AsYa FF Battling The Curse - Thread Seven - Last Chapter and Epilogue - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWW THAT WAS TOOO CUTE I LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE THE EPILOGUE SOON AND KEEP WRITING CANT WAIT TO READ UR NEXT STORY😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
You ended the ff so early. Well no worries I know you will be bsck with a new one.
Awesome update. I really loved Aafreen's letter. Asya are so cute so is Ayat.

Waiting for your new ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ending, hope u are planning on writing another FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
Outstanding...its beyond the best!!👏
i just can't explain as to how much i love ur writing..
i loved the entire update..each n every part was jst awesome..
n Afreen was soo nice more then wht i had expected..😳
Ayat's talking n her antics were marvelous as usual..
the new member of Khan family is soo cute..i loved his both names: Ahad n Bunny...their family is complete now..
n Sophia..u better stay there for rest of ur life..😆
overall it was a brilliant update!! n last chptr too
but i know tht u will not make us wait long for ur next FF...
n also upadte the epilogue soonish!! 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres...

When zoya saw d letter and asad's pen nd when i read d first line of the letter i thought it was asad but to my surprise it turned out to be afreen... she truly seems like an innocent soul who truly believed in love and unfortunately fell for Rashid Ahmed Khan... but when she wrote about asad in her letter... :

Never ever misunderstand him again Zoya. He really loves you more than anything and without any demands. He just wants to see you happy and smiling whether you are good to him or not doesn't matter to him. He is the only one who fought through my curse because he never cares about anything else other than you. 😳

I felt soo proud of asad... it was really sweet of afreen to write these... i feel very bad for her because she surely did not deserve such a life... i mean she gave up on everything including her family just for that Rashid and look what he did to her...! 😡

This was soo sweet and cutee... i don't know why i just loved it,...!

Just to satisfy myself a little bit I want to tell you something about Asad and he can take it as pay back time for everytime he called me a witch or for making fun of me some times. Tell him it really hurts me and I don't like it.

And she told about osama... lolz... it aint safe keeping a ghost in your house...! i wonder what all has she heard and seen...! 😉 😆

Bt this was sooo naughty yet cute of afreen..! 😳😳

And lastly, for the first time I wished and hope to see you both together always with more cute babies.

Bt true it is asad miyaa... you can never really hide anything from zoya urf your better half...!

'I can never hide anything from you.' He said sadly while sitting beside her.

I could actually imagine him sitting down pouting...! but this line was sooo hilarious..!

'You are always blaming puphi for everything. So much wastage of time. If you would have proposed me at that time then we would have got 10 kids by now.' She said sadly and he let out a soft chuckle while looking at her adorable face full of chocolate.

'You would have married me when you were 18 only just because you want 10 kids ?' He asked with a smirk on his face and she realized what she said to him.

lol zoya seems quite desperate for more kids...! 😆

But i don't understand why did you even bother mentioning that Sophia...! She sooo doesn't deserve to be put up with... but am glad that she is in coma...! 😡 🤢

'No Mr Shah is taking her back because she is in Comma and as per Dr Maliha May her soul Rest In Comma now.' He said and chuckled as he wasn't worried about Sophia while she glared at him to not laugh at Sophia's condition.

Lol... truly may her soul NOT rest in comma...! Gosh...! She is sooo irritating...! 😡

But i could actually imagine asad's tamatar like red face when zoya hugged osama in the end...!

Ayaat babes i'm gonna missing you sooo sooo much...! Ur cutee yet witty remarks...! Hayyee meri bacchii cum darling..! 😭 😳

'He is sho little ami.' Ayat said in disbelief as she was expecting a boy as tall as hers while Asad and Zoya chuckled at her cute expressions.

But really Ahaad nick-named as Bunny...??? Aaawwwnnn...!! 😭 (khushi ke aansoo)

'How about Bunny ?' She asked excitedly.

'What ? No ! He is my son not a cartoon character.' Asad said in disbelief.

'But you shaid he is all mine.' Ayat said dramatically and Asad rubbed his forehead realizing what he said to his intelligent daughter who catches everything he says and uses it at the right time.

'Ok you can call him Bunny.' He said in weird tone as he couldn't imagine his son to be a cartoon at all.

Ayaat, i'm really gonna mish u like hell...!! *sobs* 😭

A family moment...!! aawwnnn...!!! ⭐️

He clicked on 'Capture' with his thumb and didn't realize how he took three picture as in first one they were normal, in second Zoya kissed him on his cheek and he clicked unintentionally while in third one he glared at Zoya who winked at him. All this happened behind Ayat who didn't notice and was busy in giving her cute poses.

I'm already in tears thinking about asya's cute bickering and ayaat with her dilshaad style "Shtop"...! Hayyeee...! Iqra u have to continue this... you cannot end it here because you have to show Ahaad's growing years...! But still feeling real bad for Afreen... in ayaat's language... "This house is truly Haunted!! " (Haunted- beautiful...!)

Oh lord just realised it is 2 entire pages in word... i guess am stopping here...! Iqra that doesn't mean u finally got rid off me though...! I'll be back soon with update some new ff or bring in another sequel to this...! 😆 😆 😆


aashka 😳


Edited by asyafreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loooved it...adorable and happy family...kind ghost amazing bubble awesome story...looking forward for your next story..best wishes
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Posted: 11 years ago
over😭😭
the spirit leaves back a letter😆 and ruins asad's surprise😳

ahad becomes bunny😆😆😆

lovely as always

shona is the best !

thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow gr8 part i m gonna miss this story sooo much
plzzz come up with something new soon
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part and work of yours
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good di,😊😊 you are a fabulous writer... will be waiting for another FF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...loved it
beautiful ending
hope u come up with new ff soon..
take care and thanks for the pm..

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