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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
I wish I was sleeping on Asad =P

Cute and caring update Sadie :)

Good luck for the assignments! =)

hahha dont we all wish that? 😉

thanks 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Loved it,...

thanks 😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
awesomee...

thank you 😃

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Ayra Nuzhat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Trust me when I say this..I thought I had reserved again when I saw the update..but I wonder why it was not posted ...Of all the reserves today, why ..why...kyun...kaise...only yours was missed!!! .. (and you know why I am saying this!! 😆😆)

Coming to the update now, totally loved the jungle part...I was to comment on how good it was and then I read that you had tried the spooky stuff..Honestly, great writing!!! You pass with flying colors🥳

and ya I would like to read Jungle wala love😃..

Do well in your assignments and share the horror stuff if possible!!

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rads73937

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

WONDERFUL UPDATE.

BUT ITNA CHHOTA SA???

UPDATE A BIG PART SOON.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

they slept on top of each other omg!😉😉

the way zoe and asad cming close was vry cute

hw he tried to protect her and brang her close😳

what gona happen in hut?😆

Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
Trust me when I say this..I thought I had reserved again when I saw the update..but I wonder why it was not posted ...Of all the reserves today, why ..why...kyun...kaise...only yours was missed!!! .. (and you know why I am saying this!! 😆😆)

Coming to the update now, totally loved the jungle part...I was to comment on how good it was and then I read that you had tried the spooky stuff..Honestly, great writing!!! You pass with flying colors🥳

and ya I would like to read Jungle wala love😃..

Do well in your assignments and share the horror stuff if possible!!

awwliee is bar res nahi hua?

no problem!

i am personally very scared of forests and once i had to go trekking in a forest at night. since it was a mono walk we had to go alone. we cried n cried n finally our sir allowed us to go three people at a time so i described my feelings in the update as well!

glad you liked it

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: rads73937
WONDERFUL UPDATE.
BUT ITNA CHHOTA SA???
UPDATE A BIG PART SOON.
THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

thanks! and this is the normal size of my update

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: cutiesanya
they slept on top of each other omg!😉😉
the way zoe and asad cming close was vry cute
hw he tried to protect her and brang her close😳
what gona happen in hut?😆

yes they slept on each other 🤣

dont race ur gutter minds they can't do much! zoe is tired and sleepy right? 😆😆

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Great SS! Just caught up on all parts! Amazing rendition of one of the most memorable portion of QH! 👏 👏 Your story telling skill is awesome!

The best is yet to come! In your version, Asad is not as angry with Zoya and more attuned to his feelings. I shudder to think his reaction when she is buried alive. How will this Asad be able to walk away?

Guess I have to wait a while to find out. Good job!

Edited by webuser7 - 12 years ago