AsYa FF 'My Wicked Fate' [Part 6: Pg 101(Finally AsYa met)] :D

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: akaswan
This story is just awesome

I love each part

And i also love how you write

Very good update

Continue soon please🤗

Thank you SOOO MuCh !!!

I loved your comment very much obviously because you appreciated my work and complimented me

Will try to continue writing soon 😳

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: Kyara.95

Waiting!!

SORRY !!!
REALLY VERY SORRY TO KEEP you waiting
will unres now !!!
:)

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

finally !!! unreserved on page 91 !!! :)

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
SORRY !!! REALLY VERY SORRY TO KEEP you waiting will unres now !!! :)

It's Otay 😳

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
finally !!! unreserved on page 91 !!! :)

Yeah, Finally! 😆

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
res 😊😛

unres 😛
this long comment is for making you wait so long 😉

man !!!that was some update !!!
i tell you it was a bit heavy !!!
very emotional indeed !!!!
poor asad !!! he really turned stone hearted !!
i think he loathes everyone now !especially zeenat as he considers her the reason for his cruel fate . it broke my heart reading about his mental state 😭!!poor thing he didn't even cry :'(
it was really heartbreaking to read the part where he touches dilshad's cheek and then breaks down :'(
you know what ; i thought zeenat would come back for asad . but she didn't !!!

and then there's zoya !! geez man !! i HATE that evil woman razia and the good for nothing siddique !!!😡i'll put a bullet through their heads if i get my hands on them !😡😡 that swine siddique !! why does he hate his daughter so much !!a daughter can be even more better than a son !!!😡
poor zoya !!even though both her parents are alive she is alone !!it's so sad for a little girl to go through all those things that zoya had to face !!!
it's good to know that allah fulfilled her wishes !!atleast zoya still believes in God and i think asad lost his faith in God !!
beautifully portrayed 👏👏👏
loved it !!!⭐️

okay let me finish my comment here !! you see i can go on forever with my comments !!and the thing is a lot of books are waiting for me due to my exams🤢 !!! being a superb procrastinator i really have a mountain of lessons to tackle !!
and sorry if i couldn't comment for some chapters :( my exams will only be over on 14 th of march !!!

so bye for now and take care !!!
will miss you 🤗

❤️
kiki😳

Yes! Asad did turn stone hearted but his faith in God is still stable!! According to him Allah is the one who has helped him in finding an aim to still live his life and Allah is helping him as he got a job and all!.

I think this makes sense 😕 I know after what happened with him , his faith in God should have been finished but I don't want that. I want my Asad to still believe in Allah!

The most appropriate reason I can give here is that Dilshad always taught him to believe in God and worship him as He is the one who helped Dilshad in upbringing her children without their father by her side.

Maybe I will mention this in the next cahpter 😳

Ohh Kiki! I really love you for mentioning that Asad-touching-Dilshad's cheek scene. I myself loved writing that scene and also cried along with Asad while writing about his misery and I really wanted someone to like that specific scene 😊 Thankyou <3

You will know about what bappened in Zeenat's life in the next part most probably! And I expect that you will be shocked after knowing her part of story 😉

*Please write 'A' of Allah Capital*

Thankyou so much for this comment :')

I wish you have gone further writing this comment 😃

You see, I can't get enough of 'what you think about my work' 😛

I hope you do well in your exams and soon come back to comment on my threads! :")

Bye! You too take care. Will miss you more 🤗

Edited by Kyara.95 - 11 years ago

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

have to make this one short !!
i still haven't studied anything for tommorow's exam 😕

sorry for typing Allah in small letters !! i didn't notice it first !!! i changed G og God when i nooticed it !!but Allah escaped my notice !! 😕
so sorry !! thanks for pointing it out !!😊

it's good to know that asad still believes !!
okay tell me nothing bad happenned with zeenat !!
bye !! my sis will kill me if i stay here for a minute longer !!
bye !!
and thanks a lot !!
love you bye !!

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
have to make this one short !!
i still haven't studied anything for tommorow's exam 😕

sorry for typing Allah in small letters !! i didn't notice it first !!! i changed G og God when i nooticed it !!but Allah escaped my notice !! 😕
so sorry !! thanks for pointing it out !!😊

it's good to know that asad still believes !!
okay tell me nothing bad happenned with zeenat !!
bye !! my sis will kill me if i stay here for a minute longer !!
bye !!
and thanks a lot !!
love you bye !!

I hope your exam went well 😊

You will get to know about Zeenat in the next update itself ! 😉

I don't think I will be able to update before your exams end so chillax girl!. You will surely have time to read and comment on my future updates 😃

Love you too *behno wala pyaar* 😆

Bye!. Take care :*

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Dnt u thnk it's gttng too lng... Update na..

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Update soon

Originally posted by: misshottytotty
conti soon

Originally posted by: gowtu
Dnt u thnk it's gttng too lng... Update na..

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove
Update plz..

Guys I know it's high time to update the next part but the only thing which is not letting me write the part are my exams which are starting from this coming monday!. 😒

I am sorry for making you people wait 😳

Will try to update ASAP once my exams get over.