad got onto his knees and told her.

AK: Zoya tum meri zindagi mein toofaan banke aayi. I don't even know what all I had said to you that had hurt you a lot. And I am truly sorry for all that.

Asad held his ears with a cute pout playing on his lips.'

"I don't even know kab mujhe aapse mohabbat gaya. Kha kab Kase. Ye bhi nahi pata. I just know that I love you a lot. I wanted to ask you do you also love me as much as I love you? Are you ready to spend your whole life with me? Will you hold my hand till the end of the world?Will you cross every path with me hand in hand? Will you marry me?

By the end of the confession Zoya had tears in her eyes. She didn't know what to say. She wanted to say yes but the other Asad was also going to propose her.

Zoya sniffed:Mr khan. She said in a teary voice "Agar ye competition nahi hota na I would have surely told a yes. I will let you know."

She smiled and ran away from there.

The next night Zoya got ready in the same saaree and went.

The place was decorated just the way it was last night.

Zoya smiled: In dono ke khayal kitne mil the hai.

She chuckled to herself and went as the same as last night AR had also played Zoya favourite song and danced with her then he also got on his knees.

AR: Zoya I don't know mujhe aapse kab pyaar ho gaya sirf do mihiney hi hue hai aur mujhe mujhey aapse pyaar ho gaya. I am sorry for all the things I did which upsets you.

He also held his ears.

"I wanted to ask you do you also love me as much as I love you? Are you ready to spend your whole life with me? Will you hold my hand till the end of the world?Will you cross every path with me hand in hand? Will you marry me?"

Zoya was shocked.She didn't know what to say.

Zoya:I will let you know.

Saying that she ran away from there.

SM

Zoya's room.

Zoya: Ya allah ye kaisi dilemma mein daal di hai aapne kabhi man karta hai kii Ak ko haan kehdoon aur kabh AR ko. Ye baat zaroor hai kii mujhe sabse pehle AK se mohabbat hua tha par ab mein AR se bhi mohabbat karti hoon . Bata nahi mein kya karun.

Zoya went down stairs slowly.

"Guyz," Zoya said. "I thought a lot about this and I wanted to tell you that,"

Zoya was cut off by AR

AR: Mein right?Saying that he engulfed his hand in Zoya's.

AK: Nahi mein na Zoya. Said AK as engulfed his hand in Zoya's other hand.

Ar:Nahi mri hai.

Ak:Nahi meri hai.

Saying that they started pulling zoya to their sides.

Zoya: Baas!

She scramed.

Zoya :Enough is enough! you know what neither of me deserves me.Do you guyz think I am a toy that you will share and play with me. No I am not. I have my decision and its that I don't choose anybody.

Mein naa tumhari hoon na tumhari hoon.Mein sirf khud kii hoon.I am the king and queen of my life and I wont let you guyz take over me.You get that.

Saying that Zoya ran into her room crying.

Zoya: Allah miyan, mein kya karti agar nein kisi ek ko choose karti tu dusre ka dil tootjata. Aur mein ye nahi jatinahi chahthi. Mein kya kehti kii mein aapse pyaar karti hoon.

She said looking at one of the Asad's photos(I wont reveal who it is). I am sorry guyz but mein reveal nahi kar sakti.

On the other hand both the Asad's wer drinking on the roads and singing:

Jag soona soona lage

Jag soona soona lage

Jab koi na rahe jab apna

While Zoya listening to the same song from her I pad.

She didn't know what was stored in her future. She just sent a prayer to Allah miyan and slept.

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GUYZ I HAVE A REQUEST PLEASE DON'T COMPARE THE CHARACTERS OR ACTORS.THIS WAS WRITTEN JUST TO SHARE WITH EVERYONE SO PLEASE PLEASE DON'T BASH ANY ACTORS.IF THIS TURNS INTO A BASHING POST THEN I MYSELF WILL REQUEST MODS TO CLOSE THIS TOPIC!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG just last nite on Zee ka sis channel i saw KSG ka last shot when AsYa return to KV and hear Rashid ka message

Ye kya hai?

Name:

Love Ka Lafda

Pyar ka Punchnama

Kaun hai jo mere sapno mein aaye

Ek main aur Do Asad

The tale of two faces


Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what was that???

ps th title may be: Changing the Faces,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this really very funny 🤣
u cracked me up 😆
awesome...😃
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hahahaha...😆

Super funny yaar can't stop laughing...😆

Awesome os...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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As far as OSes go, this is a really good piece of work. As far as its message goes, give yourself a pat on the back, dear! Hit the nail! Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maza aa gaya ..#sha ..
Zoya dono may say eak ka dil nahi todna chahathi ..
Aur aap hamaray dil nahi toda nahi chahathi ..
Pyar may adla badli...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for late comment buddy was busy with something ,,
okie soo it was funny 😆
I am sure she chose AK at last as he is her first love 😳
I like KSG's long hair now ,,
actually I just want to see him ,,
his hair doesn't matter to me anymore 😳 🤣
Do write more stories !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣 hope they are in order exactly representating my mood.
Edited by ashlesha2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Sorry for late comment buddy was busy with something ,,

okie soo it was funny 😆
I am sure she chose AK at last as he is her first love 😳
I like KSG's long hair now ,,
actually I just want to see him ,,
his hair doesn't matter to me anymore 😳 🤣
Do write more stories !!


you got it right bubble it was AK😳😆

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