FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 24

Wow..awesum prt...nw zoya...wil maks a aitutn..asad wil b forced to kiss her..hehe...

Nahi!! You keep building up more and more suspense with every update and it keeps bringing me back to read more!! But still i love you for this!! It's such a GREAT story and i'm sooo glad that the Billi thinks she doesn't have to do anything, that means she'll lay off for a while and hopefully in that time, they can get closer, woohoo!! Please update as soon as possible, i'm too eager to read on, i want to know what Zoya is going to do, God it's going to be sooo INTERESTING!! If possible, please can you pm me when you update? Thanks a bunch!! x

Thx for quick update.. n loved Tanu's bewakoofi.. science class mein jaani chahiye usse to study law of attraction!!

loved it...

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

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yay!! first to comment again😆

Honestly I knew you would not give us the kiss that soon..so i was not disappointed and you can relax...atleast I am not going to kill you😆😆

Great update yet again...

Asad confused as to what Zoya was trying to do😆..and My My...Zoya is planning something really big😉..What are you planning to write now??? this is so interesting...creating circumstances where Asad kisses first..😆😉

Haha yay for not killing me :p Actually Zoya has no idea what she's gonna do... only I do HAHA. Just wait and watch (: Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

Damn they dint kiss...but still i love the way yo turned the tables😆 Now Mr.Khan is gonna kiss her..ok then we need not sit through his boring lectures😆 Thanks fr the Quick update😃 Make sure they kiss in the next update itself..yes i'm a despo😆

Hahaha well you know my writing style, I can't possibly give you the kiss in the very next update. Thoda sa sabar karlo :p

wanna read the nxt part ...please update the nxt part ASAP

Originally posted by: braich_gal

awww...this chapter is for me??!?? para mi? pour moi??? mere liye??? ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I LOVED IT!!! dun worry...i won't scold/kill you for not letting them kiss yet...and for ending it there as well...😆 I actually liked how you put it...the whole thunder bringing Zoya back to her senses and in typical Zoya way she falls on the bed 🤣 now what is Zoya gonna do to get Asad to kiss her...hmmm???

I was laughing reading Tanveer's thoughts about why Asad seems interested in Zoya...i was going like...coz you dummy cat!! OPPOSITE ATTRACTS!!! and when she went to snoop...i was like shoo!! shoo!!!

can't wait to read the next part!!!

And that's what I meant by your comments make me laugh hahaha I don't know how you come up with stuff like this :p Glad you liked it!! (: As for what Zoya is up to, wait and see haha (:

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Wow what an update...but damn that thunder...everytime wrong timing...yahan pe asad zoya k romance ka sabse bada kaanta tanveer nahi ye thunder hai...

I loved zoya's dazed expressions wen she finally made sense of what was happening...

Hayee i love yoy for torturing tanveer so much...well to answer tanveer's question as to what asad likes in zoya well heart wants what it wants...

the way zoya laced her fingers with asad's and led outside was so sweet😳hayee asad miyaan sochiya nahi bas hug kar lijiye ab

So,she has until friday to find her abbu still zoya can only think about the kiss...hayee pyaar ki maari meri zoya...so what is zoya's plan?...can't wait to know...continue soon...

Haha there's a bigger reason why I've put the whole sequence in a monsoon season other than the thunder interrupting them... you'll see why soon :p Anyway, more Tanveer torture and more Asad-Zoya romance coming up! (: Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

You ended one cliffy with another?? Now we have to wait and see what Zoya will come up with (you know her ideas always land her in trouble). Lets see where you take us next.

I sure did :p But hey, at least it's not such a bad cliffy this time haha (: