THREAD III-ASYA DADDY PRINCESS last part @83-5/4/14

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow!! such a cute nd lovely chapter it was..
truly fabulous..👏
i so so loved reading to it..
AsYa as usual were too adorable..
so the new member of Khan family is finally here..
such a nice ending it was..
but m sad that it has end now..😒
nywayz would love to read more from uh😳

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

My unres on Page 75 has finally been edited😃

A comment added with a heavy heart...

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Oh dear...

I thought I was prepared but I was wrong...

Kalyani, you have reduced me to a bubbling wreck😭

I am asking myself, did this have to end now???/Why could she not write a few more chapters???

and in that same breath, I answered my own questions...Well of course, every great thing has to end and this beautifu fiction has met a beffiting and splendid end...

There was humour and emotions...Two of the most important elements that I love in a good read...

Firstly, the orphanage part was so sweet and inspiring...You have added in a bit of social consiousness👍🏼

The care that Asad shows Zoya is fabulous...I loved the part where they are talking via skype...For a moment there I thought we were going to have Skye sex😆 Yes, I know...My gutter mind always rears it's head unannounced😆

I thought the very hormonal Zoya was amazing and so real...You showed how real woman feel...I guess that part is from your experience from motherhood...

The way Asad pacified her speaks of his changed behaviour...instead of ignoring her and shushing her, he calmed her and reiterated his commitment and feelings for her👍🏼

The delivery was lovely...I liked Zoya's outburst...I thought it was apt...I could imagine a terrified Asad looking at his almost deranged wife in fear of her next attack on him...

The final part was poignant...Little Asya welcoming her brother to their family...A bitter sweet moment for me...but still so lovely to read...

Kalyan,

Thank you for this amazing story. Thank you for bringing forth an array of emotions in me...from anger, hope, love, anguish and the list wil go on...

This was one of the very first fiction on ASYA that I had come across and I am so glad that I continued to follow it because through this all I found several new friends including you.

You have certainly penned this story beautifully with drama, humour, angst and a whole lot of love...I am sad to see it end but to be honest it was such a beautiful ending that although I shed tears I still am happy...

Hats off to you and your lovely little story...(well not so little, 53 chapters is like a novel to me😉)

Love you Kal🤗

I will see you at your next story dear😉😃