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Posted: 11 years ago
asad: ' zoyaaa...' he pushed the door in haste and the door slowly opened with the screeching sound! quickly he barged inside the room.the room was in pitch dark filled with dust and spider webs...it was stinking and spooky!.. he couldn't see the things properly...in hurry he tried to switch on the pen torch... 😡 😡 it doesn't turn on! he tried repeatedly ...for his bad luck it was not working !😡 😡

spooky!!!!!!!!😲 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
asad:'dammit!...😡' he threw the torch.😡

asad:'zoyaaa...kahan ho tum?...' he rubbed his eyes and tried to look through the dark. his eyes took few minutes to get used with the darkness. 😲 😡 he moved his hands in front of his face to remove the dust and the webs which made him sneeze and cough. 😡

making him restless
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asad:' zoya...😔'he stamped on the records and walked in. 😡 the old papers crushed under his feet like dried leaves...he looked around and he could not find her.😡 😡 😡

asad:' zoya...😒'he screamed. 😡 😡 he did dot get any reply...there was no sign of zoya in that room... 😡 😡 heavy silence prevailed!...which made him nervous and tensed. 😡

scared and worried... where she is

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Posted: 11 years ago
Now this is how asad is...



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asad:' zoya...' he kicked the files on his way and moved on...😡 😡 after a long search and struggle, 😡 😡 at the very end ...he was shocked 😲 to find zoya fallen on the floor as a lifeless shrimp ,😲 😲 in one corner of a huge wooden file rack,😲 in the middle of old files!

asad:' zoya...😲' he ran to her and abruptly fall on his knees hurting himself.😲 😭


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Posted: 11 years ago
asad:' zoya...' he quickly gathered her and placed her on his lap.😭 😭she was lying motionless and her body was flexible...😭it came along with him.

asad:' zoya...zoya...' he stoke her cheek. 😲 😭

zoya:🤢...she was lifeless.

asad:' zoya aankhe kholooo...'he continuously pat on her cheek. 😭

asad:' tum akele nahi ho... 😭 i am here...with you...'he caresses her cheeks.😭



Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
asad:' tumai kuch nahi hua😲 😭 ...tum teek ho...look at me 😭 ...open your eyes...' each syllable thrummed behind his ribs.

asad:'please zoya hosh mai awo...'😲
he took her hands in his hands and realised that her hands were chill. 😲 😲 he immediately checked her pulse and found it feeble.😲 😲


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Posted: 11 years ago
asad:'omg!😲...zoya tumai kya hua?...😲 😭 utto na zoya...' his stomach crawl.a tiny shiver slithered down his spine 😲 😭 looking at her motionless.😲 in hurry he rubbed her palm with his. 😲 it doesn't work out.he tried continuously...😕
zoya:🤢

asad:' zoya...' he was at the verge of cry.😭 😭 his eyes brimmed with tears. 😭 😭 with his vibrating fingers he moved her disturbed hair from her face and tucked them behind her ear.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princesbarbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

by mid of chapter 2... he realize.. his feelings...
before he can say it... he lost his chance...noe look like
he is visiting hell!!!!



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