AsYa SS/FF - Zoya, Family and New York, OH MY!! (COMPLETED)

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friendsall

@friendsall

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

A great updt!!!

Yes Asad deserved to c this... what he thot..he can throw any1 out n they ll b wagging their tail n waitg for him... lessons r learnt hard way in real life!!

Hope thr s an intense track comg up... u write sooo well!!

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hira56

@hira56

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Oh god! That's awesome. And can u not just make kabir just a friend or just a pretended boyfriend.

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Nice update but cant enjoy it. Too much of khan sialings. Ayan is realy irritating me. Please can u make that ayan call zoya by her name no more mona darling, also zoya call him ayan not rabbert. Because after the most disgusting zoyan marriage track this mona rabbert name make me puke. So pls do it. So now the most boring part going to start the jealousy track. I hate jealousy track. This is very old trick. Please make the jealousy track very short. And give more asya. Thanks for pm. Pls try to fulfill my little wish. Hope u dont mind for my comments. Update soon

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

nice update👏 but jealousy part😕 i dont know i dont like to see Zoya with anyone else😳 i am possessive like Asad😆 same thing applies to Asad's case also😳

Please dont seperate my AsYa😭

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

who is the kabir yaar...

as much as i love ur story...zoya moving forward...what she is doing is right...

but why do hide it... the kabir room...

waiting for the shock on asad...
and the after reaction of asad...

does kabir knows about asad- zoya past... how will he handle asad presence here...

since i am a hard core asya fan... i want asya together... but u also said in the very beginning... that...happy ending only...

waiting for ur next update...

continue soon...

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

and one more...

if kabir is zoya boyfriend...why he is not sharing zoya room...

when u r in a relation...and live in same place...u share room...right...

is he her boy-friend... or boyfriend...

zoya loves asad... she said in her pov.while confronting asad...

bcoz 4 year is long time... but somewhere... deep down... she wanted asad to come back and ask for her forgiveness,,,,,,,,isnt...
and she knows once asad knows the truth...he will come back... doesnt she...

i guess i am asking so many questions...😆...

wating for ur next update...
and thanks for ur pm...

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bulou2013

@bulou2013

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

thanx for the pm...and whats with the room but towards the end of kabir entry i guess dat's his room and zoya has a boyfrend omg i wonder how asad is going to react to that...pliz pliz update very soonn...luvd the update

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Shau

@delena_

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

What Zoya has a boyfriend!!!!!!!!!????????????????😲

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Hey Sonny,

The part was really nice. Enjoyed reading it a lot. It will be fun to see Asad & everyone else's reaction towards Kabir. I never thought Zoe would have got a tattoo on her stomach, she's changed a lot after she returned from India.

Plz continue super soon..