AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

I so love this long updates ❤️
Loving this Asad so much 😃

Cliffy end!!
Update Asap!!

Hi Asya -Rm,
I will update soon, Promise.😃
Man I was counting on someone telling me too long don't write it.
Cliffy yes, But you might be happy with the next update.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Juliet

Superb update yet again. There are certain stories for which one feels like praising each and every part, every scene, every dialogue and yours is certainly one of them. What a delight it is to read ur piece every time. So refreshing.
The most amazing part among others was Zoya's POV when Asad can out of the bathroom with water dripping. It was such a sexy elaboration. Amazing writing. Then their dialogues all throughout were awesome.😊😉
Bathroom scene was hot n I mean hawwtt. Asad is hawwt.😉
I loved that part when Zoya was worried for Asad and his frown. It was Adorable.
What a cliffy!! Please update soon. Don't create too much misunderstanding between them. Your Asya are so lovable.
Loved every bit of it. Update soon.

Hi jasminerose,
Asad is hawt!😆 Thank YOu! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
You made my day, week and month.
You just went through elaborate encouragement and now I am grinning like a fool.
I am so lucky to have you read my FF.
Now I am all pumped to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi appy123,
THANK YOU for quoting my entire chapter.😊
Also thanks for gracing your first post ever on my update.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdrops27

I absolutely lurve your story!
Tthe sexual tension,, the emotional barriers and everything else!
Please please update soon!
Cant wait or the next part!

Hi dewdrops27,
Thanks so much darling for your sweet comment.
You summed it all up.
Will try sooner.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Awesome update...

like the way Asad teasing zoya all the morning...
loved the bathtub scene...
all the update was funfilled...
but the end with that message...
can't wait for the next update...plz continue soon...
Thanks for pm

Hi skavya,
Thanks for your awesome comment.
Loved it.
Hopefully wont disappoint you with the next one aswell.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

SUPER AWSOME UPDATE...👏


LOVE IT FROM STARTING TO END ITS AWSOME...😃

IM FALLING IN LOVE WITH UR STORY...😆

ENDING MAIN YE KYA HO GAYA...😭

LOOKING FORWARD FOR NXT PART TO KNOW WHAT GOING HAPPEN NXT...??????😕😕

SO UPDATE NXT PART SUPER SOON...😃

Hi Shubh007,
I will do my best to update sooner. Thanks for such a colorful comment.
Love IT!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for being so late to comment...was too busy with exams...it's a wonderful story...and you pen down all the emotions very well 👏
continue with your good work...update soon..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

sorry for being so late to comment...was too busy with exams...it's a wonderful story...and you pen down all the emotions very well 👏
continue with your good work...update soon..😛

Thank you so much. Nope don't be sorry. exams are Important.
This can wait.
so glad you enjoyed the update.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

awesome update...loved it
loved bathroom scene
waiting for the next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm..

Hi amruta04,
Thanks dear,
so glad you liked it. Loved your comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome ..

fantastic update

Thank you so much.
So happy you liked the update.😃

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