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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Wao...such an amazing concept
Destiny took everything away from Zoya
Pls pm me for the next update

thank you for reading and liking it..will surely PM you :)

Originally posted by: akaswan

Sad but i loved it 😊

thank u 😳

thank u hun 😳

-Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kitab04

just read it...and it is AMAZING!! i cant wait to read the next part! update soon plz😳😳

Thank you for reading it and liking it 😳

Originally posted by: tsering2013

Wow!! Wht a story.. Just like the title ...
I'M IN LOVE SIMPLE LOVE Wth this story.. 😊
I was so engrosed in reading this story that i just missed my station..
But i've no regrets in travelling again back till my station coZ I am so happy teading ur FF
Already sent u buddy request plz pm whn u update...
Keep om writing such beautiful stories... 👍🏼

Aww...i am sorry you missed your station..but thank u for such a sweet comment...it brought a smile to my face 😳

-Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses

That was such a beautiful and heartbreaking chapter! 👏 👏 👏 Poor Zoe. 😭 I loved the flashback of AsYa with the moon, that was my favorite part. So sweet and beautiful. ❤️ Continue soon, can't wait! 😉

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Aww..thank you Fari 😳...i am glad you liked it...personally..i love the moon flashback too..yeah..i get the wink, will post the next part soon 😆😉

-Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
i hope you still liked it 😳

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Jst loving it dear..

Thnx fr pm

thank u hun 😳

Originally posted by: Ru_21

awesomeupdate reya..loved it


Thank u hun 😳

-Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awww poor Zoya N Asad :'(

Hope humeria ll play Cupid this time :D

Cont soon :)



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Edited by Asya-Rm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Awww poor Zoya N Asad :'(

Hope humeria ll play Cupid this time :D

Cont soon :)



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I know...Asad and Zoe have suffered alot...but let's see Maan and Humzie do this time...thank u for reading 😳

-Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Hey all * waves* Hope you are all doing well. Thank you for the likes and comments on the previous part. Here is the 3rd installment.

Enjoy

Part 3

I unwillingly followed Nuzhat out through the back door dying to look back at Zoya, longing to be with her; to touch and hold her to see if my dream of ten years was finally come true. I had found the girl who still held the key to my heart, even now I couldn't believe it.

"Here we are Bhai, I got you out without getting caught.", she said proudly.

"Thank you ", I said with a smile.

"No worries", she said. "I got to go now, we will see you in a bit."

I nodded and she dashed back inside giving me one last grin. I couldn't help back smile back but the smile faded off as soon as Nuzhat was gone.

I looked at the decorated house knowing she was in there; somewhere in there but I couldn't see her, I couldn't talk to her even though I had seen her after ten long and painful years. I walked to my car I had parked next to the house. I sat on the bonnet and ran a frustrated hand through my hair.

There were so many questions in my head but there was one that kept nagging at me; Who was she calling Ammi when her parents had died that night? The most horrifying thought came to my mind next: could it be that she was referring to her mother-in-law as Ammi? Could it be that she had gotten married? Unexpected tears of agony began to wet my eyes. Just then my cell phone started ringing, it was Ayaan; I quickly picked it up and cleared my throat to normalize my voice.

"Hey best man, where are you? Don't tell me you got busted dude.", he said in his usual cheerful voice.

"No way, man, I am just waiting for you guys outside Humeria's house. No point in coming all the way there and then back. So I thought why not just wait here"

"Yup, that works. See you soon.", he said and hang up.

I leaned back to rest my head against the car door wondering how i was going to face her again? How would I look at her and not engulf her in my arms? I closed my eyes praying for courage to get through tonight for Ayaan's sake.

Just then I felt her presence, suddenly the wind blew and I could smell her scent; her sweet fruity scent. I quickly snapped my eyes open and looked around thinking she might have come outside but she was nowhere in sight. I ran my hand through my hair once again; a habit Zoya said I had whenever I was angry or frustrated. But I swear to god, I could feel her presence. Just then I looked up and there she was; the most beautiful girl; my Zoya standing by the window grazing at the full moon with tearful eyes and I knew she was thinking back to the lake and my words.

I am looking at my moon. The moon's beauty is nothing compared to my Zoya's beauty. And for me you are the most beautiful in the world.

I shook my head to shake off the memories and told myself she was no longer my Zoya but she is still ever so beautiful. Actually she has grown more breathtaking over the years with her soft creamy skin, her doe like eyes filled with thick kohl, her rosy lips, her slim waist and everything about her was still perfect. I kept staring at her and even with the distance; I knew she had tears in her eyes and I was the responsible for them. I suddenly wished to myself that we hadn't met each other today; then she would still be living her life without the tears.

It saddened me that I had done everything to be eligible to have my name joined with hers. After that dreadful night, I found out that Zoya's parents had died in the car accident but I never found out where Zoya had gone overnight. I searched for her everywhere but it was like she had vanished into thin air. But I had done everything in my power to become a successful man, a man she could be proud of. I studied hard throughout school and got scholarships to fund my post-secondary education. After, Ammi had given me the trust fund my Abbu had set up for me when I was born. With that money, I had started my own construction company, which was now one of the most successful companies in India. Despite all the success I had today, I knew it was useless I could share it with the woman I loved.

Then, I saw Ayaan and company at the end of the street waiting for me. I took a deep breath to ready myself. I ran to the end of the street to join the barat and soon the dhols starting beating. Ayaan gave me a grin as he sat on the horse and nudged me on the shoulder to start dancing. I gave him a smile and went to join the boys. The barat danced all the way to Humeria's doorstep where the girl side was waiting. I blended myself in the crowd so I could watch her without getting noticed.

She had a small smile on her face as she along with other girls threw flower petals to welcome the groom side. I involuntarily smiled seeing her smile but I could tell the smile didn't reach her eyes. Just then our eyes locked as she caught me staring; I quickly looked away but when I looked at her again, she was still watching me with those beautiful chocolate eyes of hers. We were welcomed in as the girls threw rose petals at us; I caught a few she was throwing and she noticed.

************

Ayaan went to sit on the couch next to the Qazi while he waited for his bride. Soon, Humeria was led down the stairs with Zoya by her side. Humeria was dressed in a red and golden lengha . I sighed to myself; I would give anything in the world to see my Zoya clad in a red bridal dress for me.

Today, she was adored in a white and sliver saree looking like an angel. Zoya sat Humeria down next to Ayaan, they were both separated by the flower curtain.


The Qazi sahab started the nikkah ceremony asking both the acceptance of the bride and groom. After the Qubool hai' from them, everyone rejoiced with sweets and hugs. I watched as Zoya fed Humeria a piece and whispered something in her friend's ear making Humeria blush. At Humeria's blush, Zoya threw her head back and laughed richly, straight from her heart. At that moment, she looked just like the Zoya I knew ten years, with twinkling eyes filled with mischief and an infectious smile.

I walked up to Ayaan and Humeria, hugging my best friend, "Nikkah Mubarak ho Ayaan Miya." Ayaan grinned in response. I turned to Humeria and congratulated her. She smiled and nodded a thank you. Just then a few guests gestured Ayaan over. Humeria stood there looking hesitant but I knew she had something to say.

"It's nice to see you again, Humeria."

"You still love her, Asad ?"

"I have never loved anyone else, you and Zoya both know that."

"Then fight for her, she is determined to be unhappy but she has only loved you all these years."

"But""

"Anything else has to come from Zoya. I can't say what has happened in the ten years. But I have faith that destiny brought you two together after all these years for a reason: to unite Asad and Zoya together this time."

I nodded and smiled. Now, I was determined to speak to Zoya.

************

My eyes followed her around the room as she distributed and fed sweets to the family and friends. She looked startled as she suddenly stood in front of me. The smile faded off but she still held the tray of sweets in front of me, offering me to take a piece.

"I still don't like sweets, Zoya.", I whispered softly.

Yet, she still picked up the smallest piece off the tray and held it against my mouth, "It's a happy occasion, please have some.", I took a small bite to please her. She smiled faintly in response and was about to walk away when I held her wrist. Turning back slighting, her eyes dropped to my hand on her wrist. Wordlessly, I pulled her closer until we were a few inches apart.

Taking the same piece from her hand, I offered to her to eat with my hand, "It's a happy occasion, please have some.", I repeated her words back to her. She obliged taking a mouse-sized bite before she ran off. I looked at the piece left in my hand and popped it in my mouth. Looks like I suddenly like sweets!

************

The waiters were serving dinner and I was wandering around playing hostess and mingling with the guests. I could see Asad looking my way from the corner of my eye. He was staring more than he was eating.

"Zoya beta, come here", my Ammi gestured me towards her. She was standing with Ayaan, his Ammi and Asad. I clenched my fists and prayed to Allah Miya for strength. He seemed determined to bring us face to face again and again. Plastering a small smile to my lips ,I walked up to them.

"Ji Ammi."

"Zoya, Zainbab Bi wanted you to meet Asad, he is Ayaan's good friend but just like a son to her. He is very successful businessman in India, a busy man he is, that's why he couldn't make the other wedding functions."

Of course, Zeenat Ammi wouldn't have a clue who Asad was to me, other than Ayaan's good friend. She had never met Asad in India, and I never told her about our past.

I nodded politely and said my salam to Asad. I could see the matchmaking telepathy playing out between the mothers.

"After Humeria, I want to get my Zoya married. I better start finding a handsome boy for my daughter." my Ammi said as she embraced me. I hugged her back and saw Asad staring intensely at me.

I watched as realization dawned in Asad's eyes, his face lit up and I could see the happy tears in his eyes. He still thought we had a chance at happiness. I had no right to lead him on like that and I silently shook my head negatively at him; his happy expression quickly turned into a frown. I quickly tried to tear my gaze away from him as I excused myself from them.

I tried to get a grip on my tears knowing I couldn't break down yet, not until Humeria's wedding was over. I busied myself with guests trying to avoid Asad's gaze I felt at the back of my neck most of the evening.

It was then time for Humeria's bidaai; I held a tray of rice for her as she threw them back. I then hugged her close crying to be parted with my best friend and sister. Humeria hugged everyone else including Ammi, Abbu and Nuzhat before she bid farewell.

We sat together for a while my mom rested in my embrace. After a while, Abbu took Ammi upstairs telling us to rest as well. I instructed the servants to clean up. Nuzhat gave me a hug as she bid me good night. I sat in the living room as the servants moved around cleaning up. Then without another thought, I grabbed my car keys knowing there was only one place that would give me the solitude to break down

I drove the car down to Rice Lake and parked the car on the now vacant street knowing no one would come here at one in the morning. I sunk to the soft grass unable to hold myself together any longer. "Why? Why Allah Miya? Why did you bring us face to face again after all these years?" ,I asked with angry tears as I looked at the sky.

"Because even he knows that Asad and Zoya are meant to be together.", a voice said from behind me.

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How was it folks ? Kindly provide me with some feedback in the form of likes and comments

Much Love,

Reya <3

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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And sunddenly he likes Sweets😃
It was so cute :)

Waiting for the Confrontation ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please pm me!! Update soon!! LOVEDD IT!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow gr8 part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next as well
continue soon

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