FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED* - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
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She ran up to him...and hugged him tight...as he..shivered in rage...his hands possesively engulfing her in his arms...He closed his eyes and tried to hide under her neck...inhaling her scent...his senses, calming down instantly.His hands desperatly moved about her back...squeezing her in him tighter..closer...not wanting to let her go, Zoya wholeheartedly complied, caressing his head..as she whispered sweet nothings in his ears, gently kissing him in his hair...her small frame on her tiptoes..trying to hold him🤗
Loved this part. I could visualize it happening and the desperation with it.
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏____________👏👏👏👏👏👏 Zoya let him be, as she busied herself with the movie on the screen, snaking her hand around his and leaning her head on his shoulders, Asad leaning back as he closed his eyes and dozed off. Vivid images of moments of silent tearless cries of himself, pricked his heart...his mom walking around the house being all normal,while he drank to keep living and to overshadow the images of Zoya..Zoya lying in a pool of blood, dripping from her veins in her hands, her body lifeless...their divorce papers...in her hand...

Zoya..he jerked awake...waking Zoya along...

Zoya-Asad what happened are you ok...Zoya asked concerned...her hands instinctively caressing his face...

He leaned in and closed his eyes..feelin her presence..

Asad-You're here...he whispered...

Zoya-Yes I am here and I am not goin anywhere...she cajoled ..What happened Asad...tell me..

Brilliantly written again.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Something fishy, I cant like your post no matter how much I try. So will try again tomorrow.
Whenever I get your updates I not in front of my laptop to post. So sorry for the delay.
Loved this chapter it is one of your best works. Didn't like the sessions end- I didn't like Asad treating Dilshad that way but It was need for the story to move forward I suppose.
Let me know a writers insight when you post your next chapter. Do you think although love for your beloved become crucially and critically important. A child forgets that the 9 months of pregnancy can be the most enduring and extremely difficult for a mother and not to forget labor.
No child should insult his mum that way how ever cruel. But we all have our weak moments so I hope Asad regrets and makes up for it big time.
Great Splendid Performance otherwise, Aashna. 😃
PS - I read it twice after I got back.👍🏼
Love
Juliet.
Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i was thinking ...zoya will pacify asad n all will be well...but here you have introduced a new twist!!!!
let's see...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good udapte continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan

Very good udapte continue soon 😃



THANK U😊

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update...now why is Zoya overreacting??😡...I'm with Asad😊,Dilshad has made enough mistakes to suffer this much...continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
asad's anger is justified...

dilshad made a mistake by not letting him know the truth...

now she has to face it..

OMG!!!

the news..

they were so disgusting!!!🤢

I guess zoya reacted this way to shut those rumors..

update soon..

that was so beautiful..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dat was truly good an update...! Its quite heavy with all the emotional drama that happen
I hope Asad doesnt do something stupid...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG THAT WAS A AMAZING UPDATE I HOPE ASAD IS NOT GONNA DO ANYTHING DUMB THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃
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