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Posted: 11 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: nilusoni
nice part
thanx for pm

Thank u.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1032

Originally posted by: kals82
u did make up for the last 2 sad parts...

so happy days are hear again...

update soon

Thank u for commetnin..n m glad I was able to turn it around..n m glad u liked it...n yes happy days r on their way...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1033

Hi !! Fist omg 3 parts in two days !! I finally just finished reading them !

God I love Asad character it's sooo hard not to fall in love with him , every thing about him is so endearing (even when he is being an ass )

I love the fact that you want them both to move forward with out him knowing the truth it's like rediscovering heir love !!!

And shit man they were married !! Its sooo shoking and unexpected , but then of course it's set in an Indian back drop .

I can't wait for asad to win her over , and San Francisco I'm sure is going to be spectacular

An other thing I loved was Asad all angry and smashing his had in the mirror I could almost imagine it as if I was watching the show !!!

On second thoughts I wish the written would higher you , the story would be sooo much more beautiful ,interesting and gripping 👏

Anyways I could go on about your storie but I don't have the time nor I want to bore you !!

Thank for the pm :)

Btw I'm from the south of Europe !! And you are from Baroda omg I'm dying to go there!! It's currently my dream city I hope someday I get a chance to visit it , I have heard sooo much about it .

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1034

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 16a...

Even in the drunk state asad.. feeling for zoya.. so emotional
but when he talk.. he unable to hold... the ugly past..

you really made me cry.. went asad crying and zoya unable
to hold him so sad..

she take care of asad like a baby... so much pain...

Im just gonna reply to all ur posts in 1...making my life a lil easier..😆

Hey there...thank u so so so much for all ur comments...I love readin them..n love to knw wat u liked n maybe disliked in the update..Asad and Zoya are connectted no matter wat..n they feel each others pain as their own...n m sorry for makin u cry..I knw the past 2 updates were sad..but it will only get better from here...they will take care of each other n all will get better...😃

Chapter 16a... FB

So sweet... went asad nervous to ask Dilshad about
zoya... and his future with so cute...

he got permission from everyone... and he propose
to zoya ... very romantic...

Well Im thinkin of a prequel to this story..where I can better write about the story before this story...so I kept it a lil brief wen it came to flashbacks..but m still glad u liked it..

OMG!!!! that is sweet torture... ask advance on zoya in
is sleep... 😆 😆

went wake so embarrassed... try to raise his voice on her..
look like she did something wrong😳 😳

and the fight... both bite their head off... 😡

first time ayaan saw this in 😲😲

LOL..ya it was the lite moment in the chapter..shows how much they need each other..😆..n since they r not ready to accept that yet..they feel embaressed...😆..n well Asad..he was just trying to push her away but Zoya is strong..she fought back...n ya it was strange for AYaan...😆

SO thanks once again for all ur lovely comments..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1035

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Wonderful update...pls...pls..pls... Continue soon...nd tnks fr d pm...😃

I am from bangloore(karnataka)

Hey there thank u for ur lovely comment..n thank u for sharing where ur from...😃 now I know a lil bout u😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1036

Originally posted by: skavya
Awesome update...
so asad realize his mistake & now try to get forgiveness from zoya...

can't wait for the next...

plz continue soon...

Hey there...thank u so cey much for commentin..n m glad u liked it..n yes Asad will make things better now😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1037

Originally posted by: Reyansh23
Dis part ws gr8
So d turnaround hs started...gr8 goin our supr confident Asad Ahmed Khan
Waitng fr d nxt part
N
Fr my intro
I m jasmine...from Punjab

Yes the TURNAROUND has started😆...n Asad is back..he will turn things around.. m so glad u liked it...n thank u for commenting😃

Hey jasmine...nice to knw a lil bout u..😃..m Aashna..if u didnt already know😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1038

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1039

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs
Awesome part... Loved how Zoya took care of Asad... N Asad's apology... Happy that Asad accepted his love for Zoya n the way he made up for his behaviour was just superb... Waiting for them to reabh SF n getting more closer to eachother...
Pls pm me as I DIDNT GET PM THIS TIME... N do update nxt part soon...

P.S.: My name is Jasleen. I Am from Uttar Pradesh, India working as a teacher in a CBSE School...

LOVE
~JAZ~

Thank u for such a lovely comment..n m so sorry that I missed u on the PM's...i'll pm u with the next for sure...

M glad u liked Asad and Zoya's connection n their care and concern...n m very happy that u liked the way Asad started to apologise...it was an impulse n m glad it was liked...SF will be fun..n will be up in CH18...one more update till thn...

N hey Jasleen I am Aashna..nice to get to knw a lil bout u...so ur a teacher nice..wat subject or which class???😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1040

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Nice update. Finally Asad has got some sense drilled into him...
Liked it that Zoya didn't give in so easily. She should make him work harder to get her forgiveness.

Thanks for the pm n please update soon. Please pm me the next part too.

P.S. I'm from Delhi.

Thank u thank u thank u..for ur amazing comment...n makes me very happy to know that u enjoyed readin it n liked Asad's braing waking up..Zoya's standing her ground..n making Asad work...

Makes my day...thanks😃

Cool ur from Delhi...been there many times...😊

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