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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#951

Yuppie, an early update 😃

Di, mein shikayat nahin karna chahti lekin saach kaho tho I love your long wala updates. I knew you have decided to update more frequently and with shorter ones (which is totally fine) but I always crave for more (being a bit greedy) 😆

Mr. Khan and Zoya: what a change in attitude and behavior.

She has really matured in all those years. The struggles/hurdles she faces in those five long years, has indeed made her into a mature and wise woman. Life changing experience.

He has also changed. Being away from his family and loved ones for five long years, he has become a different man now. Life changing experience.

Yes, there feelings are still the same par haalat kuch aise hain that they can't show it.

tho kya hum itne ajnabee ho gaye hain ki ek kamre mein baith bhi nahin sakte? (Ouch...painful but very realistic. Any one would have asked the same, I guess)

Aap chaahe tho bathtub mein bhi reh sakte hain. (The naughty and funny Zoya. She tried, but she failed...this time)

Asad. She mumbled. His ears had yearned to hear her address him by his first name. In his dreams, he had imagined pulling her into his arms whenever she would address him as Asad. (Very touching... I can imagine how happy and delighted he must have been from the inside. That one name from her mouth must have been heaven on earth for him, at that moment)

Zoya's dialogue wherein she said that she is not more the same 21 year old girl, were very well said. 👏

crying his heart out. (Poor Asad. My heart really goes out to him. I could imagine him doing this. The raindrops reminded him from his beautiful time with Zoya and the teardrops from his eyes reminds him from the pain he had to go through in the past five years. Amazing, Di)👏

When he remember that his Eid gift to Zoya has indeed changed both their lives, very ironic and very nicely used. 👍🏼

I am sorry Arjun. I will never be able to fulfill my promise to you. I will never be able to confess my love for her. (Don't lose hope Mr. Khan. You just came back to this world. Men like you should not give up that soon. Fight for it. Aapka pyaar sacha hain and even Allah is with you, have faith and he will show you the right path at the right time)

Again, what a cliffhanger Di! Bechari Dilshaad is seeing her son after so many years and here she has caught up him in a fight. What a way for a re-union.

Thank you Di for this quick update. Loved it as usual 😊🤗

Edited by me2you - 12 years ago

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@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#952

Another wonderful update! Its so poignant. I can see it all play-out in front of my eyes. This story could not have been any better. I'm loving every bit!

Please update sooon :)

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#953

this is so depressing... but so awesome...

poor zoya.. she don't deserve this at all..

atleast he went to his house...

I wish things do change to better soon..

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Advaymerijaan

@Advaymerijaan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Wow!! U write so beautifully...
U're my fav. Writer in this forum... Keep up the gd work..

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Luckyforever

@Luckyforever

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#955

oh my god
you made me cry
waiting for asya reunion .

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#956

oh goodness this was beauty.

my heart felt a prick when Zoe said dat it might have been a new reason to stay away from her.

Asad had gone thru everything, living on the only hope of going back to her, his life. now where they stand is so complex, the equation is completely changed. I just hope asad tells Zoe wat had happened with him & they be at least friends.

cont soon dear.

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shikaDD

@shikaDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#957

i'm waiting to see asad reaction vn he gets to knw that she is nt married

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#958

Ye to gadbad ho gayi. Zoya pe to puri umeed kayam thi. Why did she say about Asad hurting her? I didn't get that. Their last parting was a happy one - he indirectly proposed her.

So, Asad is at home. Dilshaad and Najma know about him. Najma who is free from promises gets in touch with Zoya and Zoya gets to know the truth. Or, now Asad will forbid Najma from informing Zoya saying she is married. This is bad.

I am seriously not getting why Zoya is so angry. Angry because after all these years, he is still maintaining faasle? I hope she cools down and thinks.

This story seems to be in its best phase! Another fantastic one.

p.s. Will Ayaan suddenly feel hate vibes from his trusted bodyguard? Use wo sab mila, jo Asad ka tha - Abbu, achhi life aur ab "Zoya".

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#959

Awww i thought i would stalk your thread from 1am onwards but apne to jaldi update kar diya nd see m so late😭

But di this was such a beautiful and emotional update...i wanna cry...

I knew zoya wouldn't buy his stories and the guest house made me travel back to their cruise day and asad sleeping in the bathtub...i love how you connect past events so so well...

Aap chaahe tho bathtub mein bhi reh sakte hain.

This brings back so many beautiful memories😊

The moment zoya mumbled 'asad' all i wanted him to do was take her in his arms and never let go...i feel sad for him that he couldn't do something that he had been yearning for so long and especially wen that something was one of the things that kept him going in his POW days

I loved how zoya confronted asad...she hasn't lost her spark and her fiestness😊but her lines

" Ho sakta hai mujh se door rehne ke liye aap ki koi nayi excuse ho?" pierced my heart as it did for asad only if she knew how much he had yearned for her

" I just wanted to thank you for introducing me to myself. Jab insaan ko khud se mohabbat ho jaati hai, tho usey kisi cheez ke peeche ya kisi insaan ke peeche bhaagne ki zaroorat nahin padhti"I just love these lines di...zoya has truly grown up...all this time away from asad has made her see and discover her true self...i know these lines may have hurt asad now but he surely will be proud to see what an amazingly independent woman zoya has turned out to be and I know loving someone is the best feeling in this world but to truly love someone one has to love oneself and m glad zoya has finally learned to do that...

Asad's breakdown in the rain made me cry di...i could totally imagine him😭

Asads heart ripped into a million pieces as he saw the three of them leave- the family of three...Omg asad thinks that zoya has moved on in her life and Farhan is the proof of that...poor asad...I wish he knew that zoya has loved only one person in her life and still does and always will...my heart beaks seeing asad feel that his love is no longer his😭

I am so happy that he is not angry with zoya for have moved on with her life with his step brother...I am happy her understands her and is ready to do anything to save her even give up his life...that like a true man whose love is not based on how much and what he gets back...👏

Fate had played a cruel game with him but if he were destined to be her savior and not lover, he would fulfill his duty to the fullest.Oh fate wants you to be with zoya asad otherwise it wouldn't have made you two come face to face everytime...Just don't give up...

I loved asad little monologue about Arjun and i know he will fulfill his promise and i hope it happens soon...

So dilshad finally sees asad yes yes...so will asad come to know about Rashid's involvement in Dilshad's life?Janne k liye padhte rahiye "Faasle"😆

Lovely lovely lovely update di...loye ya🤗

Edited by anushreemishra - 12 years ago