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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

It's hard to believe you are 13.
Your stories always brings a smile. You write beautifully.

All your stories end with a kiss.😆 but that's so romantic.

Edited by janestone6 - 11 years ago

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lover1998

@lover1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Great story. Absolutely loved it :D

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Awww it was just super cute !! :D

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

That was so special n adorable... :)
I'm so in love with the concept... n to share a secret even though I love the black color I hate seeing all the black umbrellas together in the rain... I love big umbrellas with unique colors...
Asad n Zoya... blue n red umbrellas... so cute!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Fabulous OS...thanks for the PM

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I have read this OS.

Loved it.

Very interesting and unique concept.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 44

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

WOW!!!!!

I'm so sorry for the late comments!

FANTASTIC OS! 👏 Totally *Oye Hoye* 😉

Fari!!! This was SOOO CUTE! ❤️ 😳 I loved the pixar film too! ❤️

Both the POVs are beautifully written! 👏 And the KISS! How I love the kisses in rain! ☺️ ❤️

TOTALLY ENJOYED THE OS!

Love ya! ❤️

- Mrina

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menamus

@menamus

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

😃Mindddblowwwinggg! Fareee! Dattt! Wasss!!! Superrr!!!! Cuteee...must say!!!!!!😃

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

This story is cute, lovely, refreshing, happy, wonderful and what not! Its amazing!!! You are really a fabulous writer!! Great work on this!!! I loved the umbrellas' POV and then Asad and Zoya are always the best 😃 I loved this OS!!