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Posted: 11 years ago

sorry for the delay...the present track is not at all inspiring...i tried hard to complete this update..hope you understand me...

thanks everyone who read my updates and liked it.its very encouraging.

this update is dedicated to my friends sri(asritha) and shishira.they motivated me to write this.


here is part 7:

Asad was early to breakfast just to talk to zoya. zoya sat on her chair with out uttering even a word.dilshad is serving them food. beta..today asad have an appointment with doctor.i think you too should have a checkup.you are looking dull these days.

No phuphi..i am fine...no need to go to doctor..asad tried to initiate a convo..ms farooqui, I think ammi was right .asad thought zoya would shout at him for compelling her but zoya did not spoke not even a word.she left the table and went to her room.dilshad and najma were surprised seeing zoya.asad too left to his room making an excuse.he sat on his couch thinking about zoya.

why is she behaving weird these days?is she angry on me that I did not listen to her ?no..no...if she was angry she would yell at me but will not stop talking to me.everything is going well between us but what happened suddenly,I did not said anything bad to her.i have to talk to her.he started going towards her room but stopped on his tracks.why should I talk to her.i haven't done anything wrong.let her suffer alone.why should I care?his thoughts are interrupted by dilshad.

asad...I have some thing to ask you..about zoya..asad nodded his head for dilshad to proceed.why is she so calm these days?do u guys had any fight?is everything ok?

Ammi..every thing is fine with me. I don't know about her .what does she think about herself..is ignoring everyone a solution ?i don't care...I am leaving ammi...asad left without even listening to dilshad.dilshad is surprised at asad's reaction...is he angry at zoya??no it looks like he is worried for her.better I stay away from this.they will solve on their own...dilshad left his room to continue her work.

Dinner is a regular affair and everyone retired to their rooms.but sleep is faraway for asad and zoya. Zoya sat on the bench in garden and talking to stars.ammi..what did I do to deserve this.i lost you and I cant lose anyone.i felt like my life was taken away from me when I saw mr khan in that condition.why ammi??why does god test me ...he takes away everyone from me .i cant afford to lose anyone. I have to stay away how difficult it may be ...atleast I can have a hope that they are fine away from me and still care for me.

Asad saw zoya in the garden and in no time went to talk to her.he sat beside her.zoya tried to walk awaybut stopped listening to asad..zoya...why are you avoiding me??

nothing like that mr khan...

please tell me zoya..is there any problem,I will help you but don't hurt yourself.i am there for you zoya.zoya looked at asad and saw his eyes and saw concern for her.she turned away from him for the fear of getting closer to him.

i am absolutely fime mr.khan.just tired of searching hostels...

hostels???what are you talking about zoya...asad asked angrily.zoya answered somewhat calmy...for me mr khan.i don't want to be a burden for you.how long can I stay.i am just a guest. I don't know when will I complete my work.

no zoya..you are not a guest...believe me..you are my family.dont ever say again that you are a burden.

thats great of you mr khan...thanks for the concern...I am glad.but I have decided and will be leaving in two days...asad got up and glared at her...ms farooqui...you said you have decided then who am I to stop you.do what ever you like.he left to his room and slammed his door shut.zoya closed her eyes and thinking about the convo betweeen her and asad.she sat there for a while retired to sleep.

there asad sat restlessthinking about zoya.is she leaving ?but why?zoya please don't leave.what should I do to stop you?i should talk to ammi.May be she can explain zoya.next day dilsahd went to talk to zoya.

beta...asad told me that you are leaving.i don't force you but listen to me once.you are more than my guest...just like my own daughter.i don't know what your problem is but I can assure you no matter what we will never leave you.

zoya hugged dilshad...really phuphi??

yes beta...I think you ve changed your decision?

yes phuphi...with a broad smile plastered on her face...I know...dilshad patted her head and left her room but did not fail to notice a smiling asad.dilshad thought of teasing asad.i am sorry asad.zoya is stubborn on her decision to leave...

ammi..she just said that...asad stopped realising ...

what??what did she say?and how do you know asad?

ammi...woh..i am just passing her room at that time...dilshad smiled...I know asad ...about everything...and left leaving behind asad whose happiness is now no bounds...

zoya came to asad to tell him her decision..why did you change your decision ms farooqui??last night you were very determined. anyways..i have to go to office..so can you please leave my room..asad try to act as if he don't care...allahmiya mr khan..last night you asked me to stay back so I thought of informing you. its my fault..you never change mr khan...zoya sighed angrily and walked away...

pagal ladki muttered asad .


i apologise for mstakes...feel free to say what you think...

lakshmi...

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Edited by penfriend28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it thanx for the PM and update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zoya is avoiding Asad cos of her past 😲 ? Its just not Zoya thing :-/

Cont. Soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: penfriend28

sorry for the delay...the present track is not at all inspiring...i tried hard to complete this update..hope you understand me...

thanks everyone who read my updates and liked it.its very encouraging.

this update is dedicated to my friends sri(asritha) and shishira.they motivated me to write this.


here is part 7:

Asad was early to breakfast just to talk to zoya. zoya sat on her chair with out uttering even a word.dilshad is serving them food. beta..today asad have an appointment with doctor.i think you too should have a checkup.you are looking dull these days.

No phuphi..i am fine...no need to go to doctor..asad tried to initiate a convo..ms farooqui, I think ammi was right .asad thought zoya would shout at him for compelling her but zoya did not spoke not even a word.she left the table and went to her room.dilshad and najma were surprised seeing zoya.asad too left to his room making an excuse.he sat on his couch thinking about zoya.

why is she behaving weird these days?is she angry on me that I did not listen to her ?no..no...if she was angry she would yell at me but will not stop talking to me.everything is going well between us but what happened suddenly,I did not said anything bad to her.i have to talk to her.he started going towards her room but stopped on his tracks.why should I talk to her.i haven't done anything wrong.let her suffer alone.why should I care?his thoughts are interrupted by dilshad.

asad...I have some thing to ask you..about zoya..asad nodded his head for dilshad to proceed.why is she so calm these days?do u guys had any fight?is everything ok?

Ammi..every thing is fine with me. I don't know about her .what does she think about herself..is ignoring everyone a solution ?i don't care...I am leaving ammi...asad left without even listening to dilshad.dilshad is surprised at asad's reaction...is he angry at zoya??no it looks like he is worried for her.better I stay away from this.they will solve on their own...dilshad left his room to continue her work.

Dinner is a regular affair and everyone retired to their rooms.but sleep is faraway for asad and zoya. Zoya sat on the bench in garden and talking to stars.ammi..what did I do to deserve this.i lost you and I cant lose anyone.i felt like my life was taken away from me when I saw mr khan in that condition.why ammi??why does god test me ...he takes away everyone from me .i cant afford to lose anyone. I have to stay away how difficult it may be ...atleast I can have a hope that they are fine away from me and still care for me.

Asad saw zoya in the garden and in no time went to talk to her.he sat beside her.zoya tried to walk awaybut stopped listening to asad..zoya...why are you avoiding me??

nothing like that mr khan...

please tell me zoya..is there any problem,I will help you but don't hurt yourself.i am there for you zoya.zoya looked at asad and saw his eyes and saw concern for her.she turned away from him for the fear of getting closer to him.

i am absolutely fime mr.khan.just tired of searching hostels...

hostels???what are you talking about zoya...asad asked angrily.zoya answered somewhat calmy...for me mr khan.i don't want to be a burden for you.how long can I stay.i am just a guest. I don't know when will I complete my work.

no zoya..you are not a guest...believe me..you are my family.dont ever say again that you are a burden.

thats great of you mr khan...thanks for the concern...I am glad.but I have decided and will be leaving in two days...asad got up and glared at her...ms farooqui...you said you have decided then who am I to stop you.do what ever you like.he left to his room and slammed his door shut.zoya closed her eyes and thinking about the convo betweeen her and asad.she sat there for a while retired to sleep.

there asad sat restlessthinking about zoya.is she leaving ?but why?zoya please don't leave.what should I do to stop you?i should talk to ammi.May be she can explain zoya.next day dilsahd went to talk to zoya.

beta...asad told me that you are leaving.i don't force you but listen to me once.you are more than my guest...just like my own daughter.i don't know what your problem is but I can assure you no matter what we will never leave you.

zoya hugged dilshad...really phuphi??

yes beta...I think you ve changed your decision?

yes phuphi...with a broad smile plastered on her face...I know...dilshad patted her head and left her room but did not fail to notice a smiling asad.dilshad thought of teasing asad.i am sorry asad.zoya is stubborn on her decision to leave...

ammi..she just said that...asad stopped realising ...

what??what did she say?and how do you know asad?

ammi...woh..i am just passing her room at that time...dilshad smiled...I know asad ...about everything...and left leaving behind asad whose happiness is now no bounds...

zoya came to asad to tell him her decision..why did you change your decision ms farooqui??last night you were very determined. anyways..i have to go to office..so can you please leave my room..asad try to act as if he don't care...allahmiya mr khan..last night you asked me to stay back so I thought of informing you. its my fault..you never change mr khan...zoya sighed angrily and walked away...

pagal ladki muttered asad .


i apologise for mstakes...feel free to say what you think...

lakshmi...

my index


thnx swtheart
so sweet of u 🤗
liked it very much
continue with ur writings
loved to the core👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very cute story line.. Good going 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg

This was brilliant

I loved AsYa here

And Dilshad too

The bench scene was awesome

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shishirareddyp

thnx swtheart
so sweet of u 🤗
liked it very much
continue with ur writings
loved to the core👏


my pleasure dear...
thank u so much...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Omg

This was brilliant

I loved AsYa here

And Dilshad too

The bench scene was awesome


thank u so much mahima...
i am not sure about this update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it thanx for the PM and pls update soon 😊
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Originally posted by: penfriend28


my pleasure dear...
thank u so much...🤗

🤗🤗

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