Asya SS:True Love.... Updated Part 5 (page 19) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Linsie

Zoya is smart... she did her best ... plan to find the person..

no one came up... so funny how she use zubina..

so funny with asad... there is something there...

he dont look like bother about zoya... hmmm


is this really him??


he is Asad... Bothering...???!!!🤔 u may find soon in next parts...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Aditya_Kumar


he is Asad... Bothering...???!!!🤔 u may find soon in next parts...😉


waiting thn 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
cute update ...they have started fighting...amazing!!!! continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Awesome Work Glitter Graphic Awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Loved it thanx for the PM and update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Amazing update...
nice tricks by zoya to find that secret guy...
but that guy is really asad or some one else...plz continue soon...
Thank u so much for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
read parts 1 and 2
sorry for the late comment

but first my net was down and then i had a college trip

both updates were amazing

i totally loved your story

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Part 3:

Evening:

After college student council was having a meeting... Asad is Secretary of college, Aarav Cultural head with Anu as Assistant Cultural Head and Avinash is Sports head with Aina as Assistant Sports Head... This meeting is related to post of assistant secretary... Student acting as assistant secretary got transferred from the college... Zoya and Zubina are one of the council members... Asad started meeting...

Asad - Aarav, Anu, Avinash and Aina are not present here who are off for college's culture and Sports competition... I am proud to announce that we backed two prizes in sports and 3 prizes in cultural competition...

Everyone clapped...

Asad - They will team up tomorrow with us in college... Today this meeting is for next Assistant Secretary of college...

Zoya's phone rand disturbing there meeting... It is call from her brother...

Asad - Iss meeting mein phone silent mein rakhna hai... Miss. Zoya as a council member if u are not following rules, how will u guide others...???

Zoya (To herself) - Aisa class le raha hai jaise world peace meeting ke beech meri phone ring hogayi ho... Kadus kahika...

Asad - Kuch kaha aapne...??

Zoya - Kuch nahi... Sorry...

Asad - Ok... kal hum Secretary ko select karenge... So tomorrow meeting after college at 5 PM (Looking at Zoya) Sharp...

Everyone dispersed from there...

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Road:

Zoya and Zubina are going back to home on her scooty... It was already 6 PM and way from college to her house is desolated... It is growing dark around...

Zoya - Bhai Jaan aaj bada class lene wale hai...

Zubina - Ha... jaldi chalo..

Zoya's scooty suddenly started jerking... After few jerks it stopped in the middle...

Zubina - Kya hua...??

Zoya turned her scooty key... It gave a starting sound but didn't get started...

Zoya - Lagta hai petrol katam hogaya hai...

Zubina - Kya..???

Zoya - Abb ghar kaise jayenge...???

Zubina - koi auto bhi nahi dikh rahi hai...

Zoya and Zubina started pulling their legs and pushing scooty... After reaching some distance they became tired...

Zoya - bhai jaan phone nahi utta rahe hai... iss tarah hum ghar kab pahonchenge...???

Zubina - ye sawaal mujhe karni chahiye...??? Petrol bar ke nahi rak skati thi...???

Zoya - Please Zubi... Meri dimaag matt khana...

Zoya and Zubina stopped under a tree... She parked her vehicle aside and both sat on scooty... while looking here and there she saw a petrol filled bottle rolling towards her with a name sticked on it and with some message... She went and picked up bottle and took paper in her hand...She checked around but couldn't find anyone...

Message:

Never Forget Petrol...

--- Your Friend

Zubina came there and snatched note...

Zubina - Kya baat hai Zoya... tumhari Secret helper na aaj meri bhi help kardiya hai... abhi jaldi petrol fill karo aur chalo...

Zubina took bottle from Zoya's hands and went to scooty... Zoya turned paper and wrote another message on it...

Message to Secrete Helper:

Please Meet me tomorrow in canteen... I really want to meet u and thank u... Please meet me...

---- Zoya

Zoya sticked it on tree with a tape... Luckily she was carrying plaster on that day for some record work...

Zubina - Yeh kya kar rahi ho...??

Zoya - Uss secret helper ke liye message...

Zubina - Par gurantee kya hai woh yahi hai...

Zoya - Woh yaha nahi hai toh yeh bottle boot ne beja hai kya...???

Zubina - Toh abhi jaakar milona...???

Zoya - Woh bahar nahi ayega... yeh toh gurantee hai...

Zubina - Gurantee kya hai ki kal bhi milne aayega...???

Zoya - Pata nahi kyun... par mujhe lag raha hai ki woh kal mujhse milne zaroor aayega... Abb chale...

Both left from there... After sometime a person came and read the note...

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Next Day: College Canteen:

Zubina and Zoya sat on their Friend's group bench...

Zubina - Are u Sure ki woh ayega...???

Zoya - Life mein kuch bhi sure nahi hota hai... Par mujhe lagta hai ki woh zaroor aayega...

Zubina - Dekho aagaya...

Zoya - Kaha...

Aarva, Avinash(Avi), Anu and Aina came there after their achievement...

Aarav/Avi/Anu/Aina - Hey...!!!

Zoya made a boat shaped eyes and gave a look to Zubina... Zubina smiled...

Zoya - Hey guys...!!

After saying hi, Zoya was back to her search rolling her eyes here and there to find that secret helper...

Aina - Isse kya hua...???

Zubina - Kisi ko doond rahi hai...

Anu - Kisko...???

Zubina - Secret Helper...

All - Secret Helper...??!!!

Zoya - Sshh...

All (Low voice) - Secret Helper...??!!!

Zubina - Ha... Actually hua ae ki...

Zubina described all circumstances happened when they were not there... They were listening with surprised expression and open mouth... Zoya ignoring their discussions is in search of that Secret helper... But she couldn't find him anywhere... Her disappointment dragged her into irritation mode... Zoya looking at her friends who are listening to story narrated by Zubina...

Zoya - abhi aap sabb mooh band kar ke meri help karo usse doond ne ke liye...

Anu - Par doondnge kaise...

They heard a voice from back...

Voice - Zaroorat nahi mein aagaya hoon...

Everyone looked towards that voice... Person pulled his hand from his pocket to give shake hand...

Anirudh - Hi... I am Anirudh...

Zoya looked at him confused...

Anirudh - Your secret Helper...

Zoya stood up with surprised expression and shaked hands with him...

Zoya - Wow...!!! Toh aap ho secret helper...

Anirudh - Aapko buran a lage toh kya mein aapse personally baat kar sakti hoon...

Zoya - Yeah sure...

Zoya wore her bag and looked at her friends with a smile...

Zoya - Chale...

Anirudh - ladies first...

Anirudh gave way to her... Zoya started walking infront of him and anirudh followed her... Zoya was happy but looking at that sight person on one table is burning with confusion, tension and jealousy...

Person - Zoya ko kabhi dimaag nahi kaam karne wali hai... kisi ne aake keh diya ki woh secret helper aur isne maan liya hai... Mujhe jaake dekhna chahiye...

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Garden:

Zoya and Anirudh sat on one bench and talking to each other when that person is observing from a little far... When he saw Anirudh moving close to her, he could no more resist his anger, he went there fuming... Zoya and Anirudh got surprised seeing him there...

Zoya - Asad...!!!

Anirudh - Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...???

Asad - Yeh baat mujhe poochna chahiye... yaha ho kya raha hai...???

Zoya - Yeh mera best friend hai, hum baate kar rahe hai...

Asad - Dost... do minute pehle bana dost abhi best friend bangaya hai...

Zoya - Tumhe kaise pata...???

Asad - Mujhe sab kuch pata hai... Aur yeh tumhara secret helper nahi hai...

Zoya - Tumhe kaise pata ki yeh secret helper nahi hai...

Asad (High pitch Voice) - Kyun ki mein hoon tumhara secret helper...

Zoya controlling her smile said Anirudh to leave... Asad realizing what he said couldn't stand anymore with embarrassed expression... He wanted to leave from there when Zoya stopped him...

Zoya - Mujhe pata tha...

Asad with confused face looked at her...

Zoya - Mujhe kal hi pata chal gaya tha... sirf mein aaj confirm karna chati thi... Anirudh ko mein hi kaha yeh sabb karne ke liye, taki tum bahar aake yeh accept karo...

Asad - Par tumhe...

Zoya again gave a smile to him and took breathe...

Zoya - Mujhe kaise pata... Yahi poochne wala than a... iss detective Zoya ki brain bahot jaldi kaam karti hai... Kal ki jo note hai usse dekh kar mujhe tum yaad aye ho, uss note ki writing tum library mein notes lik raha tha na uss handwriting se match karta hai... Mujhe laga tumhi ho, but phir se doubt aaya ki agar yeh match kar raha hai toh pehle wale note kyun match nahi hua hai...?? Iss confusion dur karne ke liye college aane ke baad jab tum tumhare bag bahar rakh ke lab gye the, tab mein tumhare bag mein se notes nikalke check kiya tha... uss mein do hand writings hai ek jo pehli note se milti hai dusri jo dusri note se...

Asad is listening to her with a shocked expression thinking how intelligent Zoya is...

Zoya - Mujhe yaad aaya ki tum class mein right hand se likh rahe te par jab mein ne tumhe lab mein dekha tab tum left hand se kuch likh raha tha... Iss se confirm hogaya ki tum dono hands se likh sakte ho... aur yeh bhi conform hogaya tha ki tum ho Secret Helper...

Zoya took breathe after her long narration of finding Secrete Helper...

Asad - Yeh sabb jaankar tumhe kya mila...???

Zoya - Ek sabse accha dost jo mujhe har musibat se bacha tha hai aur mujhe sabse zyada khayal rakta hai...

Asad - Tum yeh nahi jaana chahte ho ki mein ne isa kyun kiya...??

Zoya - Nahi... Kyun ki mujhe pata hai ki ek din tum mujhe zaroor bataoge... Par mein itna jana chati hoon ki tum yeh sab kaise kiya...??? I mean tumhe meri ghar ki raasta kaise pata tha...???

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Thanks for reading...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
afterall our zoya is miss bond how cant she find abt her secret helper
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Nice Story..Just now read all three parts.
PM me whenever u update...
I've sent u Buddy Request. ..




-Mariam-

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