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Posted: 11 years ago
Bubble u still haven't updated🥺
yaar i'm going to get in trouble.
plz post A.S.A.P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha2012

BUBBLU😳

im late again iin commenting😭 why this is happening
the gang has had a terrible influence on me😲😳
zoya compares the note to asad's email years back..
he's written abt being guilty n nothing of sort happened with sehrish, defends her and also unsure abt the future of their very own relationship🤔
he mentions sending money for her expense🤢
zoya always read the note when she missed him😭
the way u described symbolism of each flower😳👏
yet akdu ki feelings r in coded language😡
Her eyes stopped at the red rose which symbolizes respect, courage, beauty and love 😳☺️ zoya kisses the vase unintentionally😳
She was madly, deeply, Cucking Frazily in love with him.😆👏👍🏼
zoya still confused abt asad's feelings whether he loves her 😕
asad again doesnt like sameer n zoya's interaction in cafetaria..
he forcefully takes her away in excuse of needing to talk immediately as sameer looks on😉
'You liked the flowers I gave you ?' 😳 nod😆
'And the note ?' nod 😆
'Am I forgiven ?' nod unintentionally😆
when she is abt to fall n he holds her arm😳 n she falls back on his chest☺️ uff Allah☺️
'Get a room guys !' 🤣 this was hillarious😆
'I won't forgive you so easily Dr Khan.' 😉 Go zoyaa😃👍🏼
again update was not dedicated to me😭 nevertheless i loved it😃😳
love yah bubbluuu❤️ Jaaman comment for u in punishment😳😡

Mahuu😎


ugghh I hate u for commenting late ,, don't blame others they took out time for commenting already 😡
I know I got soo mucch appreciation for the flower description ,, thanks to google 😎😆
even in next chapter his feelings will be in coded language 😈
D'oh !!
She kissed the flower not the vase 🤣
yah it was hilarious but kinda true ,,
they should stay in single room now its been ten years 🤔 ☺️
It wasn't dedicated to u but u can share with ur friends ,,
and next one to please 😳😆😆
Love you tooo 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anin29

First of all i am very sorry for not commenting. I am busy with my final exams.Coming back to the update. I totally looovveeed it. Keep up the good work 😊


Thank You soo mucch 😳
I a glad that you loved it !!
no need for sorry buddy ,,
study comes first 😉
Best of luck for ur exams !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
looks like i have to read the update in the morning, i got in trouble 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh shit i messed up flower n the vase😲🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
bubblu u need more comments to reach on 81!! lol..
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CHAPTER SIXTEEN :

He woke up at 9 o'clock and came out of his room after taking a good 20 minutes shower as he was still tired after handling an emergency last night in the hospital.

'Where is Zoya ?' He asked from a servant in the kitchen who was busy making coffee for Asad. He wanted to know if she left already for hospital or was waiting for him yet.

'They are all having breakfast outside.' Servant told him and he realized that it was Sunday today and sometimes his father preferred to have breakfast or dinner in backyard of the house. He took out some juice for himself in a glass and walked towards the garden.

He smiled when he saw all of them having their breakfast on round wooden garden table, placed a bit away from the swimming pool. It was a bright Sunday morning and they all were sitting under yellow patio umbrella to save themselves from sunlight.

'Good Morning !' He greeted all of them while taking a sip from his glass and took an empty chair between Ayaan and Zoya. They all greeted him back.

'Where is Humaira ?' He asked confusedly as she wasn't there with them.

'She made a weird friend in the neighbourhood so she has went to her place.' Ayaan replied in a weird tone and Asad was not understanding why Ayaan was feeling bad if Humaira is having a new friend while Zoya looked at him with her detective eye.

'You should have slept more, must be tired still ?' Dilshad asked him with concern in her voice as she knew that he came back home late last night.

'No I am fine. I have to leave in an hour anyway.' He said and shrugged his shoulders while leaning back on his chair and looked at Zoya who stood up and served him a sandwich with a smiley over it. He looked at the sandwich and then at Zoya who was trying her best to be shy when he looked at her. The very first thought that skipped his mind was that this is not my Zoya.

'Are you alright ? Why are you behaving so good to me ?' He asked with concern in his voice for himself while she glared at him for saying this infront of his father as she never behaved rude with Asad when Rashid was around while Rashid smiled as he was very well aware of what was going on in his house.

'Allah Miyaan ! What's wrong with you Asad ? I always behave good with you.' She said annoyingly with a pout on her face and sat back on her chair.

'I mean --- actually --- this is something new from your side.' He said apologetically while pointing at the sandwich and she glared at him again to stop which he followed quietly by taking a fork and knife from the table.

'It tastes good.' He said with a smile adorning his face after taking the first bite while she clapped happily like a child and he concentrated on eating, not aware of what was going on in her mind.

'We are going for shopping.' Zoya told him excitedly after he finished eating and Asad understood the reason of the good start of the day.

'Ya take her for shopping Asad.' Rashid said to him while he gave a confusing look as he wasn't told by anyone about this.

'Today ? No I am busy.' He said in a weird tone while she pulled out a perfect pout as she wasn't expecting a no from him.

'But its Sunday today . We will be busy whole week and only a month is left in our second wedding.' She said annoyingly while he rubbed his forehead at her dramatic voice and calling their wedding as 'second wedding'.

'People get annoyed by one nikaah and here my Bhaijaan is going to try his luck for second time.' Ayaan finally spoke up while all of them smiled and controlled their laughter infront of Asad who glared at Ayaan which Ayaan ignored intentionally while Zoya was giggling at his words.

'And the worst part is that the girl is same both times. Hats off to you Bhaijaan.' He continued dramatically while patting Asad's shoulder and this time it was Zoya's turn to give him an angry look while Asad smiled as it was very rare of Ayaan taking his side and Asad knew that he added more words to save his own life.

'Thank You.' said Asad proudly and both of them passed a mischievous smile after seeing Zoya's face who was burning with anger now.

'My pleasure Bhaijaan. I can understand what you must be going through.' said Ayaan and pretended to wipe off the tears from his face and Asad looked back at Zoya.

'Allah Miyaan ! What's wrong with you both brothers ? Are you guys making fun of me ?' She asked with her eyes wide open.

'No I am not at all.' Asad replied innocently and she couldn't control infront of Rashid even.

'Oh really ? You think I am fool in a nursery school ?' She asked using one of her favorite dialogues of Salman Khan while he huffed at her stupid lines. 'Give me my sandwich back.' She said sternly very next second while they all laughed at her stupid demand.

'What ? What kind of stupid demand is that ?' He asked in disbelief.

'Yes I want that back or else you are taking me for shopping.' She said angrily while pointing a knife at him.

'But why you want me to come for shopping ? I hate shopping.' He said annoyingly while she rolled her eyes in disbelief.

'Because I want you to come with me.' She blurted out and he raised his eyebrow for this sudden change in her. 'I mean ami wants us to go together.' She continued while using his technique to get rid of embarassing situations and blamed Dilshad for everything.

'Me ?' Dilshad asked mischievously.

'Yes you --- you were saying ne to buy wedding dress of Asad's choice.' Zoya replied sheepishly remembering their last night conversation about dresses.

'Ok we will go for shopping but in the evening. I have to go to hospital for few hours atleast.' Asad made up a decision and told her.

'Leave it ! You will be tired by then. We will go tomorrow.' Zoya replied while leaning back on the chair and didn't force him anymore because as a doctor she understood his priorities.

'My poor Bhabhi.' Ayaan said with sympathy and Asad glared at him as he knew now Ayaan will try to make them fight even though Zoya was fine with his decision.

'She is not poor Ayaan, my wife is quite understanding.' Asad replied to him while taking a sip from the coffee cup and their was silence for next few minutes as this was the first time he was referring Zoya as his wife.

Zoya looked up at him and opened her mouth to say something but wasn't sure what should she say. She was not sure how should she express her feelings. She was on cloud nine as soon as he complimented her and called her his wife. She was not sure if it was a part of his plans for forgiveness or it came out naturally, in both situations she couldn't stop herself from admiring his efforts.

Oh ! So this is what makes her happy. I can call you my wife proudly infront of whole world. He thought while looking at her who was smiling now as if she was reading his eyes.

He looked at his parents and smiled at his dramatic family who was stunned and exchanging looks as if he was main lead of a popular show and has agreed for something big finally.

'Bhaijaan have you tasted your own medicines today ? Or maybe you are still tired I guess.' asusual Ayaan spoke first and said what he was feeling at the moment.

'I am not tired and nor my medicines are as much as disgusting as your company. We haven't talked much this week na that's why I am behaving normal.' Asad snapped back while keeping the cup back on the table.

'So you mean I am the one who motivates you to be rude with Mona Darling ? No way !' Ayaan asked in disbelief while Asad was not sure what should he reply at that one so he thought to change the topic which was the best option according to him.

'Abu have I told you that me and Zoya went to the beach last week ?' Asad asked while looking at Ayaan who understood where his Bhaijaan's track was going.

'That's good but why you are telling me ?' Rashid asked confusedly while Zoya giggled as she knew what Asad was going to tell them.

'We caught Ayaan there with a girl and they were talking about love.' Zoya said with a smirk on her face while Ayaan covered his face with his hands as he was not ready for this embarassing situation at all.

'Who was the girl ?' Dilshad asked while Rashid was also shocked to know that. Dilshad was not expecting this from Ayaan as she and Rashid were thinking to ask what he feels for Humaira, seeing his interest in her ever since she came to live with them.

'That reminds me that I have to give you some details regarding this case.' Zoya said in low voice mischievously to Asad and he told her that they will talk later about this as right now they were enjoying Ayaan's expressions.

'Ami --- actually --- I mean ---' Ayaan tried to say something but wasn't sure if he should take Humaira's name or not, specially after they know that he was talking about love with a girl.

'Now I guess Ayaan has tasted your medicines secretly Dr Khan.' Zoya said while controlling her giggles and Asad let out a soft chuckle while Ayaan glared at Zoya for changing the team who gave him a look saying 'you did first' reminding him of his previous comment on their Nikaah.

'Ayaan tell me what are they both talking about ?' Rashid asked him sternly while Ayaan gulped at his tone. Ayaan was going to answer them when they all saw Humaira coming towards them and thought to change the topic.

'Asad remind me to talk to him on this topic later.' Rashid ordered him while Asad nodded in yes.

'What's going on here ?' Humaira asked while taking a seat beside Dilshad and Rashid stood up to go inside. Ayaan took a sigh of relief as he knew Asad won't remind him again about this topic as he was done taking his revenge.

'Nothing special.' Zoya replied her with a smile and thought to talk to her about her feelings later on as it was hightime to know what she feels for Ayaan.

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She walked back towards her cabin after discussing a case with Dr Sameer and rested her head on the table after sitting on her chair.

She rubbed her stomach as she was feeling hungry now after a long tiring day and could smell her favorite pizza in her surrounding.

'Allah Miyaan ! I will go mad one day in my love for pizza. I can smell it now.' She said while closing her eyes and tried to get rid of these thoughts but it wasn't easy for her. She opened her eyes again as she felt that there was a pizza somewhere in her room for sure.

She was shocked to find a pizza box on the corner table covered with red ribbons with the same bouquet he gave yesterday and a note stuck in it.

She walked towards the table and took out the note, ignoring the pizza and flowers as she was more interested in his words.

Hi Wifey ,

I asked you to tell me what you want from me but didn't get any answer from you in return which is quite upsetting :(

So I am trying in my way to get your forgiveness which I hope will be soon as I know more than pizza and the same bouquet you are happy that I called you my wife. I hope so as I noticed yesterday in your eyes how much you liked being calling that.

You are my wife and I am a proud husband, not because you are a doctor but because ----- because of everything else. Hope to get an answer this time and if not then don't blame me for increasing number of gifts every day in your room (:

Yours Husband,

Asad Ahmed Khan !

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A/N : Okie soo this update goes to my most Shareef friend Sonia (Sonia555) I hope you liked it Sonia and will unres your comment sooon 😳😆😆

Do like and comment guys ,, it really motivates me to write and update sooon 😆 and next update is coming on 7th I guess 🤔 as I am not feeling well right now ,, I will write it as soon as I am fine 😉

Love,

Bubble ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thalaiva

WONDERFUL CHAPPI BUBBLE


He smiled when he saw all of them having their breakfast on round wooden garden table, placed a bit away from the swimming pool. It was a bright Sunday morning and they all were sitting under yellow patio umbrella to save themselves from sunlight.

U DESCRIDE MRNG SCENE VERY BEAUTIFULLY..👏

Zoya who stood up and served him a sandwich with a smiley over it. He looked at the sandwich and then at Zoya who was trying her best to be shy when he looked at her. The very first thought that skipped his mind was that this is not my Zoya.

OMG..SHE IS ACTUALLY SERVING BRKFST..HE KNW DAT SHE IS NOT FRGVING HIM..EVN TH SHE IS SERVING BRKFST..AWW SO SWEET..😳

THIS IS NOT MY ZOYA..AHA GUD MR KHAN..MEAN,...MY ZOYA...😳 U R IMPROVING..😆


'Ya take her for shopping Asad.' Rashid said to him while he gave a confusing look as he wasn't told by anyone about this.

'Today ? No I am busy.' He said in a weird tone while she pulled out a perfect pout as she wasn't expecting a no from him.


LIKE TYPICAL MEN..HE ALSO DNT LIKE TO GO FR SHOPPING..BT HE IS ZOYA HUSBAND..HE HAS TO..NO CHOICE BABY...U WANT ZOYA TO FRGV U..IN DAT CASE..BEGGARS ARE NOT CHOOSERS ..😆

'And the worst part is that the girl is same both times. Hats off to you Bhaijaan.' He continued dramatically while patting Asad's shoulder and this time it was Zoya's turn to give him an angry look while Asad smiled as it was very rare of Ayaan taking his side and Asad knew that he added more words to save his own life.


I M IN LOVE WID WHOLE ASAD AYAAN CONVO..

M STILL REMEMBER MY OLD QH DAY...DAT BROMANCE WAS TOTALLY COMPARABLE...


'She is not poor Ayaan, my wife is quite understanding.' Asad replied to him while taking a sip from the coffee cup and their was silence for next few minutes as this was the first time he was referring Zoya as his wife.

BEST BEST PART OF THIS CHAPPI..IN LAST PART SHE CALS HIM HUSBAND..NW HE COMPLEMENT HR AS WIFE...

SLOWLY N STEADY THY R TRYING TO MK THNGS BTR..

THIS IS WAT I LOVE IN UR STORIES..U NVR RUSH THNGS...U ALWYS GV TYM TO SHAPING UP THNGS...WELL DONE IQRA..


Oh ! So this is what makes her happy. I can call you my wife proudly infront of whole world. He thought while looking at her who was smiling now as if she was reading his eyes.


AHA ..NW ASAD KNW..WAT ZOYA WANT TO HEAR ...HE KNW ZOYA LIFE REVOLVES AROUND HIM N THEIR RELATION..HZ ALL SET USE HIS CHARM...AGN..HOPEFULLY DIS TYM HIS CHARM VL WRK..😉


AWW AYAAN IS TASTING HIS OWN MEDICINE..AUR TEASE KRO ZOYA KO...PAY BACK TYM..😆

She was shocked to find a pizza box on the corner table covered with red ribbons with the same bouquet he gave yesterday and a note stuck in it.

She walked towards the table and took out the note, ignoring the pizza and flowers as she was more interested in his words.


WAOH..ASAD SEND ZOYA FAV MOST PIZZA..WID FLOWERS...NNN NOTE...
SOOO ROMANTIC..


Hi Wifey ,

I asked you to tell me what you want from me but didn't get any answer from you in return which is quite upsetting :(

So I am trying in my way to get your forgiveness which I hope will be soon as I know more than pizza and the same bouquet you are happy that I called you my wife. I hope so as I noticed yesterday in your eyes how much you liked being calling that.

You are my wife and I am a proud husband, not because you are a doctor but because ----- because of everything else. Hope to get an answer this time and if not then don't blame me for increasing number of gifts every day in your room (:

Yours Husband,

Asad Ahmed Khan !



NOW TIS IS AGN MY FAV PART...


NOTE IS SOO SOO ROMANTIC..HE ACTUALLY PROUD OF ZOYA..NOT BCZ SHE IS DOC..BT SHE IS HIS LIFE...MASHALLH..👏

M IN LOVE WID DIS NOTE..

ZOYA SPEND 10 YRS TO HEAR DAT ASAD IS PROUD OF HER...ATLAST THE D DAY COME...



Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Bubbluu😳
sorry for late comment again
All family having breakfast together😳
zoya serving asad with a sandwich (smiley wala)😲😉
'Are you alright ? Why are you behaving so good to me ?' 😲😆
'Allah Miyaan ! What's wrong with you Asad ? I always behave good with you.'😛
asad compliments on the taste😃
zoya clapping like a child😆
she asks asad to take her shopping.. which refuses claiming that he's busy😕
'People get annoyed by one nikaah and here my Bhaijaan is going to try his luck for second time.' 😆😆 ayaan annoying zoya😡
zoya finally says that she wants asad to accompany her😳 but quickly changes😆 n puts the blame on dilshad asking her to buy a wedding dress of asad's choice😛
'She is not poor Ayaan, my wife is quite understanding.'😲☺️ asad's statement shocking everyone but zoya in state of contentment😃😉
zoya teases ayaan abt to blurt out catching him with humeira sequence😆😈
asad sends pizza for zoya☺️ yumm i hope chicken tikka flavour
Hi Wifey😲😳
You are my wife and I am a proud husband, not because you are a doctor but because ----- because of everything else. Hope to get an answer this time and if not then don't blame me for increasing number of gifts every day in your room (:☺️ hayee asad adamant on getting forgiveness☺️
cute update😛😳👏
dedicated to soniaaa😲😈 n she didnt unres herself yet🤣
i missed Dr. Sameer terribly😡😭 but im sure u dnt care💔
i want angry n tod phod wala AAK back😈😳
the jealous n intense asad
but u dnt like my suggestions😭💔
i love yah bubblu😭🥺

Mahuu Bear😎💔
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Ashu or anki..

anyone cn use it 😆
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