AsYa OS: And a spirit makes three

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Fantastic! Sixth sense is one of my fav movies. Zoya and asad are so sweet in your story!

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

that was an amazing and intense os.also a unique and refreshing concept.
i loved asad and zoya and their relationship here.
think you can continue?i would love to read further.

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Special mention: Sadie! This one is for you! Hopefully this quenches the lack of OS's that you have been feeling! 😆

Yep It definitely did 🤗

I really love stories about psychics and stuff, I'm writing one as well! But poor dilu momma, she is dead? :O awww!

The last line made me laugh 🤣 It's a mother's job to worry, be it while she is alive or after she is dead! 😆

Can't wait for the next part! Update soon! 😃

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Simply fabulous os...👏
Cutely written...
I loved it a lot❤️

Thanks for the pm & for the cute asya os...

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NEHA

@SacredLove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

It was awesome and very different story
i love it thanks for pm

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

This is intense and beautiful :D

Edited by DancingDiva. - 11 years ago

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

so nice and unique concept!!!!
really enjoyed reading it...

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Amazing OS..Loved it..Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Awesome Os !!!
Loved the way asad-zoya's relation grew gradually and how asad understood zoya and her relation with the "other side"
It was well written
Do we by any chance get a part where Asad and Zoya together deal with Dilshaad's worry of Najma.

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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

it was so so amazing...👏👏👏

a very diff story...just loved it...
i was so lost in the story...cud imagine evryhng...

beautifully written...👏

and the last statement...

"Hello, dear. I am worried about Najma."

it completely took me off guard...😆

hope to see a sequel...whr we get ZoNaj interaction...😉

thnks fr the pm...😊

Edited by angel2930 - 11 years ago