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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm second😃
still cant belive u have updated,pinching myself to get up from dreams😆😆
good come back from u...update s aweeesomeee😛
asad s completely broken from inside😭😭

Asad, My son! You want to go to USA, I wouldn't ever stop you, but atleast once meet your Abu, he was in hospital last night, he wants to see you once, Once you would meet him, I wouldn't ever ask for anything, this is my last wish. My last wish asad..


Asad held her hand on just an inch from his face,

she still calls him son??she s a mom who wants to fulfill wishes of a man who left them for his own reason without worrying about condition asad lives??😡

You want a son to fulfill last wish of his Mother? I give In,, Ami I give in,, I give in, I give in, I give in,.. he repeated these words again and again, moved his hands in his hairs and started pulling out his hairs,, with his eyes closed.

I give In,, Ami.. I give in... he repeated again and again, and sat down on the floor, with his hands still in hairs,

i almost cried here😭u r excellent in writing emotions well👏


But Alas! The Destiny is cruel and time is brutal,, and the sufferers are weak human beings,, made to suffer and to fall in the prey of destiny and time,,

word👍🏼

The Man's loud cries were soon reduced to silent sobs,

She was still rubbing his back,

While najma was happy to see that finally her Bhaijaan got his Solace...

and i'm happy on getting another update in next two days😉😆

if u failed..u'll recive a punch frm me😆



Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mali frst of all sry fr late unres...

Nw back to update...

M in love wid the update...

Feeling so sad fr asad...he has to leave to US...

M really glad zoya is supporting him..at any cost..bcz she knw she cn ha dle asad..to make him calm...😳


Dilshad is such a selfish woman...hu gv constant pain to asad..bcz of his spineless dad..or I cn say HER HUSBAND..

she felt so bad bcz asad referred rashid as HER HUSBAND..bt sbe ws not at all thought abt asad...bcz of rashid he want thru loads of pain...😡

Najma knw that zoya ws the rite prsn fr asad...as asad she tried to calm asad...


I know we belong together, any harm done to one of us would directly and deeply hurt the other,


Asad knw if he vl hurt himself...it vl not only effect him bt zoya also...


Such a wonderful update mali...👏

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Buddy Firstly congrats for turning into sizzler🥳
Secondly thank u so much for this awesome update after 1 month break..🤗
This part was heart wrenching😭 so
Beautifully written👏
Feeling sad for my asad😭
Dilshad 😡 u r such an selfish women😡 - she cares for spineless rashid more than her son🥺
Loved the way asad reassured zoya😳
Specially this lines- 😳 ''we belong together, any harm done to one of us would directly and deeply hurt the other''👏
Asad & his ''I give in'' was fabulous buddy..😳
Glad to see his tamatar on his side - Asad / najma scene was lovely...😳
Last para was emotional😭 made me cry again for asad😭
Fabulous part... Asad deserve all the happiness in this world
Eager looking froward to see more asya happy scenes in ur next update

Ani😃
Edited by -Anitha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
m late?😕

UNRES

the update was amazing
so its the final wrap-up
ASYA leaving for US finally, and we back to present,
i so want to read ASYA post-marital life, their probs, their kids,

Dilshaad 😡😡😡
how she can? selfish and disgusting

Najma-Asad bnding:
lovely and much needed, she believe her..😳

ASYA:
they are here to hold each other whenevr needed

n finally AAK:
his part was
very well written ,
the anger, the helplessness,
n I GIVE IN part

i loved this update, sorry for unresing late

n plese update soon,

Edited by .KSGIAN. - 11 years ago
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