Dard ka Rishta ~An AsYa FF (Part 12 Updt.) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Amazing part



AsYa were amazing
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Asad walked up to Zoya's room and knocked! No answer, so he knocked a few times but when no one answered he grew worried. What if she had done something, she had been quite upset and low for the past few days!? He quickly opened the door, but once he got in the room, he forgot about everything. There was Zoya. Not hurt but rather walking out her bathroom looking as beautiful as ever. She had her hair up in a messy bun and she was! Oh my god! She was just in her towel and nothing else! He shouldn't be here!! But he couldn't turn around on the beautiful sight in front of him. She hadn't seen him and his uncontrollable urge of touching that soft skin had brought him three quarters in to the room and he was basically two feet away from Zoya, when she had finally looked up and registered that he was there. As if forgetting that she was in a towel, she stared at him, but then all of sudden became conscious of her surroundings and quickly backed up while heat came up to her cheeks and she made an ouch sound as she hit the door knob. Asad went forward as he said, "Careful Zoya! Are you ok?"

Zoya had seen Mr. Kahn a tiny bit later and by that she meant a lot later! He had totally seen her, when she had reacted about retreating back, the clumsy her had ran into her door knob! She couldn't walk straight what made her think she could walk backwards! But before she could turn around, Mr. Khan had already come forward saying, "Careful Zoya! Are you ok?" With that, his hand had touched her bare shoulder and she felt as though energy had shot through her and as if to capture the moment and the touch, her eyes closed. She felt a havoc rise inside her and as if it had affected Asad as well, he came closer to her. She let the touch soak in as he stroked her shoulder and she opened her eyes to find him staring right in her eyes. She gots lost in those chocolate brown eyes, and and Asad touched her along the neck, she closed her eyes again, and he continued stroking and made his way down her arm as to tease him but then he touched something that brought her back to her senses. He had just reached her scared tissue and it seemed to bring them both back to their senses, and she quickly pulled away her arm and avoided his eyes as she told him, "You should leave now, Mr. khan!"

Asad had left when she had finally looked over to where he was standing. She stood there for a moment thinking and then decided that she needs to go out of the house! She quickly located her "Juicy" sportswear and quickly putting it on with her favorite blue flats and a messy bun, she headed out of her room. She knew that if she did everything fast enough, she may make it out of the house before Mr. Khan came out of his room. She was relieved that she had reached the door when Dilshad called from behind. "Arre Zoya beta kahan ja rahi ho? Breakfast to karke jao!" She felt guilty about lying to Phoophi but she really needed to go before Mr. Khan came. "Uhhh.Phoophi.uhhhwoh.woh Mainye breakfast to karliya." Looking at her Phoophi's expression, she said, " Woh actually mera pizza khane ka bohot mun ho raha tha to main kal raat ko deliverer se deliver Karwa kiya tha! And after so many days, I had Cold, Bassy, Stale pizza for breakfast! Isiliye to main subha se heaven mein udi ja raahi hoon."

She was relieved that Phoophi had seemed pretty convinced and was about to leave when Phoophi asked, "is everything ok beta? You didn't even dress up today." "'Yes Phoophi,' she replied, I actually was feeling a bit lazy and I don't want to dress up, so I just did this." Dilshad smiled, "Ok beta, jaldi Anna ok! Aur dhyan se Janna beta." "Don't worry Phoophi, I promise I'll be careful." With that she hugged her Phoophi, gave her a kiss on the cheek, and turned to leave, as she heard Dilshad smilingly say, "pagaal Larki!" She smiled to herself and steeped out the door



Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow

This part was rocking

Totally loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its nice
n write their convo's also in english please...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys ill not update still i get 40 comments.😉😉😉

IM not good at blackmailing.😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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your ff may be dard ka rishta but with me your rishta is sweet one you update I read , you update and I read and again you update and I read I wish this goes on and wow morning romance is the best thing that can happen to them loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I already cmnt on ur update...awww..dnt do dis..m waiting fr ur nxt update..

PLz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

She didn't feel like running another useless and unfruitful errand on finding a lead on her father's sudden appearance in Bhopal 2 years ago! So she decided that she was going to visit each and every one of the places that Shehry had told her to go see. Yes, she was going to go sight seeing! She was walking senselessly, looking around to find a tour guide who can help her around when she found a girl who also seemed to be in a same dilemma as her. She decided to approach the girl. "Hi, I'm Zoya! Are you also looking for a tour guide." yThe girl seemed a little startled so Zoya gave her a minute. "No actually, I used to live here a few years ago, and I was just looking around to see that not much has changed." The girl smiled at Zoya, and Zoya just smiled back and said, "If you have time or maybe feel comfortable enough, would you please show me around." Then she quickly added, "if that's okay only then, and if you want I can pay now and you can leave me whenever you like, as long as you give me an overview of where everything is." The girl was taken back a bit, but said, "I can show you around as a friend not as a tour guide. Meaning no money involved. Deal."

Deal it was. She and her dost had walked around for a while and when it was about 4'o clock, her dost said that she had to go now, so she gave Zoya directions on how to get to her last destination, which she had purposely saved as last. It was a small and peaceful lake where she could see a sunset. And what was better then ending a beautiful sight seeing day with a peaceful sunset. She found a rock from where she could peacefully enjoy the sunset, but before she could sit down, she felt a hand on her shoulder. She knew who the hand belonged to before she turned around. "Your late! It's 8'o clock already! You were suppose to be home by 7! Remember." She turned around mad this time, "Oh stop it Mr. Khan! I just stayed back to see the sunset, and sun doesn't set till 8:30 on a summer day! So it's still light outside! I'm safe!" He grabbed her from her arms drawing her to him, but before he could speak, someone threw a punch towards Asad and he lost his grip on Zoya!

Zoya was falling down and she closed her eyes, waiting for the fall but she fell into someone's arms that also felt familiar! It couldn't be! She quickly opened her eyes and yelled, "Shehry! What you doing here?" Shehry looked very mad and spat, "You seriously didn't think that I would come to India and not look after you right!? I just got here last night and I called you this morning and when you didn't pick up like usual on the second bell, I knew something was wrong! So I called Appi and asked here where you were living and by the time I made it there, you were walking down the street, so I followed you all day to make sure you weren't going to do anything stupid! And then this guy! How dare he touch you? Shakl se to theek lagta hai Lakin kaam."
'"Excuse me!', said Asad. What do you mean? Mind your tongue! She lives in my house and I've just come here to retrieve her! Who the hell are you to be talking to me like this and let go of Zoya now!" He said, grabbing Zoya's hand and putting her behind him.


Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!
Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!
Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!
Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!
Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!
Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!Guys i want lot of Comments and likes please to continue
it make me courage to write guys!!!

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