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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .KSGIAN.

You need a long comment, i am here to give, because i thorougly loved it

these 3 gifts,,
o! wow! on each trial he bought a new gift for her? so cute of him,, We belong together--engraved in pandent 😳😳
finally zoya managed to stop him yey!!
i needed you for changing, but still☺️ do you need me too??😳
Zoya was being all Bold till the time he gave in, ad when he did she became just a tamed lioness?? i loved that shy zoya!

both wanted each other,, and thanxGod they had their night, asad didn't left for some stupid reason

Asad is all shy in front of family,and is bold in private, and zoya is opposite,
thats what i liked about this ASYA!

now who is on the door??

i just loved, loved and loved it
now i need next update soon,, plz😳
and no prob you were late
and so its an FF now,,🥳


THANKYOU sooo much Sarah!
yup i so like this trait too, asad being all shy guy in front of all,, but in private shyness is gone,, fah me,, i like em fah that
n zoya is afterall a girl,, Man! how much hotness one can take in??☺️
yup am not kind of typoo who's a fan of staying away once you are allowed to😉😉
Door...lets see,,🥱🥱🥱
and finally its an FF,, short story is not supposed to be this longer,, n am still having 7-8 chaps.. so had to convert
thankyoou so much fah liking😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .KSGIAN.

=My favorites=

Zoya's eyes pooled up with fresh tear stocks, and she led herself to burry in the arms of her Man, her one hand with pendant was resting on his back while other was massaging his shoulder,

Asad also let him fall in the hug with keen affection, as he was in the arms of the lady with whom he had fall in love for not once, not twice, not thrice, but for the thousand of times.

He loved her, as she did,

He wanted her, as she did,

He worshiped her, as she did.

Both encountered the same irrevocable feelings for each other.

this lines are awesomly written,

then your lines in the praise of Asad


in the moonlight she could see his sparkling well chiseled jaw, his ravenous lips, his aspirating eyes,, everything was inviting her IN.

In the first part of night he decided to stay away, but then in the middle of the night he realized staying away, would be of no use and in the third part of the night he had to give IN.

Diving in his aroma, he smelt like lavenders', no fresh laundered linen, no orchids, No, no.. cinnamons', whatever buh the fragrance she was peeping in was nothing but her personal brand of heroine, here u go away, there you die.

uff am dying.. with the hotness,
you remained in the limits, that was so fine,
well when i am getting that hot OS??

last 2 phrases are all mine fav too,, the one with lavenders😳😳
once again thanxalooot😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved asya masti
lovedit. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow!! it was brilliant..
beautifully written...
thank god tht zoya didn;t let asad to leave..it was jst outstanding..
continue soon!!

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
continue soon 😆
sry for irritating u
it was a really nice update
zoya's poetric skill has not changed the way she asked asad to call her by her name s soo unique
who s now there to irritate asad on his doorstep???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Beautifully written...loved it.

Thank you for the PM


thankyou so much, am glad you liked the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wohoo...it was amazing!!!
n i know even when the time comes in the show...zoya will have to ask asad for that...i mean...lol!!!
but u wrote it beautifully !!!
n zoya's funny antics!! can never get over that!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niharikap

nice...cute..romantic...asyalicious part...cont. soon 😊 😉 👏


Originally posted by: loveuarmaanu

nice update
loved asya masti
lovedit. continue soon


thankyou so much,
am glad you liked the ASYA part
would definitely update soon😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

loved the update
continue soon 😆
sry for irritating u
it was a really nice update
zoya's poetric skill has not changed the way she asked asad to call her by her name s soo unique
who s now there to irritate asad on his doorstep???

thankyou so much,,
when some one comments just "loved it" then it feels like he/she hasn't read and just commented and that pisses me off,,
Poetric and fun zoya is back n so is MR.OCD,,
Hmm,,, lets see who's on the door,, might be Rashid came directly from hospital😆😆

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