THREAD III-ASYA DADDY PRINCESS last part @83-5/4/14

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DancingBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Kalyani it was a shock for me wen I got ur pm...My fav story's last part... 😭 ...But it was an amazing happy ending...Actually this story was wonderful and I loved each and every part of this...Thank u so much for this wonderful creation...

I started reading ur new story...it's interesting...will there be an epilogue for this?...If not then we can interact in other story's thread...Once again thank u for an amazing story and for the deddication of one of it's parts...Will miss my princess...

Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

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Kalyani.. That was a wonderul chapter... Asad being so very sweet and understanding to Zoya's tantrums.. 😊 I wish we had got to see all this in the show.. 😭

So Afzal finally made an entry..😊... You were not a writer.. but you have become a writer now... It is seen in the choice of words and the updates.. 😊

Thanks for sharing the wonderful story and keep writing.. 😊

Edited by DevikaRavish - 11 years ago

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Oh it was a lovely story. Beautiful play of emotions all throughout. Lot of ups and downs happened but Asya came out victorious. Beautiful family. You covered so many scenarios in their lives and it was just amazing.

Had a good time reading it but i didnt know you were about to end it. Kalyani it was really really nice knowing you through this fan fiction.😃

Lovely ending,

Hey have u seen the latest advertisement of MTS, i guess. Reading of the delivery scene reminded me of that.

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago

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Sneha8337

@Sneha8337

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Your story is awsum😊

But i m sad coz this is last part😭

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-RM-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

Beautiful journey of love :)
Thank you for writing :)

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Its really over :( :(
tht was beautifull prt...
Totally loved it..
Thnk u so mch for dis wonderfull ff..
Thnks for the pm..

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

Oh di it was an excellent ending
I am sad it ended
I am selfish I want an epilogue
You have not mentioned about Arya kid only u said humi pregnant
We saw asya copy cat of Asad I want to see afzal being copy cat of zoya & the entire family so plz give a small epilogue

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shishiksg

@shishiksg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

awesme part

i am too emotional dis is last part

one of my fav ff was dis

i vl miss dis a lot

n u beautifully described zoyas mood swings n all in every mnth

how asad was beside her in each step

loved angry zoya wen asad came hme

n i totally love asad in dis part hez such a swt heart

loved the last part very much vth asya cmng n sayng welcome to family bro

thnx for dis ff

write more

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kalyani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20
really over?? 😭 But it was really sweet!! Asad was mostly on edge!! hehehehe and the most adorable ws zoya slept on asad's six packs without clothes!! hehehe she's really cute idiot!! but then afzal came may be u could have shown how afzal n asya 's naughtiness had both parents hyped but anyway its awesome now too. I'll miss this!! But I know u've another one in ur kitty!! so i am keep reading ur work until ur here!! and sorry may be i dont know i can be late in commenting on ur new one i am just busy will be back with more frequentness!!

HAI apu,

yeah atlast it is really over...

look above.. u wrote a long comment...😆😆😆... i am so happy that u liked this asad and idiot zoya...

yeah i writing another one.. which i am shamelessly promoting in this FF..

read the story dear.. it is not a bday dedication.. u r also a part of the story...as indian version of brennan...

check it out.. u may like that too...

thank u.. for lovely comments...

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kalyani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
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Kalyani.. That was a wonderul chapter... Asad being so very sweet and understanding to Zoya's tantrums.. 😊 I wish we had got to see all this in the show.. 😭

So Afzal finally made an entry..😊... You were not a writer.. but you have become a writer now... It is seen in the choice of words and the updates.. 😊

Thanks for sharing the wonderful story and keep writing.. 😊

hai devika,

thank u for liking this story... and also for leaving ur feedback.. for me .. from part 1..

atlast afzal made an entry.. u did ask for him...

i have become a writer...😳😳... thank u ... for ur compliment...😳😳

do check the hidden truth.. it is also based on Qubool hai...

thank u once again